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There's something wrong with the way exposure is handled at the lake. Looking into it.
Dunno if that was intended:
I could strip on the shore, go into the water and swim but couldn't get back to shore without donning some plants.
 

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You play as a young student living at an orphanage. You must make some quick cash to keep living at the orphanage or bad things happen. *Most fetishes are optional.​

Thread Updated: 2019-07-22
Release Date: 2019-07-22
Developer: Vrelnir -
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Version: 0.2.1.0
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Language: English
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Hi :3 I really felt in love with this game I'm from Germany :3 I would love to translate the game in German. With your pleasing I could do that for you.
Greetings keep going you're doing an amazing job ❤
 

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iball I think the better you have the control bar the bigger the trauma will fall. so do the therapy with robin or whatever when your control is the highest.
So I spent 24+ hours at the pub whoring myself and my trauma dropped by like 10ish%. My control is maxxed and even doing stuff with Robin does less than 5% trauma drop. When I went to school, I noticed my stats went up enough so I can masturbate in class now. I figured you can Masturbate and then stop, then do it again. My trauma dropped to 20% after a day of doing this.

I really really really don't get it. A) from a gameplay perspective why doing acts that say (-trauma) do less trauma reduction than acts that do not mention it. and B) from a realistic perspective, how does whoring myself and masturbating in class drop my trauma?

I also want to state to everyone that I am really enjoying this game. I am just at a point where I was so laser focused at doing something I didn't notice my trauma got so high and it made it difficult for me to continue for a bit.
 

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Hi :3 I really felt in love with this game I'm from Germany :3 I would love to translate the game in German. With your pleasing I could do that for you.
Greetings keep going you're doing an amazing job ❤
Try contacting the developer here:
Developer: Vrelnir -
 

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So I spent 24+ hours at the pub whoring myself and my trauma dropped by like 10ish%. My control is maxxed and even doing stuff with Robin does less than 5% trauma drop. When I went to school, I noticed my stats went up enough so I can masturbate in class now. I figured you can Masturbate and then stop, then do it again. My trauma dropped to 20% after a day of doing this.

I really really really don't get it. A) from a gameplay perspective why doing acts that say (-trauma) do less trauma reduction than acts that do not mention it. and B) from a realistic perspective, how does whoring myself and masturbating in class drop my trauma?

I also want to state to everyone that I am really enjoying this game. I am just at a point where I was so laser focused at doing something I didn't notice my trauma got so high and it made it difficult for me to continue for a bit.
Lol , if you don't know, lowering trauma is HARD, that is the thing actually, remember MC mental health depends on your actions and how to make him stay sane in this vicious world of depravity. My advise for you is to better keep a save in case you get heavy trauma, things that grant heavy trauma is rape that get to penetrate the MC in any of his tender parts, worst thing out there are gang bangs and tentacle monsters (if you don't know how to fight them). you can get gang bang if Whitney takes you to the docks, if you dance in the brothel and audience get carnal desire over MC and tentacle monsters are at the sea, though one is protecting the lichen in the lake.

you have to commit to keep trauma in the blue zone or have no trauma at all, once you are in danger zone "purple trauma" the game really gets dangerous for MC, you have only two options, load a previous save or grind your way out the danger zone... If your trauma gets to red (i have never gone there) you end up in the asylum, i don't know what happen there because have never been send there. I guess you do therapy till you are okay to leave?

If you are like me you will do it the hard way, Stop doing any grinding and take therapy with Robin (best), Doreen (random chance if you show up in her English class drench in cum, after this she will be available for therapy will be every day at 4PM in her house) and Dr. Harper (faint wile you are on the streets of the town, random chance you end in the hospital, but the catch here is that if you have a criminal record, police will take you to the pillory and that will increase trauma in most of the cases, after this therapy session will be ONLY on Fridays at 5PM). your daily activities should be only going to school and back (with Robin) and try to keep stress low too, because if you go to sleep with stress in purple, MC will wake up with no stress but a lot of trauma. Once you are back at the safe zone in trauma (blue) you can continue the game.

