He has spares, at least thats my story and I'm sticking to itSo...did MC lose his magical red shorts when he turned into a demon and his clothes burned off? Idle thought. And nobody say, "They're fire proof"
RPGM Demon Deals [v0.06.5a] [Breadman Games]
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He has spares, at least thats my story and I'm sticking to it
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- Jun 29, 2021
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Hiya. Some thoughts on this latest chapter beyond a more general Huzzah!!
-Some of these phone scenarios have been notably effective and The Brandy character arc makes fine ongoing use of that. She definitely fills a niche that’s there to be advantaged; in on family fornication while the others remain oblivious beyond themselves; a peeping tom of sorts (not entirely unlike the player). She’s also plenty sexy and fullfilling for that age group.
-The Cassie scenario fell flat for me this chapter. This may sound trivial as we’re dealing with a cartoon here but that particular progression felt uneven and ultimately senseless. She went from a fun drunk to suddenly struggling with scruples to… ‘well if the kid wants to hop on board with me and put his life at risk for some stolen cash I had no courage to retrieve myself then… sure, that solves all concerns I might have about offending his mother any behind her back’. Say what? In any case, I understand that’s an A to Z thing, just… didn’t play well, imo. Kinda shoehorned her into the storytelling there; not organic. (Having said that, interesting scenario for them ahead, eh.)
-Any time that Leslie is involved in anything - I’m firmly on board, pun intended. She continues to be an especially affecting dynamic range of satisfying for me. So much so that I view it as miraculous how deftly she’s been handled from GO; done so simply while not at all accidentally (plenty of care and consideration been afforded her part and importance in the architecture of if all). I’ve got strong admiration for her - and for the creator/dev team as well - to have managed her so astutely and patiently progress her so dutifully well. In short, she’s hella digestible. And especially… inspiring ; P
That Facetime phone scenario while she was out of town was… well, it’s fair to say I suitably soiled myself to finally see her pussy on display that way. Wonderfully satisfying to not be disappointed by that any. Real nice artwork drawn up there, yummy. I also find it plenty clever to initiate MC’s perspective ABOVE the table while the player gets an inside track and more revealing view of her activities beneath that obstacle. Like, that is particularly smart from a progression perspective that can satisfy the viewer/player while allowing for lots more growth opportunity between her and MC. Again - this phone stuff has been handled real well and I would continue to lean into that going forward, where appropriate/can enhance a scenario.
Plenty memorable scene. Entirely suitable and true to her character. Nailed it, bullseye. I love her! (And plenty thrilled to discover see can squirt, was hoping so if not anticipating that might be true and even maybe necessary.)
Very much enjoy how that “cup” is being handled (from as far back as the initial doctor visit encounter) and the way that’s been bread-crumbed forward… I’ve recognized the hints along the way and again - am not at all disappointed by her progression to full fledged cumslut. It’s entirely believable by now and the scene at the kitchen sink… delivered. Way to hit the mark on that, once again! I so want to bury her in an endless supply of spunk. I’m pot committed!!
-A negative critique - more so in terms of how this chapter conclude - as opposed to a whole lot of situations being deftly developed and delivered upon… the tail end of things missed many opportunities. The car ride felt promising, as did some under-the-table options at the restaurant. I felt a little derailed that nothing quite happened there. I also thought having Ashley present, who had just been made aware that some amount of fornication has been occurring between Mother and Brother, could have really been an asset in terms of tension and 3rd party appeal - particularly coming off whatever guilty concerns she might have absorbed from the night before (more on that below). Also would have dove-tailed nicely into Brandy’s scenario at the top of the chapter progression. But putting that aside (I understand I cant have everything, lawl). Putting him back at home, along with an opportunity to cuck the Father in some way, wasn’t much advantaged.
