- Apr 5, 2020
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Harem fans are really intense... but oh well, good update and game overall, make your story how you want, good luck. 
- Thread starter Hyperion3D
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This is not really something you see in harem games because no one likes to constantly be babysitting his girls to avoid them getting fucked/groped/etc by some dipshit. That is a plot that fits more for a ntr game where you need to put a leash on the hoes so they don't fuck everything that moves.
Harem is one dude, several women. It's very simple, so MC lusting after married women: good. Another random NPC lusting after MC's romantic targets: not good, for obvious reasons.
Now, always do the game that you want, sure.
But also, dont waste everyone's time by not being clear on what you are trying to deliver. You tried to present this as a harem game then all of a sudden some new NPC is lusting after the women and has renders groping and naked with them. It is not what people were expecting.
So is this game going to have other male( or female) characters lusting after, or being showed having intimacy with the love interests of the MC?
Call it ntr, sharing, swinging, voyeur, dreams, imagination, etc. Just let us know if that's the case so we know what to expect from the game or decide if we even want to follow it.
- Apr 30, 2017
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Actually all NTR and Swinging stuff is avoidable... even better, you are reacting/playing on quick time events to WIN for HAREM/VANILLA, I don't see how there can be any complains. Lucas are kinda simple friend of MC, nothing awful to be sure.Hi. (Sorry for my bad english)
Thanks for the criticism. Since I'm still learning how to do this, the comments have been quite elucidating.
Here are some thoughts on the update after what I read:
Script: I've seen good tips, and even someone complimenting my code(I hope you are not just playing with my feelings because this is the first time I do it and I feel like an ape trying to make something that at least works.).
I'll make sure to use what I read.
Visual: I've seen criticism on the excessive black screens, I'll make sure to fill them up.
Story: I see that almost no one liked Lucas and his personality and I may have gone a bit too far on this. On his groping scene I thought that bit to be kind of a downside on failing the improvised "quick time event", giving the MC the ability to fight against the evil forces is something I don't actually see on the things I consume. As for his personality I didn't think it would cause that much of a hustle given the fact that the MC will get involved with clearly married women and clearly also lusts for them, I wouldn't mind it personally, but I think I might understand now what you guys want to see when you see a harem tag on it.
I won't obliterate the character out of existence because his landlady won't escape the action and he will be the bridge to it, but I will make sure to cut that part and tone his personality to something more pleasant.
Structure: I might rework that part on the school to add more content before we get on the part where this update end and the next will start. I was in a hurry to just post something and I feel like it was rushed.
Don't give up on me, folks!
My only reccomendation to you is to develop it to your heart content - if you will make something you don't want to, and hoping for some cash, losing the inspiration = You will end up without great work, and without great cash
If you want to give some guys the content they want - you can add to some tiers on your patreon like (Wallpaper/Images/Short pack of images) thing, with different genre's, settle it the way suitable for you
But regarding the main thing you should do what you want, there's always will be a total fans, and total haters, there's no way to avoid it unfortunately.
The game is great on my opinion, totally worth for MILF lovers, I wish you luck and inspiration