Hope it helps! if you don't have patience with this game your MC you will end in asylum, hospital or dead! ...naah kidding MC don't die, he is immortal like a highlander. he don't die even not knowing how to swim and rape by cathulu in the ocean.
 
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How does the Awe mechanic while dancing work? I can't seem to raise it even at max dancing skill, because no session lasts longer than about 5 turns before people rush the stage, even if I do nothing but spam 'Cool Dance' over and over.

Also, I'd like it if we could buy multiples of a clothing item in one go. (like five black school shirts at once)

I'd like to see more changing-room stuff at school Preferably even without cross-dressing.
You can play a girl being harassed by other girls all day, but when the time comes to get naked, suddenly everyone behaves? kinda feels like there's stuff missing.

I'd also like to see a... if not story event, then at least fluff event about futas. Something that shows that they exist in-unverse outside of them attacking you.
Robin talking about it, maybe, or a short futa-girl being bullied by cheerleaders in the showers.
Hmm, a sex-harassment event where the PC is a bystander rather than the target would be pretty interesting.

I imagine the same sort of scene could be repeated on the male side, but I've never ran a world where boys with pussies existed.
 
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How does the Awe mechanic while dancing work? I can't seem to raise it even at max dancing skill, because no session lasts longer than about 5 turns before people rush the stage, even if I do nothing but spam 'Cool Dance' over and over.

Also, I'd like it if we could buy multiples of a clothing item in one go. (like five black school shirts at once)

I'd like to see more changing-room stuff at school Preferably even without cross-dressing.
You can play a girl being harassed by other girls all day, but when the time comes to get naked, suddenly everyone behaves? kinda feels like there's stuff missing.

I'd also like to see a... if not story event, then at least fluff event about futas. Something that shows that they exist in-unverse outside of them attacking you.
Robin talking about it, maybe, or a short futa-girl being bullied by cheerleaders in the showers.
Hmm, a sex-harassment event where the PC is a bystander rather than the target would be pretty interesting.

I imagine the same sort of scene could be repeated on the male side, but I've never ran a world where boys with pussies existed.
Changing room stuff is coming, one day. I greatly look forward to this, especially since it's kind of absurd that you'd never get caught crossdressing in the locker rooms
 

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How does the Awe mechanic while dancing work? I can't seem to raise it even at max dancing skill, because no session lasts longer than about 5 turns before people rush the stage, even if I do nothing but spam 'Cool Dance' over and over.
You can rise awe by stripping, don't know any other methods and no idea what it does though.
 
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Hmm, a sex-harassment event where the PC is a bystander rather than the target would be pretty interesting.
Theres an event kinda like this. One is during the middle of the night when youre walking around naked and the other is when you flee from the sex dungeon area. The former is a bit more fleshed out while the latter is more of just a passing remark that the PC notices.
 

Vrelnir

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Is this a bug or something when I got pulled into an alley way by a person it started me with tentacles and people
Aye, it's a bug. Should be fixed next update. Sorry for the bother.
Thank you, I appreciate that advice. But I am confused as to why the actions that clearly state (-Trauma and --Trauma) do absolutely nothing but acts that do not even mention trauma decrease it. Is it that when trauma is like 90% filled that they are programmed to no longer work but they will work fine if I was like sub 50%?
Promiscuous and similar acts only mention - Trauma after you choose them, and only if the act is strong enough to have an impact. Once you've performed enough level 1 acts, level 2 unlocks. Soon after that, level 1 acts lose their - Trauma and + Control effects, pushing you toward more extreme behaviour. Sorry it isn't clearer, and for the frustration.

