It's not bad at all. Nice scene and light.
But be a little more careful with her hair (poking into the body beneath the neck) and his facial expression has more of a "dead man"
Thanks for your comment.
This Hair is just a mess, not much Settings to edit it - and I need to learn more about how to do it manually.
And about him... well, he looks like this also in the Game - ROFL (Sorry, bad joke)
I already tried changing it a bit, but I guess I could have done even more/better - He stared at the Ceiling first time he got into the Pose
I really need to learn a lot more about DAZ - but it's fun and a nice Hobby for an Old Man like me