VN - Ren'Py - Completed - Deliverance [Final] [1Thousand]

The Good:

+ Gorgeous 3D models, both female and male
+ Graphics and menu design well done
+ Animated XXX - scenes
+ Different paths based on a point system
+ The overall plot is pretty clichèd, a typical detective story, but at least it's not been overused in Ren'Py games so far.
(+) Investigation scenes. If the developer could somehow implement them into the gameplay, this would immediately make the game stand out among all the others.

The Bad

- Constant jumps. This is my biggest criticism of this VN. Instead of giving scenes room to breathe, there are constant jumps, almost between every click. Not only does this create confusion, because you don't get a good sense of the time, it also destroys any tension in the sex scenes. One moment the main character and his wife are naked having sex, next click the guy is fully dressed and ready to leave. This feels incredibly unnatural. And the fact, that every transition is a fade (with the menu disappearing!) is also distracting on a visual level.

- The writing is clunky and I somehow doubt that English is their first language.

Greate Game! And I am very curious how the story will go on.

They have so much sex at puplic...that makes it exciting what will come in near future.... looks like Katherine is into swinging and sharing.

5 Stars so far...without any doubts

This game is awesome !!
-5/5 Detective story
-5/5 Ingame quality
-4/5 characters
-5/5 animation( Best wife scene, her expression is very amazing)
-3/5 route options (It's a bit strange because when the relationship is good, MC can choose to share his wife with another man)
- Sharing good scenes
-And 5 stars for Android version <3.
I hope there will be an NTR / Cuckold route in the future, Katherine will cheat on the main character if he doesn't care about her.(Maybe with her boss), waiting for more chappter. Love you 1thousand <3.

Chapter IV completed. This is a great game with enormous potential. The story is intriguing and well developed alongside the lewd scenes. Being the main story always the same, there are basically two paths to follow regarding the relationships and they all have similar amount of different scenes. Even within each one there are different sub paths also with different scenes, so the player can choose which one to follow and will never be disappointed.

The renders are very good, with well-proportioned and realistic bodies, using totally different models to the ones we see in many games. The animations are good but could be improved.

The UI is something I also like very much, original, clean and clear, avoiding the annoying and intrusive standard text boxes.

In short a game with good plot and very good development strongly recommended.

Too far too good.
4 star (only) because:
- Renders and graphics in general
- Straightfoward
- Good updates
- Detective story progress
Promising start, a lot of possible branches for hot "bunnies", waiting for more chapter mr. Very Good Developer.
Great work!

Very good (chapter 4)

- Very good intro music
- Best wife sex scenes i've seen in a H-game (while every other game has generic or missionary sex scenes)
- Nice renders
- Interesting story (not your usual idiotic drama, there's a detective story too)

On the down side, the sex scenes with the other women are a let down so far, let's hope they'll improve.

My Rating of [CH. 3]
Game so far, good storytelling, hot females and nice freedom in choices. The CG are good nut not great too.

i think this game need to add NTR for Katherine because if you cheat, she as the right to cheat too.

I am a big big fan swinging (not NTR) and this game definitely got this. The swinging aspect is not forced either which I love the most. I wish the more wife scenes are there in the next update. If you like swinging with a good story then this game definitely deserves our patreon money.

Love the game so far, good storytelling, hot females, a nice freedom in choices and actually a game where if you want to you can share your woman instead of the usual weak cuck you see around, you are always in control. Only thing id like to see improved are animations that atm are a bit underwhelming. Keep up the great work.

My Rating of [CH. 3] is:

Pros:
+ Great Renders
+ Active Play
+ Hot Scenes
+ Long Game Play
+ Hot Ladies
+ Great Wife Scenes.
Cons:
- Nothing

Conclusion:

The Game is Just great.
Hot wife with kinky scenes, great NTR scenes with no bullshit (avoidable) and great story.
The updates are long, no senseless walking around,game controls are great,
the writing is also good...
Great Story and Good looking ladies....Just my kind of things I love in a Game......Keep it UP.

My Advisory:
Damn worth the Download

A stunning detective story, with an interesting romantic line. Already in version 0.3, your relationship with your wife greatly depends on how often you appear at home and go to the left. I am very glad that I discovered this work, I will look forward to updates.
P.S.: A separate like for NTR.

disliked the visuals, especially the wife, looks like some weird dead inside alien. also doesn't have any CG to review, nor scenes. story was very weak and short too. it would have been nice if atleast the encountered things were saved or highlighted or if the different paths would be shown anywhere.

Story is interesting, and each girl have their own "arc story", so they are not just here to be fucked, which is great. Visual are really good, animations too. Really great surprise for me, I can't wait to play more

Captivating story and great renders. Like all the three main girls (already quite biased towards katherine and sarah) and the protagonist is also very cool.

Definetly looking forward to what´s coming in the future

4 stars as of now - Game overall is a nice start with already good amount of renders and some story bits, nice female characters to enjoy and such, wide range of fetishes.

More problems lies in some technical and UI aspects of the game but Dev is really comunicative in the thread and says it's already being worked on and probably will come in 0.2.

I like that we don't play once again as young teenager.
I have nothing against young MC's, but it's get kinda tiring when most of the games you just play as some college kid so it's something refreshing when i see a more mature MC that we can use to explore presented world to us.

Decent game, with good graphics, sounds, and an early story packed with reviews for us gamers who enjoy research games, congratulations to the Author for this 1st chapter, with a rewarding involvement.