VN - Ren'Py - Completed - DeadMoon Survival [v1.0] [Hot Tomato]

  1. 5.00 star(s)

    seanconnery

    This game has gotten amazing.
    The graphics are great
    Tthe story has been unfolding more and more
    Tthe slow corruption of your mom and sister
    The amount of content

    Just hope the dev isn't going to stretch the game too far, but till will tell
  2. 2.00 star(s)

    connor1518

    Visually this VN is a mixed bag. Sometimes it looks fine, sometimes not so much. The Dev. uses the effect that looks similar to a photo negative that I've seen other HS VNs use effectively but it's not here. Also sometimes mom looks like an amazon next to son, especially early on.

    The problem with the story is that the MC has been living in this apocalyptic world for 6 years, he and sis going through adolescence and puberty yet when the story begins it's the first time that sexual desires appear. I don't buy it. By this time they should have already dealt with it and are living with whatever direction they decided on, yes or no to a physical relation.

    Mom's attitude on it is unrealistic and unreasonable. First she should have expected it, after all, who else are they going to look to when hormones flair up? There is no one one else. She had plenty of time to plan on how best to deal with it.

    Also her reaction is as if they were still living in a normal world, if they were her attitude would be more understandable. However when your life is under daily threat for an extended period of time your outlook on many things change. Things that once seemed important become less so, other thing that weren't important become more so. Add to it the reality of their world and her stance which was pretty puritanical made less sense. Basically she expected them to take a life long oath of celibacy and be fine with it.

    The Dev get's fairly wordy, a lot of narration could have been cut and they also often try to wax poetic unsuccessfully. The story take slow burn a little too far with both mom and sis often taking one step forward then one step back the next day. They spend a lot of time sitting on the fence leaning one way then back the other way.

    Mom's character goes from loving mom to harsh tyrant quickly and easily.

    The MC is weak and submissive, especially toward Juliet.

    Juliet is annoying on a good day, on a bad day she is plain hateful. She does have bigger balls than her brother though.

    There is potential, not sure how things play out as it seems other survivors maybe showing up which a part of me thinks would be unfortunate. It would be interesting to see how thing develop between the three if it remained just them. There also seems to be a supernatural vibe going on as opposed to just a survival story after a disaster which makes me leery.

    Cut down on the wordiness and ease up on the more than slow burn would improve things. It would also be interesting if the women at some point began to contemplate pregnancy and wrestled with the desire for children.
  3. 5.00 star(s)

    gtpman

    Really good game. Looking forward for the next version. It has a unique character. I didn't expect it to be that good. I think it has many unique (at least based on my experience) elements. For example the description of the gravity effect on Elisabeth's tits, the description of the liquids and other.

    I would suggest this game to anyone.

    Current version: 0.8
    Rating: 5/5
  4. 5.00 star(s)

    linkkkkk_

    This is a very enjoyable game for me to play because of the pacing, story, characters and the immersion the setting gives. The h-scenes are creative, fun and hot. The main selling point for me has got to be the story where it really does feel like you are secluded and among the last of humanity.

    Definitely recommend this game if you are here for the story and characters.
  5. 2.00 star(s)

    DirectXD1943

    I genuinely have zero clue how the people who write these reviews seriously think this is worthy of 5 stars. Perhaps they just have a very low bar, maybe they just see something I don't see, but it's just genuinely absurd.

    I'll say first off that visually it's great, so if that's the only priority then just skip through the game and enjoy the models. For some reason the developer really emphasises the use of music, despite the fact that it does very little to actually improve the experience. But hey, at least it's there. Spelling and grammar is generally pretty solid too, which is a plus.

    Now, the negatives. Whoever wrote this definitely thinks themselves as something of an auteur, because they manage to fill every scene with the lamest and most convoluted asides and additions I've seen in a while. The dev establishes the relationships between each character well, but when it comes to writing, they just can't write them like actual human beings. Lets have some examples:
    The MC using a line like "if only mankind could regain its splendour" in his mind. I mean seriously, who the fuck thinks like that.
    Or another when he's describing how his mom has woken up. A normal person would go "huh, mom's not in bed, guess she's making breakfast", but this Vulcan ass MC goes "Mom is no longer on her bed, maybe she's cooking breakfast. Let's go help her."
    I mean another example is meant to be banter between the mom and the MC, the mom will LITERALLY state "With joy! I will not refuse the help of a future master chef." Tell me what person you've ever met in your life has literally spoken their fucking feelings to you like that, unless they were Starfire from Teen Titans.
    I mean they literally use the word "depilate" more than once. Have you EVER in your life, heard someone use the word depilate? It's hair removal. But they use the word depilate as if literally anyone else in the word uses that in casual conversation.

