Amhran
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- Mar 22, 2022
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I guess I generally try to assume that a character talking is just...talking. It wasn't descriptive or self text, it was dialogue. Characters should have their own little phrases, personal word choice, and other idiosyncrasies that make them distinct from each other - it would totally make sense for a teacher, of all people, to talk like that. But like I said, if it didn't read well, then it didn't read well and that's fine too. Definitely not a hill I'm going to die on, especially because I do actually like the setting to be able to be interpreted multiple ways, and playing a character that can really straddle the line being a child doing silly and sweet child-like things and being an adult that can do very adult things is a great thing in many different ways for this insane adventure of a game, and in no way do I want that to go away.I suppose it depends on whether one sees "young adults" as a proper age category or a gene of fiction in a book store. Either way, I don't think the line was well placed for the Sirris condom scene especially. No one starts a sentence like that.
Edit: I should mention that this is something I discussed with Vrel and the contributors as well, it was generally agreed upon that we were beating players over the head with the disclaimer stick a bit too hard.
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