- Apr 5, 2020
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Harem fans are really intense... but oh well, good update and game overall, make your story how you want, good luck. 
This is not really something you see in harem games because no one likes to constantly be babysitting his girls to avoid them getting fucked/groped/etc by some dipshit. That is a plot that fits more for a ntr game where you need to put a leash on the hoes so they don't fuck everything that moves.Giving the MC the ability to fight against the evil forces is something I don't actually see on the things I consume.
Harem is one dude, several women. It's very simple, so MC lusting after married women: good. Another random NPC lusting after MC's romantic targets: not good, for obvious reasons.As for his personality I didn't think it would cause that much of a hustle given the fact that the MC will get involved with clearly married women and clearly also lusts for them.
Actually all NTR and Swinging stuff is avoidable... even better, you are reacting/playing on quick time events to WIN for HAREM/VANILLA, I don't see how there can be any complains. Lucas are kinda simple friend of MC, nothing awful to be sure.Hi. (Sorry for my bad english)
Thanks for the criticism. Since I'm still learning how to do this, the comments have been quite elucidating.
Here are some thoughts on the update after what I read:
Script: I've seen good tips, and even someone complimenting my code(I hope you are not just playing with my feelings because this is the first time I do it and I feel like an ape trying to make something that at least works.).
I'll make sure to use what I read.
Visual: I've seen criticism on the excessive black screens, I'll make sure to fill them up.
Story: I see that almost no one liked Lucas and his personality and I may have gone a bit too far on this. On his groping scene I thought that bit to be kind of a downside on failing the improvised "quick time event", giving the MC the ability to fight against the evil forces is something I don't actually see on the things I consume. As for his personality I didn't think it would cause that much of a hustle given the fact that the MC will get involved with clearly married women and clearly also lusts for them, I wouldn't mind it personally, but I think I might understand now what you guys want to see when you see a harem tag on it.
I won't obliterate the character out of existence because his landlady won't escape the action and he will be the bridge to it, but I will make sure to cut that part and tone his personality to something more pleasant.
Structure: I might rework that part on the school to add more content before we get on the part where this update end and the next will start. I was in a hurry to just post something and I feel like it was rushed.
Don't give up on me, folks!![]()
I would recommend going to the Latest Updates page and filtering it with "harem" and "milf" tags, and go from there. Plenty of games out there similar to this one.Anyone can recommend similar games, thank you.
The game is abandoned, the developer has escaped.Nice to see a new dev embracing the criticism and giving transparent feedback on it, wish others would also do the same. This game has potential, wishing the dev good luck the rest of the way!