When she entered his bedroom in that robe… my mind was spinning with all types of potential. Notably, he’s back where he’d been long before all this had ‘actionably’ begun. Surely, there’s some history that could have been played upon and holistically benefit Leslie as more than just a suposatory for his Demon Deal. Instead, she basically went right at a somewhat generic and almost lazy deepthroat instead. While I most definitely appreciate the scene where she’d been gifted with such skills by Lilith (another fine example of developing some storytelling more organically, advantaging all parts of what’s been built in for us thus far), this… appeared to set aside all sorts of parameters that might be interesting to consider and enjoy - had literally been woven in carefully, prior; to such a degree that I was now assuming they would be present and accounted for. In fact, it did appear they would be. But then. They weren’t. He’s there on the bed that he grew up in, a first time event for the viewer. And that all got ignored while she just simply… blast apart a pearl necklace (which was actually a nice touch to finish the scene with, however. A tip of the cap on that).
That was an especially disappointing finish for me here. Full disclosure.
Maybe it’s a case of too much good before it? Tough to meet the bar already set and surpass it? And on that note:
-Okay, Ashley…
Uhmmm… tremendous!! That was a barn burner, five alarm fire. Yet another diverse character that’s plenty purposeful to the architecture of it all and has been deftly and dutifully developed. I found this entire scenario to be a master class in development and execution. Brilliant, really. Ashley most definitely met the challenge and even supersede it. There’s been a lot of promise there and the team ought feel REAL solid about that delivery.
Fan the flames… that entire ordeal was hot as hell. For all the most obvious reasons. As well as some that aren’t.
Lastly, assuming I haven’t rant on long enough…
I’ve been giving Breadman a bit of ribbing here and there on prolonged time between releases. Shitcan that, I’m wrong. The artwork on this project has continued to advance, exponentially. Not only from an illustrated perspective but also in terms of creativity and devotion to the craft.
There’s a lot gone on by now. I can’t applaud enough how diverse these ‘arrangements’ have managed to be. Not only in terms of actions taking place but perhaps more notably the framing, inventing different ways to angle on it all or draw up the debauchery. It’s been plenty cinematic and especially impressive for cartoonish porn and that’s for certain. Again - inventive enough to encourage ongoing immersion. The importance of that cannot be understated and our boy Bread is not only wise to recognize that early on but deserves far more credit than words can qualify. YA OUGHT BE PROUD, MATE!
Gave us a fine amount of content here. Ain’t no doubt about it. And I might be able to advantage quite a bit of it… multiples of times. Yessir.
Enjoying your efforts to earn that… bread ; )
Toast yourself on a job well done and cap off the New Year proper. Happy Holidays.
-Some of these phone scenarios have been notably effective and The Brandy character arc makes fine ongoing use of that. She definitely fills a niche that’s there to be advantaged; in on family fornication while the others remain oblivious beyond themselves; a peeping tom of sorts (not entirely unlike the player). She’s also plenty sexy and fullfilling for that age group.
-The Cassie scenario fell flat for me this chapter. This may sound trivial as we’re dealing with a cartoon here but that particular progression felt uneven and ultimately senseless. She went from a fun drunk to suddenly struggling with scruples to… ‘well if the kid wants to hop on board with me and put his life at risk for some stolen cash I had no courage to retrieve myself then… sure, that solves all concerns I might have about offending his mother any behind her back’. Say what? In any case, I understand that’s an A to Z thing, just… didn’t play well, imo. Kinda shoehorned her into the storytelling there; not organic. (Having said that, interesting scenario for them ahead, eh.)
-Any time that Leslie is involved in anything - I’m firmly on board, pun intended. She continues to be an especially affecting dynamic range of satisfying for me. So much so that I view it as miraculous how deftly she’s been handled from GO; done so simply while not at all accidentally (plenty of care and consideration been afforded her part and importance in the architecture of if all). I’ve got strong admiration for her - and for the creator/dev team as well - to have managed her so astutely and patiently progress her so dutifully well. In short, she’s hella digestible. And especially… inspiring ; P
That Facetime phone scenario while she was out of town was… well, it’s fair to say I suitably soiled myself to finally see her pussy on display that way. Wonderfully satisfying to not be disappointed by that any. Real nice artwork drawn up there, yummy. I also find it plenty clever to initiate MC’s perspective ABOVE the table while the player gets an inside track and more revealing view of her activities beneath that obstacle. Like, that is particularly smart from a progression perspective that can satisfy the viewer/player while allowing for lots more growth opportunity between her and MC. Again - this phone stuff has been handled real well and I would continue to lean into that going forward, where appropriate/can enhance a scenario.
