Noesis is being waaaaay too harsh on a game made by one person (with some help) that isn't even close to finished yet.
That said, the only thing i will agree is that the game's writting does need an improvement.
(and
you can help make that happen, if it really bothers you, by offering to
help with the proofreading 
! )
Like when you are sucking someones breast and they start to lick your pussy. How that even work?!
(Have you never heard of a sex position called " Sixty-Nine " aka ("69") ?

If not, go look it up .

)