- Jan 13, 2020
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Nicely done, but a little more detail on both characters, particularly his cock, plus a little movement as well. Try to keep her hand in contact all the way thru the scene, & change the earrings for something smaller & fixed like studs or small rings.....Characters and Animation made with DAZ
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I really like this, but I do have a few comments. The perspective seems really off with the background. Like, for the angle of the camera, it doesn't feel right that the background could be so close and yet still "shorter" than she is. On a more personal note, I love the dress, it's super cute, but the boob pockets are really...really, distracting. I know you probably didn't design that asset, but it caught my eye immediately. No dress would fit that way, and it's totally a pet peeve of mine.
Thanks for the feedback! The building is quite a ways back behind her, so not sure. I could always angle the camera a little more (tilt), but when playing with the camera, I actually did this on purpose. It just caught my attention (for better or worse)I really like this, but I do have a few comments. The perspective seems really off with the background. Like, for the angle of the camera, it doesn't feel right that the background could be so close and yet still "shorter" than she is. On a more personal note, I love the dress, it's super cute, but the boob pockets are really...really, distracting. I know you probably didn't design that asset, but it caught my eye immediately. No dress would fit that way, and it's totally a pet peeve of mine.
That said, I think it's a really cute render!