    Every scene generally makes sense, it flows decently, but the dev can't write an actual human being to save their life. Every single scene is ruined by this. The fact most of it is just dialogue makes it so intensely awful to read.

    TL;DR 3/10. No one sounds like a human, and in a visual NOVEL, that's crap. Good visuals though.
  6. 5.00 star(s)

    dolfe67

    Review on version 0.7

    Game's fantastic. Not the best I played but definitely in my top.

    Writing is really good. Dialogues are well written. Story is interesting with some supernatural mystery, in addition to the zombies. The cast is limited for now, mainly the MC, his mother and his sister which allows to develop their characters properly. MC is not an overpowered jock from the start and grows slowly as a Hero, or maybe as an anti-hero depending on your choices. The lewd scenes are really arousing and very erotic.

    Renders are also great for that graphic engine. Skin textures are nice, and boobs deformation is yummy. There is a nice amount of renders and well detailed for the lewd scenes. Though there is some flaws in the lighting and the shadows. The real animations (in contrast to the imitation ones with a few renders) are not the best but passable.
  7. 4.00 star(s)

    kellsjunk

    The pace of this game is slow but in a good way. It pulls you in and makes the story more believable. The sex content is super hot if you're into incest. My only complaint is the current version ends right when things are getting good!

    Side note: I also have a bit of an issue with the vaginal sex tag as there doesn't appear to be any currently. I could be mistaken, but I don't remember any.
  8. 5.00 star(s)

    Tyhugg

    One of the best stories in a porn game I played.
    The slow progress is just perfection could be better if there were more animated sex scenes.
    If I could change one this other would be the generic looking protagonist.
  9. 5.00 star(s)

    LaraWolfe

    This story is simply amazing. It didn't take me long to get hooked, wanting to know the backstory and history of the characters, getting invested in the budding romantic and sexual relationships between them. The character models are not quite my taste but not bad and something I could easily overlook. MC is a troubled badass who just doesn't know it quite yet. When it comes to sexual content it is a slow burn, but for me I prefer it that way. Makes things feel more natural rather than going from 0 to 100 in the matter of a few scenes.

    I highly recommend this for anyone who still has an itch to scratch when it comes to zombie survival stories.
  10. 5.00 star(s)

    Summertime Nickname

    This game is truly an underrated masterpiece. It boasts impressive graphics and offers a range of choices. The dialogues are well-crafted and engaging - you want to read them and don't want to skip a word. The first time I played through the game, my heart was pounding, anticipating a plot twist.

    Special mention must be made of the sound - it is simply superb. It complements the gaming experience exceptionally well. The character progression is slow and thoughtful, making everything look incredibly realistic. This is one of the best games on this forum. The plot and delivery are truly unparalleled.

    Perhaps this is the best game I have ever played, period.
  11. 5.00 star(s)

    Overlord070

    - v0.7 -

    I'm really enjoying the story and the current mystery right now, the start of the VN is very reminiscent to an older unfinished VN that has a similar mom/sister/son combo in a zombie survival setting (won't name it due to it being against the rules I believe) but this VN has since branched out very nicely into its own while still keeping the things that made me a fan to begin with.

    This is a VN that 99% revolves around the incest kink and the scenes between characters are very hot, in my opinion it is up there with the best in this regard.

    The MC is an interesting one, at the very start I disliked his character. I thought he was going to be the whiny little bitch MC you sometimes see in these VNs but no, he has had real character development and is shaping up to be quite cool with the recent goings on but for people just starting out it can be a bit rough at the start since he is quite pathetic and whiny in my opinion.

    The sister is also a character that some might dislike at the start but I didn't find her that bad and she definitely grows on you as she also develops along side the MC.

