The whole script is quite awkward to read, and could use some rewrites to sound both more natural, and more enticing. Like for instance at one point a reference is made to 'smelling like a WC', WC means Water Closet and is a european term for a bathroom. Since the game for the most part seems to be leaning into being part of the fallout setting and not just mimicking it, you'd use the term 'toilet' or to spice up the dialogue 'shitter' instead (Americans don't use the term Water Closet, and in fact the majority would have no idea what the phrase means).
I otherwise quite like it, the art's good, it's relatively simple and it is committing to the fallout theming. So I think the team should spend some focus cleaning up the script so it can read more naturally.