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I'm really not a fan of "short sons" of "giant mothers".
The VERY small amount of content is also a problem, it wouldn't be if it was of quality, but, short of content of low quality, is a bit too much.
Also, the whole setup is... well... overplayed. On the character creation the tit size slider got stuck on max. Height slider is Max for almost everyone except the almost "shota" MC.
I'll stay away, because it doesn't look like this is going to go anywhere...
Peace
The VERY small amount of content is also a problem, it wouldn't be if it was of quality, but, short of content of low quality, is a bit too much.
Also, the whole setup is... well... overplayed. On the character creation the tit size slider got stuck on max. Height slider is Max for almost everyone except the almost "shota" MC.
I'll stay away, because it doesn't look like this is going to go anywhere...
Peace
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The only bad part so far is the pervy friend. And we can stop him from hugging our mom. As long as the dev tones down the creepy friend, the rest was ok. Oh, and the blank screens with just text, those need to stop. We even have a hint of netori starting
I left a comment on the devs patreon that no one likes the "friend "
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Hi. (Sorry for my bad english)
Thanks for the criticism. Since I'm still learning how to do this, the comments have been quite elucidating.
Here are some thoughts on the update after what I read:
Script: I've seen good tips, and even someone complimenting my code(I hope you are not just playing with my feelings because this is the first time I do it and I feel like an ape trying to make something that at least works.).
I'll make sure to use what I read.
Visual: I've seen criticism on the excessive black screens, I'll make sure to fill them up.
Story: I see that almost no one liked Lucas and his personality and I may have gone a bit too far on this. On his groping scene I thought that bit to be kind of a downside on failing the improvised "quick time event", giving the MC the ability to fight against the evil forces is something I don't actually see on the things I consume. As for his personality I didn't think it would cause that much of a hustle given the fact that the MC will get involved with clearly married women and clearly also lusts for them, I wouldn't mind it personally, but I think I might understand now what you guys want to see when you see a harem tag on it.
I won't obliterate the character out of existence because his landlady won't escape the action and he will be the bridge to it, but I will make sure to cut that part and tone his personality to something more pleasant.
Structure: I might rework that part on the school to add more content before we get on the part where this update end and the next will start. I was in a hurry to just post something and I feel like it was rushed.
Don't give up on me, folks!
Thanks for the criticism. Since I'm still learning how to do this, the comments have been quite elucidating.
Here are some thoughts on the update after what I read:
Script: I've seen good tips, and even someone complimenting my code(I hope you are not just playing with my feelings because this is the first time I do it and I feel like an ape trying to make something that at least works.).
I'll make sure to use what I read.
Visual: I've seen criticism on the excessive black screens, I'll make sure to fill them up.
Story: I see that almost no one liked Lucas and his personality and I may have gone a bit too far on this. On his groping scene I thought that bit to be kind of a downside on failing the improvised "quick time event", giving the MC the ability to fight against the evil forces is something I don't actually see on the things I consume. As for his personality I didn't think it would cause that much of a hustle given the fact that the MC will get involved with clearly married women and clearly also lusts for them, I wouldn't mind it personally, but I think I might understand now what you guys want to see when you see a harem tag on it.
I won't obliterate the character out of existence because his landlady won't escape the action and he will be the bridge to it, but I will make sure to cut that part and tone his personality to something more pleasant.
Structure: I might rework that part on the school to add more content before we get on the part where this update end and the next will start. I was in a hurry to just post something and I feel like it was rushed.
Don't give up on me, folks!
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so you are saying we get a gun and get to shoot Lucas?
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Why do people keep trying to mix NTR and harem, that shit never works?
I have a few questions.Hi. (Sorry for my bad english)
Thanks for the criticism. Since I'm still learning how to do this, the comments have been quite elucidating.
Here are some thoughts on the update after what I read:
Script: I've seen good tips, and even someone complimenting my code(I hope you are not just playing with my feelings because this is the first time I do it and I feel like an ape trying to make something that at least works.).
I'll make sure to use what I read.
Visual: I've seen criticism on the excessive black screens, I'll make sure to fill them up.
Story: I see that almost no one liked Lucas and his personality and I may have gone a bit too far on this. On his groping scene I thought that bit to be kind of a downside on failing the improvised "quick time event", giving the MC the ability to fight against the evil forces is something I don't actually see on the things I consume. As for his personality I didn't think it would cause that much of a hustle given the fact that the MC will get involved with clearly married women and clearly also lusts for them, I wouldn't mind it personally, but I think I might understand now what you guys want to see when you see a harem tag on it.
I won't obliterate the character out of existence because his landlady won't escape the action and he will be the bridge to it, but I will make sure to cut that part and tone his personality to something more pleasant.
Structure: I might rework that part on the school to add more content before we get on the part where this update end and the next will start. I was in a hurry to just post anything and I feel like it was rushed.
Don't give up on me, folks!
1. You’re deleting the scene with Lucas right? The part with him groping and imagining mom naked?
2. Are you planning on having other men lusting after your girls?
3. Will you have other guys fucking the girls even married ones? So will you show any characters except MC having sex with others?
4. What do you mean by “won’t escape the action? Does that mean Lucas will lust/fuck after his mom no matter what? Or that MC will get the mom no matter what?
5. I don’t mind lesbian sex that much, but others do, will you make it avoidable if you add it?
Answering these questions will be good to make your audience more aware of your game.
Also, having black screens isn’t bad. Just excessive ones. From what I hear, it might have been excessive.
In my game I use them when I transition from scene to scene and if I don’t have an image and I have my character close his eyes. It’s a good effect
By the way, try to roll with the punches. People will say things here cause they are passionate. Always look positively and don’t be afraid of taking time away from the criticism to catch a breath. When you’re feeling good again, then you can come back.
the best thing you can do is learn and improve. If you ever have questions, like if you think people might be upset about a scene, you can ask me or other people on this thread. We always want people to succeed, so do your best
Have a good day and good luck!
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#4 he means mc will get Lucas's mom for himself. Lucas is the bridge to get Lucas's mom for the mc, that's why he is going to tone down Lucas's personality and not delete himI have a few questions.
1. You’re deleting the scene with Lucas right? The part with him groping and imagining mom naked?
2. Are you planning on having other men lusting after your girls?
3. Will you have other guys fucking the girls even married ones? So will you show any characters except MC having sex with others?
4. What do you mean by “won’t escape the action? Does that mean Lucas will lust/fuck after his mom no matter what? Or that MC will get the mom no matter what?
5. I don’t mind lesbian sex that much, but others do, will you make it avoidable if you add it?
Answering these questions will be good to make your audience more aware of your game.
Also, having black screens isn’t bad. Just excessive ones. From what I hear, it might have been excessive.
In my game I use them when I transition from scene to scene and if I don’t have an image and I have my character close his eyes. It’s a good effect
By the way, try to roll with the punches. People will say things here cause they are passionate. Always look positively and don’t be afraid of taking time away from the criticism to catch a breath. When you’re feeling good again, then you can come back.
the best thing you can do is learn and improve. If you ever have questions, like if you think people might be upset about a scene, you can ask me or other people on this thread. We always want people to succeed, so do your best
Have a good day and good luck!
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please tell me the ntr in the game can be avoid or not ? THX
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You can intervene and the friend doesn't hug your mom. Looks like the dev is cutting the whole scene out and toning down the pervy friend
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Finally had time to try the game and the only thing im going to say is:
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