3D-Daz Daz3d Art - Show Us Your DazSkill

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mastergobbo

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hi its my first time trying out 3d
would appreciate any advice or feedback ly bye

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Nice render, well done! I especially love the angle, and what you are not able to see ...
I would advice, let it run some more minutes, then let a little "denoising-magic" happen.
Other than that, I would try to put a little more "realism" into the fingers (especially right/foregroud hand), look at pics of people skating for an idea what i mean.
And lastly, I would let her look at something. In general, if you drive, ride a bike, ice-skate, or ... skate, in general, you don't want to look at where your feet are, you are likely to look where you want to go.
That is, if you want to give her a reason to look at directly where she is, then make it something "surprising"; for example let her be surprised at that gap in the rail, or something like that. Expression is the keyword. Let the viewer see what she's feeling. Joy in the moment, tenseness because she's doing this for the first time, etc.
 
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ntrvip

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Trying my hand at creating a visual novel. This is relatively short at this time, but I decided to bite the bullet and put something out there. I want to do a lot more work on this, but I figured, why wait? Think of this as a demo I guess... I wasn't going to bother releasing it, but I figured why not. Links for download below.

(And I want to work "fuzzy nerd princess" into this somehow! LOL, I still love that)
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Let me know what you think. I'm not the best at writing stories, so it's more like a cheap porn at this time I guess. I would like to come up with something a little better as I go though.
VERY GREAT start! So good, can't wait to see what's next, full support :love::devilish:
 
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