    The mother is the glue keeping the family afloat in this setting and honestly the slow-burn in her morals being "corrupted" into liking the taboo acts more and more as it goes along is one of the reasons I enjoy this VN so much.

    Regarding options, the game has non avoidable incest (obviously lol) but you can avoid lesbian scenes between the mother and daughter if you don't like it. As someone that is usually not a big fan of this type of content in male protag VNs I can say it is really well done, the dev has real talent in making these types of scenes hot AF.

    Lastly there is optional NTR in the form of flashbacks but I frankly struggle to call it that in it's current form.

    To conclude this VN is amazing for anyone that loves incest content as it focuses almost solely on that type of content and does it amazingly well, the story ramps up in an interesting way and I personally cannot wait to find out what the mystery with the MC is.

    Looking forward to further updates and well done from the dev, it is worth supporting them.
  12. 5.00 star(s)

    EasyMuthaFuckinE

    V0.6

    Really awesome game with a gripping story and nice characters. I haven't played the latest update yet and don't think it will change my mind anyway.
    I really think there are a lot of Post apocalyptic games on this site. But this one has a kick ass story to stay relevant and good LI's to back it up.

    Story :

    The strongest factor of this game in my opinion, the twists and the cinematic moments are really good.

    MC :

    Initially i had my reservation on the MC because of his inability to take action but after few updates his growth has been good, so i have changed my opinion on this. Expecting the MC to show even more character growth in the future.

    LI's :

    Right now there are 2, who are pretty good, hope to see more good LI's in the future.

    Conclusion :

    I like for the fact that in this game the kinks that you don't want can be avoided pretty easily, like most of the people won't like the 3 letter word :p, they can just easily avoid it and there is even an indicator saying don't see it if you don't like it. Same with Lesbian, some people love it and some don't. The fact that the DEV is providing options for avoiding it is a big plus, a lotta games force Lesbian action upon the players which can't be avoided.
    So props to Hot Tomato for this.

    So final verdict. MASTA PIECE :cool:
  13. 3.00 star(s)

    GemKiller

    First off, I got misled, and it's been a downer of a day since. So, it's a decent VN, no doubt. I mean, I'm all for slow-burn stuff, and this one takes the cake when it comes to slow-burn. But here's the kicker: the intimate scenes? More like a tease-fest.
    I'm talkin' lousy handjobs, barely there blowjobs, and enough teasing to drive you up the wall. And the main character? Oh man, this guy's a total downer. Always doubted himself, self-loathing, the whole deal. The dude needs to man up, seriously.

    Now, let's chat about the characters. The sister? Ugh, can't stand her. Non-stop teasing 24/7. I think she should've been the MC with all that confidence. But hold on, the mom? She's somethin' else, and I'd be all in for pursuing her exclusively. Yeah, I said it!
    But here's where the real disappointment kicks in. Choices? Forget about it. You're on this one-way train with hardly any say in the matter. Except for the NTR stuff, but that's a whole different can of worms. And don't get me started on not having a say about the mom and sister fooling around. No choice there. How about forcing the sister and MC to get it on? Yup, no say in that either.
    Now, here's the twist. Despite all the letdowns, the author does hit the mark with emotions in some scenes. I'm talking about the mom raging like a storm and the sister breaking down. You can feel that emotion, and the author nails it. So, it's not all bad, I guess.
    But man, those zombie H scenes they removed? That's the real tragedy here. They were the highlight, and they just yanked 'em out. What a letdown.
    So yeah, that's the lowdown on this VN. Some good, a lot of bad, and a whole lotta frustration. Here's hoping the next one's a winner.
  14. 2.00 star(s)

    Kirigaya77

    version 0.6


    Here are some of my thoughts on the game so far:

