VN - Ren'Py - Completed - Deliverance [Final] [1Thousand]

Wow, way better than I expected. I have a few minor problems but the story is pretty solid and working as a detective is pretty exciting.

First of all, I wish you could be colder to people. For example, Sarah made so many massive mistakes just because she wants to go higher up on the ladder yet you console her when it blows up on her. Fuck her greedy ass. Secondly, the MCs model is so weird half the time. His eyes are like insanely tiny and he looks really strange.

Now the positives were mainly the interesting story and the very likeable wife. Pretty much the only game I didn't feel tempted to cheat, she is so gorgeous and has a decent personality to boot. Very impressive game and totally recommended.

Review for chapter 1 to 5.
The game is very good.

The story is great, renders are good even if it's not the best in chapter 1 it get's better.

The characters are amazing, i love the personnality of the wife , and the swing content is amazing you should go for it.

The story is interesting but it should move a little bit quicker, a lot of games have the bad habit of going slow in first episodes and then when there is only 3 episodes left in the game they rush it like crazy, the dev should avoid this situation

I think the renders are ok(ish) at best. And some of the animations are just ridiculous. Its really annoying that after every click the scene fades, dont like it at all. You cant save in some places, and scrolling the scenes with mouse does not work properly. Also you cant return from save screen with RMB, thats annoying. The scenes are all over the place, jumping from place to place and scene to another. So if im copletely honest, im being generous with 2 stars.

So this is my first review,and I've been into porn games since 2 years or such and I've played alot so I could make some judgments here from what I've saw before.

The graphics are 4.5/5 stars:
considering it's a first time project and the game is in the beginning, the graphics are beautiful,epic,realistic and simply mesmerizing.
and comparing to other well paid games it's passing them with levels,even tho the DEV doesn't earn more than 100s, he's seriously putting effort and passion and I am inlove with the art.
But I see lack of quality in the animations,they need alot of work to make them more realistic and synchronized from body parts movements to the whole position and such.

Character models are 4.5/5:
Kath is something else,she's amazingly beautiful looking for a special made character and I guess it's the Dev's creation not just a regular model,same goes for Sarah and her booty and also Rose,each one of the girls got the assets that fits her and it suits them completely in perfection,kind of one of the first times I don't comment on a character's features,only the MC's hair need to change because that hair style is kind of meh considering it doesn't look so natural.

Story 4/5:
The story is nice really feels a bit from "Depraved awakening" but with a twist,I am so deep in the story and I can't wait for the new updates really pumped even tho I am supposed to be studying xD.

Gameplay and UI 4.5/5:
the menu theme and UI are really good and go with the flow of the game i enjoy the effort put into them.
I only complain about the constant jumping scenes from eachother for example at the beginning the first BJ by Kath,he was totally dressed and click a second later,totally naked and when they're having sex,there's no like connection between positions or movements,one time on couch second later at table standing,I just wish that could be looked into to be more in synchronization with the scenes and the tensions.

Over all I'd go for a 5/5 if the mistakes would be fixed,other than that I can't wait for the rest of the game and hopefully it would have sequels whatever this one ends,and really that game is one of the best out there considering graphics story and above all a hardworking talented passionate developer.

The visuals are good, but the game itself is fantastic!

Something for most people here, though I honestly love the crazy wife. Normally, I'd click through for model that I most prefer (and I prefer blonds), but in this case the wife's crazy sexual adventures make things interesting.

Oh yea, and there's a story that's not half bad itself.

Amazing game and one that I gladly support on Patreon. Amazing models even though animation could be improved. What I love about this game is that it has all the themes I appreciate in a game including supernatural tunes which I quite welcome. This is a game for you if you’re tired of being a teenager weeb who’s new found obsession of sexing his mom and sisters. I got tired of that real quick tbh and this is very refreshing. Also man the feels I have never felt so bad for cheating on someone like I have been in this game, not even in real life lol. Wife is amazing and I really felt sorry for that so a loyal playthrough is in order. Amazing game 9/10!

The Good:

+ Gorgeous 3D models, both female and male
+ Graphics and menu design well done
+ Animated XXX - scenes
+ Different paths based on a point system
+ The overall plot is pretty clichèd, a typical detective story, but at least it's not been overused in Ren'Py games so far.
(+) Investigation scenes. If the developer could somehow implement them into the gameplay, this would immediately make the game stand out among all the others.

