- Dec 6, 2018
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sometimes it feels like cres has adhd. he wants to draw this girl, and then he moves onto another, and then another, and another, until he has a bloated cast and no coherency between them.Do the comics even have a coherent plot?
Every time it feels like i'm getting a handle of who these characters are or what the scene is supposed to be, it cuts to completely diffrent people doing something else.
Maybe if I were reading it hosted on a proper website, it's be easier, but I only see their stuff on Hentai Foundry, which doesn't exactly have a great way to read the story in sequence.
... not that I actually care too. It's too long and I only got interested for the porn anyway.
I really do think a porn-game is the best medium for them, because it keeps the narrative short and contained, and the cast fairly small.
They just... can't seem to actually make one.
Minori, Ferania, Feranias sister (shes the VILLAIN and i cant even remember her damn name), and a few side characters that fall out of focus once theyre no longer needed is all they needed to do.
There is a plot. Too many plots. Cres is trying to juggle several at once instead of splitting them up into arcs. All he should be focusing on right now is capturing the green haired bitch. He can move on from there...
Shit, Dangerzone one is another fap bait webcomic, and while its not good its still leagues better than this.
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