Well, I just played the new version and I can't believe your ability to draw. Man, the rain scene is BEAUTIFUL. The other ones were great too, but that one? Uf. If you draw that since the last update, congrats on you man, you deserve it.
Now, a few things I notice and I think you should check.
I didn't expect the new icons to work, but they do, they open the store, tho. Just letting u know if it's a bug or something. Another thing it may be a bug it's that it's night outside, but sometimes when I check the phone (just checking, not doing some quest), It's sunny or raining just because. If you check that, you could maybe do like Witch Trainer and make that you could only do one thing before time passes or something like that.
Going back to the art stuff, you should try to make some background for some scenes. (I won't say which for spoilers, but you know)
Another thing it's some dialogs of the game, there's a typo in a few of them (like "here" when it's meant to say "her", little things like that).
And last thing, I personally think that Bella should have an introduction event for herself instead of just appear at the end of the Love Route of Hermione. Maybe you could add her to your cellphone and have that scene there. I don't know.
I'm sorry if this is way to long, just thought you would like all the opinions I've got.
Keep up the good work, man. Looking forward the next update.