    1. The story is not very good but not bad either.
    2. At first I thought the story would be more about survival, but in fact it only focused on sexuality, and many strange things happened about the story that ended in sexual scenes, making the story even weird and less interesting. In fact, the story isn't like a survival story in the apocalypse, but it's like a sexual fantasy in the apocalypse.
    3. I didn't like Juliet from the start, so I closed Lesbian Path and always skipped her lines, especially when she was talking to Elisabeth. I think I liked Juliet better when she was a kid, which wasn't annoying. What's more, the main character is stupid and only thinks using his dick and often manipulated by Juliet.
    4. I noticed something strange. When the main character's penis is erect, sometimes his penis can penetrate his pants, even though the zipper is closed. Was that thing a secret power belonging to the main character who rose during the apocalypse?
    5. Besides that, what kind of mother shows an earring left by her husband while naked in front of her son? Maybe because of the previous choice or what, and if so, it still feels weird. What's more, they even kissed after that.
    6. The story starts to get interesting when the three of them go out for a water problem instead of the previous story which only focused on sexual scenes. But the story gets less interesting when the main character returns to school after he gets bitten by a zombie, and he gets a handjob from Juliet and Elisabeth, which ends with a blowjob from Elisabeth and Juliet.


    Sorry for my bad English, and thanks for the game.
  15. 5.00 star(s)

    Kmannnnn

    A totally underrated game. I'm looking forward too the updates even more now.
    I really like the new way Hot tomato is taking the story in an new direction.
    The character relationship buildup has been slow but worth the wait.
    Looking forward to more updates from the developer!
  16. 2.00 star(s)

    TerseRito

    Game version 0.6 - Warning - possible spoilers
    A little story - an overview of how a game from a favorite turns into a hated one.

    Part 1. Global plot

    Forget about the zombie apocalypse, it is no longer in this game, now the zombies are static dummies, which you may not see for whole updates. They no longer carry any role or danger in the adult game, now it is only one screenshot with blood stains and the phrase game over. Zombies in the streets now appear on holidays and when it is convenient, the characters used to be afraid to step foot in the city, where is this fear now?

    I don't understand where the game is going. Now it's just corruption within the family, the family does to themselves what the zombies did to them (before the removal). Now the characters can be locked in shelter, let them corrupt each other to madness. Absolutely stupid illogical scenes that the developer himself did not want to introduce, he immediately introduces in the update after the removal of zombie scenes (0.5.5 - 0.6).

    Part 2. Zombies

    Even the situations that preceded the zombie scenes were more logical - fell into a trap / made a mistake. All the incest scenes of this update are for those who came to fap, and not read and understand what is happening. It is the same? Of course, you're just changing the models and what was the point of removing the zombie scenes then. Why claim a great story when you only make fap content.

    As a result, the developer screams about the great story that he wants to develop, but he does not. After all, everything around, except for the MC, was about zombies and their world, and the survival of the family inside this horror /becoming of MC, a lot of the plot was tied to this, and after their removal it disappeared. Now you can throw the characters on Mars and you will see that nothing will even change.

    Part 3. Atmosphere

    Personally, I lost any kind of apocalyptic atmosphere and feelings for the characters. And update 0.6 just finished me off right away. Spoilers ahead (the drama with the MC bite was flushed down the toilet, he is now an invulnerable superhero, hello Marvel). How to empathize with the character? he is all-powerful now. Its terrible. For the most part, the game has slipped into the usual anime story. If before that there was a drama with a lot of emotions and dangers, now it's an ordinary anime with a super strong MC.

    Part 4. Forum and its impact

    I needed to write about this as it affected the future of the game. But I'd better leave this part in the spoiler.

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    Final part.

    So, why 2 of 5 stars? Because versions (0.3 - 0.4) were 5 of 5; 0.5 - (4.5/5) didn't like the monster and sister scene, it was tough in places, but the plot and intrigue at the end was great, but now the game has fallen into a hole. There is only fap content, yes, it's well done, but it's not enough for me, because everything that I liked about this game is gone. It hurts.

    End of story.
  17. 3.00 star(s)

