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my 5 cents of constructive critique... and, before I even begin, don't let it discourage you, the truth is, that my first ever render was a sorry mess compared.My First Time on Daz3d, here the result
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My First Time on Daz3d, here the result
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my 5 cents of constructive critique... and, before I even begin, don't let it discourage you, the truth is, that my first ever render was a sorry mess compared.
As far as lighting, and overall scene composition is concerned, nothing wrong there. Lighting is good enough, skin and environment isn't flat, shadows are present...
The one thing that strikes odd, is the expressions of the characters, or, rather, the lack of any dynamic expression. For a fucking scene, that a character looks at the camera, her expression is ... just empty. She could be fine with a subtle lip pucker/pout blend, and squaint eyes, looking straight ahead, or turning to look back at the man doing her, but, for her, staring at the camera, her facial expression should be more dynamic, more "porn photo-shoot" level. But, outside that, the rest is pretty decent
We should bump for someone to launch a "Kristen Stewart" expressions bundle... and have a field day laughing, while buyers try to figure out why the fuck nothing changesView attachment 480077
Neah..
In a sex scene or if the char it's not trying to show/talk directly to the viewer he/she should avoid watchin to the camera..
In this case she's having a good time with him.. like he said.. emotions are meh..
Nice one for a first time.. at least it's not a girl on the beach like many others..
Plus for no weird clippings or levitating.
All the best and hope you don't get upset or anything like that.. we've been there all of us now it's up to you if you wanna learn or progress.
Could work..We should bump for someone to launch a "Kristen Stewart" expressions bundle... and have a field day laughing, while buyers try to figure out why the fuck nothing changes
At least DT has some juicy bodyshapes to go with the Stewart palette of emotions... they just need a paperbag on the head, to hide that inhumanly complex array of expressionsCould work..
Others are making quite a lot of money from this (I think)
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As I said in DA, i love how Triss' boobs look here!!
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Gotta eat that fruit!The big banana lover#2
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HIRED!!Sexy secretary
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Oh boy!!, so hot!The children have finally gone home. Time to unwind a little...
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RED HOT!
Very Beautiful!!
New character in the rooster! not wante dto lewd her (yet) just wanted to play around with a more cell shading look hope you enjoy
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and?its not DAZ!