Most other - Trauma effects are weak, and require your character invest a lot of time there. Hanging out with Robin is great for that, as DD2 mentions.
I use the android version, the bugs here are different than in the PC version? for me, the deep wood glitch it's always present. and the progress lines are always grey. no matter what.

iball I think the better you have the control bar the bigger the trauma will fall. so do the therapy with robin or whatever when your control is the highest.
It might indeed be an Android problem. Bugs specific to the Android version are uncommon, but not unheard of.

I believe I've found the cause of the grey progress lines, and should have it fixed next update.
Dunno if that was intended:
I could strip on the shore, go into the water and swim but couldn't get back to shore without donning some plants.
It should work like that only if teenagers are present.
Hi :3 I really felt in love with this game I'm from Germany :3 I would love to translate the game in German. With your pleasing I could do that for you.
Greetings keep going you're doing an amazing job ❤
Thanks for the kind words. I'd be happy for a German translation to be made. I must warn you though that it would be a huge task. The text isn't kept in separate files to the code, so it's all mixed together.
How does the Awe mechanic while dancing work? I can't seem to raise it even at max dancing skill, because no session lasts longer than about 5 turns before people rush the stage, even if I do nothing but spam 'Cool Dance' over and over.

Also, I'd like it if we could buy multiples of a clothing item in one go. (like five black school shirts at once)

I'd like to see more changing-room stuff at school Preferably even without cross-dressing.
You can play a girl being harassed by other girls all day, but when the time comes to get naked, suddenly everyone behaves? kinda feels like there's stuff missing.

I'd also like to see a... if not story event, then at least fluff event about futas. Something that shows that they exist in-unverse outside of them attacking you.
Robin talking about it, maybe, or a short futa-girl being bullied by cheerleaders in the showers.
Hmm, a sex-harassment event where the PC is a bystander rather than the target would be pretty interesting.

I imagine the same sort of scene could be repeated on the male side, but I've never ran a world where boys with pussies existed.
Awe influences the amount of money people give you when they tip. It's meant to be a temporary boost that multiplies the effect of excitement and arousal. Stripping is indeed the main way to increase it. It means taking everything off as soon as you can isn't necessarily the best strategy.
 

1tomadeira

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Aye, that's right. I know the sort of corruption you mean. The idea behind promiscuity, exhibitionism and deviancy is to pressure the player to make increasingly depraved decisions in order to maintain some semblance of control. It's a form of corruption, but not really mindbreak. Innocence is different, in that it can be forced on the PC to an extent, and doesn't require them to exercise agency.

Don't be sorry! I do want to add some unique effect to cumming at the same time as NPCs. I've enjoyed it in other games. I'm not sure what form that will take though.
Thanks for the fast response. Glad to know about your goals on cumming effects. I simply don't like to spam requests, since many people aren't aware of the effort when making a game, and sometimes can be seen as irrealist requests. That's why I said sorry since I didn't want to look like a kid who wants everything. :)

About on what you mentioned, I'm curious on how innocence will be applied. Something like lust increasing when genitals are shown by an exhibisionist or when an animal makes efforts to humping on your leg or sniffing would be interesting.

Since science class is already in game, events with books of Sexual Education could be nice to explore that innocence you want. I think it may apply into that idea pretty well, if I understand well on how you want to apply innocence.. I also guess virginity and lack of sex experience will also have a big influence on that, that's a bit obvious.

Those combined over time can change into something like seeing pornography at home and explore routes, which would be nice, but that's a different story and would add more work. I would be more than happy already with something similar with the sexual education and experimentation.

Awe influences the amount of money people give you when they tip. It's meant to be a temporary boost that multiplies the effect of excitement and arousal. Stripping is indeed the main way to increase it. It means taking everything off as soon as you can isn't necessarily the best strategy.
About that event, I hope in later stages there will be an option where the character is happy on the gangbang event, instead of gaining trauma. But I guess that will only be applied when the mindbreak stuff mentioned above are applied. :)

Anyway looking forward for the next releases, the game is extremely fun as always. And thanks again for the responses.
 
