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RPGM Demon Deals [v0.06.5a] [Breadman Games]
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- Jun 29, 2021
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Hiya. Some thoughts on this latest chapter beyond a more general Huzzah!!
-Some of these phone scenarios have been notably effective and The Brandy character arc makes fine ongoing use of that. She definitely fills a niche that’s there to be advantaged; in on family fornication while the others remain oblivious beyond themselves; a peeping tom of sorts (not entirely unlike the player). She’s also plenty sexy and fullfilling for that age group.
-The Cassie scenario fell flat for me this chapter. This may sound trivial as we’re dealing with a cartoon here but that particular progression felt uneven and ultimately senseless. She went from a fun drunk to suddenly struggling with scruples to… ‘well if the kid wants to hop on board with me and put his life at risk for some stolen cash I had no courage to retrieve myself then… sure, that solves all concerns I might have about offending his mother any behind her back’. Say what? In any case, I understand that’s an A to Z thing, just… didn’t play well, imo. Kinda shoehorned her into the storytelling there; not organic. (Having said that, interesting scenario for them ahead, eh.)
-Any time that Leslie is involved in anything - I’m firmly on board, pun intended. She continues to be an especially affecting dynamic range of satisfying for me. So much so that I view it as miraculous how deftly she’s been handled from GO; done so simply while not at all accidentally (plenty of care and consideration been afforded her part and importance in the architecture of if all). I’ve got strong admiration for her - and for the creator/dev team as well - to have managed her so astutely and patiently progress her so dutifully well. In short, she’s hella digestible. And especially… inspiring ; P
That Facetime phone scenario while she was out of town was… well, it’s fair to say I suitably soiled myself to finally see her pussy on display that way. Wonderfully satisfying to not be disappointed by that any. Real nice artwork drawn up there, yummy. I also find it plenty clever to initiate MC’s perspective ABOVE the table while the player gets an inside track and more revealing view of her activities beneath that obstacle. Like, that is particularly smart from a progression perspective that can satisfy the viewer/player while allowing for lots more growth opportunity between her and MC. Again - this phone stuff has been handled real well and I would continue to lean into that going forward, where appropriate/can enhance a scenario.
Plenty memorable scene. Entirely suitable and true to her character. Nailed it, bullseye. I love her! (And plenty thrilled to discover see can squirt, was hoping so if not anticipating that might be true and even maybe necessary.)
Very much enjoy how that “cup” is being handled (from as far back as the initial doctor visit encounter) and the way that’s been bread-crumbed forward… I’ve recognized the hints along the way and again - am not at all disappointed by her progression to full fledged cumslut. It’s entirely believable by now and the scene at the kitchen sink… delivered. Way to hit the mark on that, once again! I so want to bury her in an endless supply of spunk. I’m pot committed!!
-A negative critique - more so in terms of how this chapter conclude - as opposed to a whole lot of situations being deftly developed and delivered upon… the tail end of things missed many opportunities. The car ride felt promising, as did some under-the-table options at the restaurant. I felt a little derailed that nothing quite happened there. I also thought having Ashley present, who had just been made aware that some amount of fornication has been occurring between Mother and Brother, could have really been an asset in terms of tension and 3rd party appeal - particularly coming off whatever guilty concerns she might have absorbed from the night before (more on that below). Also would have dove-tailed nicely into Brandy’s scenario at the top of the chapter progression. But putting that aside (I understand I cant have everything, lawl). Putting him back at home, along with an opportunity to cuck the Father in some way, wasn’t much advantaged.
When she entered his bedroom in that robe… my mind was spinning with all types of potential. Notably, he’s back where he’d been long before all this had ‘actionably’ begun. Surely, there’s some history that could have been played upon and holistically benefit Leslie as more than just a suposatory for his Demon Deal. Instead, she basically went right at a somewhat generic and almost lazy deepthroat instead. While I most definitely appreciate the scene where she’d been gifted with such skills by Lilith (another fine example of developing some storytelling more organically, advantaging all parts of what’s been built in for us thus far), this… appeared to set aside all sorts of parameters that might be interesting to consider and enjoy - had literally been woven in carefully, prior; to such a degree that I was now assuming they would be present and accounted for. In fact, it did appear they would be. But then. They weren’t. He’s there on the bed that he grew up in, a first time event for the viewer. And that all got ignored while she just simply… blast apart a pearl necklace (which was actually a nice touch to finish the scene with, however. A tip of the cap on that).