    Ass Fan

    My honest opinion, the game starts well, has an interesting premise, I've always liked survival games and I was hooked after playing. There are some inconsistencies such as the mother being 30 years old and the children being 18, and with basic mathematics it is possible to understand that she would have had to have sex since she was 11 years old, not to mention that the pandemic started 4 years ago, so the prota would have 14.
    It also has the point that the protagonist tries to be detachable or edgy and fails miserably, wants to act like a badass, but acts like a 9 year old, like, for example, when the guy can't stay 13 seconds on one leg, the guy has atrophied muscles? It's really meme how the prota seems to have a bigger ego than the dislike I created for him, not to mention phrases that lead to understand that they didn't know anything about the world, like asking about the things that existed before the virus, of two one, either they weren't born before the virus, which they can't be, or the creator manages to forget about the introduction itself and in this case it shows a huge lack of zeal for the game itself.
    Despite this, it has cool points such as the dynamics, although even in these it becomes little believable, which leaves something to be desired, making the interactions very artificial. As I said before, the fact that the protagonist acts like an adult who knows everything and another like a child who doesn't know anything about the world is ridiculous, frankly, I can't think of an 18-year-old human being who would act in such a way in such circumstances, yeah implement a loose, childish, impulsive, acts and thinks incoherently, the personality alone is already bad, narratively it is good, but it becomes a hateful character. I can speak of some positive points such as the setting which was very well done, it really conveyed a sense of danger, dystopia, paranoia. In the end, the game has many silly and even amateur errors, but overall it's really fun and gets to be quite involved.

    While writing I ended up forgetting points like the story being basically linear, which I particularly don't like and the lack of content on the part of the protagonist, making him a big liability, but this could be due to the story not being so rushed or this being the focus , I'm also not that big of a fan of passive protagonists...
    7/10

    Ah, one more thing that I really miss is the sexual scenes with the zombies, I don't know why it was removed from the game because these differentiated scenes were what made everything more interesting as possible, like the survivors, in addition to worrying about the bites, they should worry about not being molested or becoming sex toys for the excited zombies. unique with some different and cool things It's a shame that it was removed in my opinion it took half the fun out of the game but for those who are going to play have fun;)
  18. 4.00 star(s)

    -Yor-0728

    Let's be honest, the game so far is a bit boring... but it has a lot of potential. After reading the plot and how the world expands, you're left wanting more at the end.

    THE GOOD
    The story is pretty good and it's not the typical +18 game, that you start and they're already doing it. The development up to this point seems good to me. The characters are well designed in terms of their visuals, regarding their background, only the mother has one for now; I imagine that the author will add more background to the MC and the other protagonist later on.
    The +18 scenes, they have a context and it's not just sex for the sake of it, so for me this always carries good points. Visually with its setting and effects I think it looks great.


    THE BAD... or not?
    Particularly, it lacks content +18, of course I understand that only goes in its first versions but aja the goal of this game is a good story and +18. on the other hand, there are dialogues that feel very tiring but I understand that the creator wants to set the mood and give context to everything, the truth could be this a bad point or not, but in my opinion I reached a point where I got tired and put it on pause.

    It is a +18 zombie game, which has a good plot so far and I see that it has a lot of potential... for the moment I wouldn't play it at least for a long time or wait for more updates since one of the reasons I started playing it was because of its plot and the possible +18 scenes to develop. I think that before playing it check the updates and then think about if you play it now or wait a little longer.

    V 0.6

    Summary (SCORE: 7)
    o Character Design/Visual: 8/10
    o Background music/sound: 10/10
    o Plot: 8/10
    o Animation: 6/10
    o +18 Scenes: 4/10
    o Gameplay: 6/10
    o Interface: 7/10
  19. 5.00 star(s)

    raz100raz100

    Game is awesome. Would be nice if the zombie sex was still in there but it's not the main part of the game and it's just fine without it. The relationship between the MC, mom and sister with it's slow burn is great and very erotic.

    Keep up the good work! One of my favourite games on here.
  20. 1.00 star(s)

    humanstickobserver

    Rating it one star may be unfair, but when a game has a setting and plot that I should find so interesting, and fails so hard, I struggle to see past what bothers me to find the pros.

    First issue? The zombie apocalypse setting is a barely touched upon background piece for the MC to perv on and try to corrupt his mom and sister.
    It should be more integral into the plot.

    Second issue? The MC is a pathetic pervert who acts like a child, and who is thinking about nothing but sex... unless he's monologuing like a 17th century french philosopher. But the fact remains he is either acting like an obnoxious 12 year old without any self control, or he is talking and acting in a way that doesn't match his age, experience, and other behaviors.