The Bad

- Constant jumps. This is my biggest criticism of this VN. Instead of giving scenes room to breathe, there are constant jumps, almost between every click. Not only does this create confusion, because you don't get a good sense of the time, it also destroys any tension in the sex scenes. One moment the main character and his wife are naked having sex, next click the guy is fully dressed and ready to leave. This feels incredibly unnatural. And the fact, that every transition is a fade (with the menu disappearing!) is also distracting on a visual level.

- The writing is clunky and I somehow doubt that English is their first language.

Greate Game! And I am very curious how the story will go on.

They have so much sex at puplic...that makes it exciting what will come in near future.... looks like Katherine is into swinging and sharing.

5 Stars so far...without any doubts

This game is awesome !!
-5/5 Detective story
-5/5 Ingame quality
-4/5 characters
-5/5 animation( Best wife scene, her expression is very amazing)
-3/5 route options (It's a bit strange because when the relationship is good, MC can choose to share his wife with another man)
- Sharing good scenes
-And 5 stars for Android version <3.
I hope there will be an NTR / Cuckold route in the future, Katherine will cheat on the main character if he doesn't care about her.(Maybe with her boss), waiting for more chappter. Love you 1thousand <3.

Chapter IV completed. This is a great game with enormous potential. The story is intriguing and well developed alongside the lewd scenes. Being the main story always the same, there are basically two paths to follow regarding the relationships and they all have similar amount of different scenes. Even within each one there are different sub paths also with different scenes, so the player can choose which one to follow and will never be disappointed.

The renders are very good, with well-proportioned and realistic bodies, using totally different models to the ones we see in many games. The animations are good but could be improved.

The UI is something I also like very much, original, clean and clear, avoiding the annoying and intrusive standard text boxes.

In short a game with good plot and very good development strongly recommended.

Too far too good.
4 star (only) because:
- Renders and graphics in general
- Straightfoward
- Good updates
- Detective story progress
Promising start, a lot of possible branches for hot "bunnies", waiting for more chapter mr. Very Good Developer.
Great work!

Very good (chapter 4)

- Very good intro music
- Best wife sex scenes i've seen in a H-game (while every other game has generic or missionary sex scenes)
- Nice renders
- Interesting story (not your usual idiotic drama, there's a detective story too)

On the down side, the sex scenes with the other women are a let down so far, let's hope they'll improve.

My Rating of [CH. 3]
Game so far, good storytelling, hot females and nice freedom in choices. The CG are good nut not great too.

i think this game need to add NTR for Katherine because if you cheat, she as the right to cheat too.

I am a big big fan swinging (not NTR) and this game definitely got this. The swinging aspect is not forced either which I love the most. I wish the more wife scenes are there in the next update. If you like swinging with a good story then this game definitely deserves our patreon money.

Love the game so far, good storytelling, hot females, a nice freedom in choices and actually a game where if you want to you can share your woman instead of the usual weak cuck you see around, you are always in control. Only thing id like to see improved are animations that atm are a bit underwhelming. Keep up the great work.

My Rating of [CH. 3] is:

Pros:
+ Great Renders
+ Active Play
+ Hot Scenes
+ Long Game Play
+ Hot Ladies
+ Great Wife Scenes.
Cons:
- Nothing

Conclusion:

The Game is Just great.
Hot wife with kinky scenes, great NTR scenes with no bullshit (avoidable) and great story.
The updates are long, no senseless walking around,game controls are great,
the writing is also good...
Great Story and Good looking ladies....Just my kind of things I love in a Game......Keep it UP.

My Advisory:
Damn worth the Download

A stunning detective story, with an interesting romantic line. Already in version 0.3, your relationship with your wife greatly depends on how often you appear at home and go to the left. I am very glad that I discovered this work, I will look forward to updates.
P.S.: A separate like for NTR.

disliked the visuals, especially the wife, looks like some weird dead inside alien. also doesn't have any CG to review, nor scenes. story was very weak and short too. it would have been nice if atleast the encountered things were saved or highlighted or if the different paths would be shown anywhere.

Story is interesting, and each girl have their own "arc story", so they are not just here to be fucked, which is great. Visual are really good, animations too. Really great surprise for me, I can't wait to play more

Captivating story and great renders. Like all the three main girls (already quite biased towards katherine and sarah) and the protagonist is also very cool.

Definetly looking forward to what´s coming in the future