VN Ren'Py Abandoned Dean's Life [v0.1 Alpha] [bellatrixs]

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DA22

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Thank you for your comment. This was alpha version. I just wanted to introduce my story. Trust me, in the next version everything will become clear.
Not to be an asshole about it, but some people are very sensitive on who a potential or main LI have sex with and for that it does not really has to conform to definition three letter tag or not. :p This game in introduction has the step mother shown active with various people even if one is a dream of MC and if that is the way you want to take your game and have her active with many, that is great. Shows clearly what players can expect, if the intention is very romantic MC story all about MC in future that is different though and well the start is not great.

Just make sure you are consistent with where you want to take the game and good luck and have fun developing it. :)
 

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You don't need to add [player_name] as a sentence start

"[player_name]" "Should I be doing this?"
"[player_name]" "It feels so weird to watch this... "
"[player_name]" "But OMG! She is so fucking hot! "
"[player_name]" "There's no way I can miss this"


You only need to put e

e "Should I be doing this?"
e "It feels so weird to watch this... "
e "But OMG! She is so fucking hot! "
e "There's no way I can miss this"


Due to this

define e = Character("[player_name]")

However, you do need to change these

"[player_name]" "What are you thinking Dean?"
"[player_name]" "Think dean, think!"
"Cassandra" "Oh Dean, can I ask you something?"


To these

e "What are you thinking [player_name]?"
e "Think [player_name], think!"
"Cassandra" "Oh [player_name], can I ask you something?"


As you've wrote Dean and not [player_name]
 
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Not to be an asshole about it, but some people are very sensitive on who a potential or main LI have sex with and for that it does not really has to conform to definition three letter tag or not. :p This game in introduction has the step mother shown active with various people even if one is a dream of MC and if that is the way you want to take your game and have her active with many, that is great. Shows clearly what players can expect, if the intention is very romantic MC story all about MC in future that is different though and well the start is not great.

Just make sure you are consistent with where you want to take the game and good luck and have fun developing it. :)
Well, I gave this a try out of curiosity and it looks like a revenge story and not a romance one, at least when it comes to the stepmother. Also the dev apparently wanted to shove as many tags with sexual content as possible in a 10' gameplay and that made the MC look more like a voyeur cuck than an inexperienced guy who found his stepmom hot, which I guess was the dev's intention. It also needs a "kinetic novel" tag, since there aren't any choices in the game.

Anyway, I didn't like the MC so I don't think I'll play any further updates, but I want to wish the dev good luck as well.

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Well she is a mega hoe not very surprised plus the dad was a mega cuck man. Like who the hell would be understanding about there partner cheating lets hope we can get revenge on the both of them bitches. plus not a fan that there are no choices.
 
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You don't need to add [player_name] as a sentence start

"[player_name]" "Should I be doing this?"
"[player_name]" "It feels so weird to watch this... "
"[player_name]" "But OMG! She is so fucking hot! "
"[player_name]" "There's no way I can miss this"


You only need to put e

e "Should I be doing this?"
e "It feels so weird to watch this... "
e "But OMG! She is so fucking hot! "
e "There's no way I can miss this"


Due to this

define e = Character("[player_name]")

However, you do need to change these

"[player_name]" "What are you thinking Dean?"
"[player_name]" "Think dean, think!"
"Cassandra" "Oh Dean, can I ask you something?"


To these

e "What are you thinking [player_name]?"
e "Think [player_name], think!"
"Cassandra" "Oh [player_name], can I ask you something?"


As you've wrote Dean and not [player_name]
Thank you so much! This was my first time using ren'py. I am still learning it. Thank you for the help.
 
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Jimayo

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No, it's not an opinion of what it should be, it's a fact. The actual definition. If the site said white is actually black. Would you agree with that too? The only thing it proves is the site lack diversity of tags.
Your complaint was that he shouldn't be using the tag, the site defines what tags for what content. So your opinion on whether or not he should be using that tag is fucking irrelevant. Also legal definitions of incest vary from country to country. In some countries step-relations are legally defined as incest.
 
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Which is irrelevant to his complaint as to whether the creator of the game should be using the tag. The site decides what tags belong to what content. Not us.
The definition the site use in that regard, it still wrong. Or you the type that order chocolate and get given vanilla, then accept the vanilla as being chocolate because someone say it is?
 
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I've attached an edited version of your script to show you how it should normally look.

I've tweaked the characters and also added a new one:

define dev = Character("Bellatrixs")
define d = Character("[player_name]")
define c = Character("Cassandra")
define dad = Character("Dad")
 

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The definition the site use in that regard, it still wrong. Or you the type that order chocolate and get given vanilla, then accept the vanilla as being chocolate because someone say it is?
Also legal definitions of incest vary from country to country. In some countries step-relations are legally defined as incest. And yes as to whether or not the game should be tagged as incest, the only thing that matters is whether the site defines it as incest or not. Do you go on pornhub and complain about step-relationship porn being tagged as incest as well?
 

Joshua Tree

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Also legal definitions of incest vary from country to country. In some countries step-relations are legally defined as incest. And yes as to whether or not the game should be tagged as incest, the only thing that matters is whether the site defines it as incest or not. Do you go on pornhub and complain about step-relationship porn being tagged as incest as well?
Go to pornhub and search on incest and see how much you find? You won't find any because they are not allowed to use such tags at all. You can search on steph whatever and get results. Not the same. Find me laws in any country where steph siblings not allowed to get married? You can't, as they not related by blood they can. At least bring the recites if you make claims.

Over time you will have people keep ask about where is the incest in game, and there is none by that definition. End of the day, the issue is lack of diversity when it come to certain tags. If I call you a monkey, and define you as a monkey. Will you accept you are a monkey because I define you as one? Or you still a human? Another issue is the creator use a tag that will draw people to his game for a certain fetish and then not deliver on it, but that will be his headache.
 
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