- Jun 9, 2017
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There are VN's/Games that appear to have a decent premise and look promising yet as you dig below the surface it becomes very apparent it is a framework haphazardly put together with significantly less organization than expected. If I had to guess, this creator has a grandiose idea of what they want their VN/Game to be and just hasn't put together a structured plan to make it work for the audience.
I play certain VNs/Games that have a significant amount of grind...they MUST offer some reward or positive incentive to continue grinding. This game doesn't. People do not frequent a pirating site for adult VNs/Games to be driven crazy with convoluted grind-fests, we want naked people doing naked things!! You need to have enough fappable material to hold the interest of your audience and, if you are going to make them grind the same stuff over, and over, and over, and over...REWARD THEM with some progress.
And please, don't try to sell anyone on the "this is a slow burn story" - that only works when there is a VERY good story and even then, there needs to be some form of reward to maintain the interest of the viewer.
I play certain VNs/Games that have a significant amount of grind...they MUST offer some reward or positive incentive to continue grinding. This game doesn't. People do not frequent a pirating site for adult VNs/Games to be driven crazy with convoluted grind-fests, we want naked people doing naked things!! You need to have enough fappable material to hold the interest of your audience and, if you are going to make them grind the same stuff over, and over, and over, and over...REWARD THEM with some progress.
And please, don't try to sell anyone on the "this is a slow burn story" - that only works when there is a VERY good story and even then, there needs to be some form of reward to maintain the interest of the viewer.