    Third? The mother is awful. In 6 years of a zombie apocalypse, she hasn't taught the kids how to fight, how to scavenge, how to cook, how to anything. They basically sit around useless while she does everything (up until that is forced to change). While I can understand her need to keep her kids safe, they have spent the last third of their life in this world, and probably couldn't peel an apple is you have them an apple, a peeler, and a youtube video showing them how to do it. They are useless.

    And mom is worse. When you finally leave with her to gather and find another survivor, your mother demands you not to help her, as she's just going to die anyway. This is bad enough that it makes you wonder if your mother every found, and abandoned to die, other survivors over the years.

    She insists you three are probably the only people alive left in the world, and yet when she gets sick, she berates the MC for leaving to find medicine, even saying he shouldn't have risked it, even if she died. This is especially insane as, with her refusal to teach them anything, if she died, they'd be alone and unable to function without her, and would either have to leave and risk it all anyhow, or just stay there and die themselves.

    She wants to focus on their education, but insists that there are probably no other survivors anyhow. She seems to believe you are the last three people on earth. She does not look for survivors, when some are found, she is unwilling to risk helping them in any way and insists they should be left to die, and does not think anyone is ever going to come to rescue them. So, what happens if there are three people left alive in the world, one woman and two men, and they seem adamant to keep living?
    They need to reproduce at some point.
    Look, in that environment, you either realize there is no endgame, and when you die it is all over anyhow, so you lay down and die... or you try to build back, and if you think you three are all that are left, rebuilding includes reproducing. The fact she is so upset and caught up on incest is actually laughable based on her view of the world.

    Fourth, which ties into three? Her frustration at her son and daughter's sexual frustration, curiosity, and experimenting with each other. For six years, basically all of puberty, teen years, and into adulthood, it has been the three of them and nothing and no one else. The could both be butt ugly and it doesn't change the fact they are the only women in the world as far as MC knows. It is actually NOT weird for him to fixate any sexual interest he has in them (even if MC's inner dialog on the issue is obnoxious and his behavior shows such a lack of self control that it is pathetic).

    Fifth? No sandbox. Sandbox ruins most games, but in this setting, there is room for it. Train fighting and stamina. Grow food. Train fighting. Clean around the school. Scout. Item management. Resource management. This is a setting where these things actually make sense and could be used to make the world setting less of a backdrop and more a part of the plot. Mom taking care of everything and a whiney MC who is sad his dick is hard and the girls won't let him talk them into getting him off are fucking TERRIBLE elements to base 90% of what is happening in a zombie horror scenario on.

    Sixth? Dialog is either over long, cringy, or both. I'm a wordy fucker. I play for plot as well as porn. I don't mind reading. But between the cringe levels and how long they drone on sometimes, I'm just skipping a lot of writing.

    Seventh? Whenever it seems like the plot will advance, everything goes back to the MC and his quest to get his cock wet. Much of the time, whenever there is room for a choice, there is none and the MC will just act cringy.

    Eighth? In a story of exploring hidden desires, pushing sexual boundaries, and making due with what is around you in a world without other people? Your sister's story, her interactions with mom, and with you, are much better paced, written, and shown, then the MCs own. Hell, I'd go as far as to say that the game would be better suited with HER as the MC, on a quest to learn to survive, while learning more about pleasure and being a woman with her mother, and seeking to maintain a dependent closeness, with a plan to continue the human race, with her brother. As annoying as she can be at times, she is the best written, most realistic, and most relatable character in the game.

    So, pros?
    The CG is decent. As is the english. What little focus is given to state of the world makes the player curious as to what else happens. The sister is a decent character. The lesbian content of sis trying to figure things out with mom are not only hot, but are the best paced, and best written, elements of the game.


    This game needs a drastic re-write, to reduce cringe, make the MC have some semblance of self control (while still developing understandable sexual/romantic feelings), and to make the zombie apocalypse aspect of the story part of the actual story. Mom needs to be less overbearing and to act less fucking stupid, and the kids need to know at least SOMETHING.

    Too many aspects of the game, focusing on the character's behavior after surviving like this for 6 years, most especially Mom's and the MC's, are so far outside the realm of reasonable that you can not simply accept it via suspension of disbelief. Suspension of disbelief requires things to still be grounded in reality enough that you can let go and allow yourself to enjoy the story, but when some things are too far beyond the pale, you can't suspend that disbelief and just accept it.