Plenty memorable scene. Entirely suitable and true to her character. Nailed it, bullseye. I love her! (And plenty thrilled to discover see can squirt, was hoping so if not anticipating that might be true and even maybe necessary.)
Very much enjoy how that “cup” is being handled (from as far back as the initial doctor visit encounter) and the way that’s been bread-crumbed forward… I’ve recognized the hints along the way and again - am not at all disappointed by her progression to full fledged cumslut. It’s entirely believable by now and the scene at the kitchen sink… delivered. Way to hit the mark on that, once again! I so want to bury her in an endless supply of spunk. I’m pot committed!!
-A negative critique - more so in terms of how this chapter conclude - as opposed to a whole lot of situations being deftly developed and delivered upon… the tail end of things missed many opportunities. The car ride felt promising, as did some under-the-table options at the restaurant. I felt a little derailed that nothing quite happened there. I also thought having Ashley present, who had just been made aware that some amount of fornication has been occurring between Mother and Brother, could have really been an asset in terms of tension and 3rd party appeal - particularly coming off whatever guilty concerns she might have absorbed from the night before (more on that below). Also would have dove-tailed nicely into Brandy’s scenario at the top of the chapter progression. But putting that aside (I understand I cant have everything, lawl). Putting him back at home, along with an opportunity to cuck the Father in some way, wasn’t much advantaged.
When she entered his bedroom in that robe… my mind was spinning with all types of potential. Notably, he’s back where he’d been long before all this had ‘actionably’ begun. Surely, there’s some history that could have been played upon and holistically benefit Leslie as more than just a suposatory for his Demon Deal. Instead, she basically went right at a somewhat generic and almost lazy deepthroat instead. While I most definitely appreciate the scene where she’d been gifted with such skills by Lilith (another fine example of developing some storytelling more organically, advantaging all parts of what’s been built in for us thus far), this… appeared to set aside all sorts of parameters that might be interesting to consider and enjoy - had literally been woven in carefully, prior; to such a degree that I was now assuming they would be present and accounted for. In fact, it did appear they would be. But then. They weren’t. He’s there on the bed that he grew up in, a first time event for the viewer. And that all got ignored while she just simply… blast apart a pearl necklace (which was actually a nice touch to finish the scene with, however. A tip of the cap on that).
That was an especially disappointing finish for me here. Full disclosure.
Maybe it’s a case of too much good before it? Tough to meet the bar already set and surpass it? And on that note:
-Okay, Ashley…
Uhmmm… tremendous!! That was a barn burner, five alarm fire. Yet another diverse character that’s plenty purposeful to the architecture of it all and has been deftly and dutifully developed. I found this entire scenario to be a master class in development and execution. Brilliant, really. Ashley most definitely met the challenge and even supersede it. There’s been a lot of promise there and the team ought feel REAL solid about that delivery.
Fan the flames… that entire ordeal was hot as hell. For all the most obvious reasons. As well as some that aren’t.
Lastly, assuming I haven’t rant on long enough…
I’ve been giving Breadman a bit of ribbing here and there on prolonged time between releases. Shitcan that, I’m wrong. The artwork on this project has continued to advance, exponentially. Not only from an illustrated perspective but also in terms of creativity and devotion to the craft.
There’s a lot gone on by now. I can’t applaud enough how diverse these ‘arrangements’ have managed to be. Not only in terms of actions taking place but perhaps more notably the framing, inventing different ways to angle on it all or draw up the debauchery. It’s been plenty cinematic and especially impressive for cartoonish porn and that’s for certain. Again - inventive enough to encourage ongoing immersion. The importance of that cannot be understated and our boy Bread is not only wise to recognize that early on but deserves far more credit than words can qualify. YA OUGHT BE PROUD, MATE!
Gave us a fine amount of content here. Ain’t no doubt about it. And I might be able to advantage quite a bit of it… multiples of times. Yessir.
Enjoying your efforts to earn that… bread ; )
Toast yourself on a job well done and cap off the New Year proper. Happy Holidays.
Hey thank you for the praise, really it means a lot that you'd take the time to write such a thorough review, and fair points on the critiques - to clarify regarding Leslie's bit, what was it you were looking for more of in that scene? Like dialogue about it being his childhood bedroom?