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I would love to translate your game, but do I have to start all over again every time you published a new version? In this case I would wait until you have your first finished version of the game. Or is there a possibility to update the new version of the game without losing my translations?
I'm really looking forward to do that with you
Greeting's from Germany
 
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I would love to translate your game, but do I have to start all over again every time you published a new version? In this case I would wait until you have your first finished version of the game. Or is there a possibility to update the new version of the game without losing my translations?
I'm really looking forward to do that with you
Greeting's from Germany
i don't know how coding/translating works but Vrelnir could give you the files that have being added or changed.
 

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I would love to translate your game, but do I have to start all over again every time you published a new version? In this case I would wait until you have your first finished version of the game. Or is there a possibility to update the new version of the game without losing my translations?
I'm really looking forward to do that with you
Greeting's from Germany
i suggest you keep save on key parts of the game, i have one after first week started the game; before Kylar, one week before the science fair and one before the science fair. I try to max up much as possible all the grinding things that give MC advantage: seduction, dancing, skulduggery and swimming, also have at least 3 pepper spray cans. For me the games end after the science fair as there is really nothing else to do other than Eden or the Black wolf, and both events are not my cup of tea. I like events that take a wile to accomplish, like the science fair. it gives some kind of accomplishment if you know what i mean.

Maybe there other events i haven't discover? but with no actions encouraging to move forward, i rather start a new game on each update.

One question about the game if it's not too much to ask: the girl you set free from the docks wile you are working there, does the amount of money you give this girl has any repercussions on the future? does your generosity pays back on the long run? i ask because when i free the girl i had little money and only gave her 100 pounds. kind of feel bad about it.
 

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I would love to translate your game, but do I have to start all over again every time you published a new version? In this case I would wait until you have your first finished version of the game. Or is there a possibility to update the new version of the game without losing my translations?
I'm really looking forward to do that with you
Greeting's from Germany
I'm not overly familiar with Twine/Sugarcube, but I did have a quick look how localization is done there. It seems that while twine comes with support for this via it's l10nStrings object, it's only usable for UI-Elements and is not recommended for story elements. I did find a project attempting to implement localization for stories : (I'm mostly leaving this here for Vrelnir to see, in case he wants to have a look).
What this means for your workflow if you were to help out with translation, I would imagine that:
a. You need at least read access to his git repository (or whatever else he uses for versioning)
b. You then download the language files, check out what is new in terms of english text, and ammend your german translation file and either make a pull request or send him the new file direclty somehow. So no, you would not have to start over each time, but just ammend the translation.

In any case, I would think that you both need to collaborate closely together, likely on different medium than this forum. So as others have pointed out, the first step is to get in contact with the developer and take it from there. He is very active on here, so maybe just write him a direct message. Additionally, please note that this is purely hypothetical on my part. As I said, my knowledge of twine is very limited and there might be some devs on here with more experience whom can maybe give better advice.
Cheers.
 

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The game is just wonderful! I spent veu much time playing it and feeling so excited! Robin's my favourite NPC, and I want to get Wolf transformation to see his reaction and, maybe, some features (If they are here) Though there are many things I want to be added in this game, but the most is pregnancy. Vrelnir, do you want to add pregnancy soon or you're working on other staff? If It's not secret, on which staff do you work?))
 
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The game is just wonderful! I spent veu much time playing it and feeling so excited! Robin's my favourite NPC, and I want to get Wolf transformation to see his reaction and, maybe, some features (If they are here) Though there are many things I want to be added in this game, but the most is pregnancy. Vrelnir, do you want to add pregnancy soon or you're working on other staff? If It's not secret, on which staff do you work?))
Don't worry it's planned ;)
 

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What is it about pregnancy fetishists that renders them completely unable to use the search function? I swear we could cut this thread by 30% just by banning anyone jumping on that hobbyhorse without looking back 1 or 2 pages, nevermind using search.
 
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