There's no better place to snooze than in the attic.
There's no better place to snooze than in the attic.
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Extremely delicious Chocolate!!
Asian Beauty!!
Cutie bookworm!
Oh yeah!, Mia is HOT!
Bikini or lingerie on sandals is so SEXY!!Sunbathing or Swimming?
I'll make a render based on your votes!
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Very Beautiful!
Simply Beautiful!
Go Mia!
Interesting gal!
...live together in perfect harmony
Lovely gals!
One of my fave trios of all time!
I LOVE Velma!
Hottie!!
BEAUTY!!
Amazing!
Damn right!
This is so HOT!!
Teachers always get me going!
Morning hotness!
VERY YUMMY!!
Damn!!
Amazingly Done!!
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One before the Xmas party. Now, if we'd be lucky enough and someone have booked a real-life performer like that.... ah, well, I can still hope!
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I'll give you my opinion first, and then a small bit of advice. Both may be wrong, but here it is. As is expected from any person new to Daz, your characters seem a bit generic and unremarkable, not very different from those in the hundreds of 0.1 versions that are released on this site. Your art is better than a good portion of the renders some people post here, but there doesn't seem to be a lot of effort visible in sculpting realistic bodies or faces, although I'm sure that you must have worked hard for each. The women all have the same doll-face expression, which doesn't generate much interest into the characters and their personalities.Hope everyone is having a great Christmas season! I am just seeking some male feedback on some female characters I created for a project - if I ever get free time - down the road. I have a lot of writing experience and have made very good income from my writing, but I am a complete newbie with DAZ and this kind of art/programming so learning. I have already written out an entire script (but it's in Final Draft not Renpy for now) with choices/endings by scenes/pictures and dialogue but I know it would take me a LONG time to draw it all out! (I think it's about 14000 pictures described so far)
I just wanted some male feedback on these characters (I know the art might not be great or with a lot of mistakes, just wondering about how they look to males as my perspective is different hee hee)...I am much more into personalities for now but have some ideas what looks would match the personalities, etc.
Project would involve eight female characters that I would consider either LI or major characters, and I have about 21 female designs - in terms of looks - for these eight so definitely not sold on anything yet. I am very set on males because I know exactly what I want there
My advice to you is that if you've already created a story for your game, it might make sense to wait, and first improve your Daz skills, like lighting, posing, composition, image quality etc, before releasing it, so that your game stands out from the crowd, and is not quickly forgotten.
Thanks! I deliberately tried to keep a neutral expression on all of them as test images (even the same pose) so not worried there. I'm also not too concerned about any commercial or critical response as I don't think I could ever make enough money from this kind of thing to ever replace my current income. I love my work too so even that is a factor against it. This is definitely for fun first and I appreciate the advice
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rarrr amazing! Merry Christmas to you!
Thanks for the feedback, I did keep neutral expressions and poses as they are just test images mostly but I really appreciate your response! And it's ok to say something is bad or flat out sucks, I'm not really sensitive about anything like that if it helps me learn.from most favorite to least favorite(*) here is my humble opinion.
1st. jstest6
2nd. jstest3
3rd. jstest00
4rth. jstest2
5fth. jstest5
6th. jstest8
7nth. jstest0(*)
not saying that they are bad but there are some details like cloth fit and pose(*) that with a few twicks would make them look better.
I didnt rate your intro image not because i dont like it but because you will only use it for your intro in which case it will suit its purpose perfectly.
ofcourse I understand its not the end result and I am lokking forward in seeing hwo they will all look after the postwork
p.s. there are people in this forum who do miraclces with these software and some of them are ladies. in my humble opinion, the "eye for beauty" has no gender, so it would be a pitty to exclude them from your research.
You are probably right about females so I feel silly now!
I'm even thinking long-term of just paying someone really good to kind of do post work on created images and even help here and there with images to speed things up. My other business besides writing is interior design so I feel a little better with framing pictures visually and my writing has been involved for screens (TV/movies) so another visual medium at least as well. Still, it's intimidating because while I can write incredibly fast - and so far at least reasonably well enough to make a good living - my art speed on the other hand is glacially slow! I'm kind of lucky for this possible project because one person is willing to fund me a decent chunk just to start it if they can create one character (one of those I displayed) but time is my biggest enemy and I am not sure I can ever be fast enough with limited time to finish something this difficult.
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OK, to me the third woman is far & away the best, because she looks realistic, which also makes her sexier. Those others are nice but tend towards the familiar stylised, flawless, model types.Hope everyone is having a great Christmas season! I am just seeking some male feedback on some female characters I created for a project - if I ever get free time - down the road. I have a lot of writing experience and have made very good income from my writing, but I am a complete newbie with DAZ and this kind of art/programming so learning. I have already written out an entire script (but it's in Final Draft not Renpy for now) with choices/endings by scenes/pictures and dialogue but I know it would take me a LONG time to draw it all out! (I think it's about 14000 pictures described so far)
I just wanted some male feedback on these characters (I know the art might not be great or with a lot of mistakes, just wondering about how they look to males as my perspective is different hee hee)...I am much more into personalities for now but have some ideas what looks would match the personalities, etc.
Project would involve eight female characters that I would consider either LI or major characters, and I have about 21 female designs - in terms of looks - for these eight so definitely not sold on anything yet. I am very set on males because I know exactly what I want there
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Some of my characters for my upcoming project currently named Secret Ingredient.
It's going to be a chapter based visual novel that follows a young man named Ethan. He's alone for the summer with his friends all out on vacation and his parents working out of the county. Left alone with just the house sitter, Riley, she suggests to him that he should try looking for a summer job to pass the time and cure his boredom. After some searching he manages to land a job at a local cafe where he seemingly finds love at first site.
Paige and Ethan
Paige
Ethan
Riley
Audrey
It's going to be a chapter based visual novel that follows a young man named Ethan. He's alone for the summer with his friends all out on vacation and his parents working out of the county. Left alone with just the house sitter, Riley, she suggests to him that he should try looking for a summer job to pass the time and cure his boredom. After some searching he manages to land a job at a local cafe where he seemingly finds love at first site.
Paige and Ethan
Paige
Ethan
Riley
Audrey
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A few Christmas renders, along with their respective game.
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First render since August... so little free time these days
I always thought a Medieval-era zombie apocalypse would be interesting.
I always thought a Medieval-era zombie apocalypse would be interesting.