That was an especially disappointing finish for me here. Full disclosure.
Maybe it’s a case of too much good before it? Tough to meet the bar already set and surpass it? And on that note:
-Okay, Ashley…
Uhmmm… tremendous!! That was a barn burner, five alarm fire. Yet another diverse character that’s plenty purposeful to the architecture of it all and has been deftly and dutifully developed. I found this entire scenario to be a master class in development and execution. Brilliant, really. Ashley most definitely met the challenge and even supersede it. There’s been a lot of promise there and the team ought feel REAL solid about that delivery.
Fan the flames… that entire ordeal was hot as hell. For all the most obvious reasons. As well as some that aren’t.
Lastly, assuming I haven’t rant on long enough…
I’ve been giving Breadman a bit of ribbing here and there on prolonged time between releases. Shitcan that, I’m wrong. The artwork on this project has continued to advance, exponentially. Not only from an illustrated perspective but also in terms of creativity and devotion to the craft.
There’s a lot gone on by now. I can’t applaud enough how diverse these ‘arrangements’ have managed to be. Not only in terms of actions taking place but perhaps more notably the framing, inventing different ways to angle on it all or draw up the debauchery. It’s been plenty cinematic and especially impressive for cartoonish porn and that’s for certain. Again - inventive enough to encourage ongoing immersion. The importance of that cannot be understated and our boy Bread is not only wise to recognize that early on but deserves far more credit than words can qualify. YA OUGHT BE PROUD, MATE!
Gave us a fine amount of content here. Ain’t no doubt about it. And I might be able to advantage quite a bit of it… multiples of times. Yessir.
Enjoying your efforts to earn that… bread ; )
Toast yourself on a job well done and cap off the New Year proper. Happy Holidays.
-Some of these phone scenarios have been notably effective and The Brandy character arc makes fine ongoing use of that. She definitely fills a niche that’s there to be advantaged; in on family fornication while the others remain oblivious beyond themselves; a peeping tom of sorts (not entirely unlike the player). She’s also plenty sexy and fullfilling for that age group.
-The Cassie scenario fell flat for me this chapter. This may sound trivial as we’re dealing with a cartoon here but that particular progression felt uneven and ultimately senseless. She went from a fun drunk to suddenly struggling with scruples to… ‘well if the kid wants to hop on board with me and put his life at risk for some stolen cash I had no courage to retrieve myself then… sure, that solves all concerns I might have about offending his mother any behind her back’. Say what? In any case, I understand that’s an A to Z thing, just… didn’t play well, imo. Kinda shoehorned her into the storytelling there; not organic. (Having said that, interesting scenario for them ahead, eh.)
-Any time that Leslie is involved in anything - I’m firmly on board, pun intended. She continues to be an especially affecting dynamic range of satisfying for me. So much so that I view it as miraculous how deftly she’s been handled from GO; done so simply while not at all accidentally (plenty of care and consideration been afforded her part and importance in the architecture of if all). I’ve got strong admiration for her - and for the creator/dev team as well - to have managed her so astutely and patiently progress her so dutifully well. In short, she’s hella digestible. And especially… inspiring ; P
That Facetime phone scenario while she was out of town was… well, it’s fair to say I suitably soiled myself to finally see her pussy on display that way. Wonderfully satisfying to not be disappointed by that any. Real nice artwork drawn up there, yummy. I also find it plenty clever to initiate MC’s perspective ABOVE the table while the player gets an inside track and more revealing view of her activities beneath that obstacle. Like, that is particularly smart from a progression perspective that can satisfy the viewer/player while allowing for lots more growth opportunity between her and MC. Again - this phone stuff has been handled real well and I would continue to lean into that going forward, where appropriate/can enhance a scenario.
Plenty memorable scene. Entirely suitable and true to her character. Nailed it, bullseye. I love her! (And plenty thrilled to discover see can squirt, was hoping so if not anticipating that might be true and even maybe necessary.)
Very much enjoy how that “cup” is being handled (from as far back as the initial doctor visit encounter) and the way that’s been bread-crumbed forward… I’ve recognized the hints along the way and again - am not at all disappointed by her progression to full fledged cumslut. It’s entirely believable by now and the scene at the kitchen sink… delivered. Way to hit the mark on that, once again! I so want to bury her in an endless supply of spunk. I’m pot committed!!
-A negative critique - more so in terms of how this chapter conclude - as opposed to a whole lot of situations being deftly developed and delivered upon… the tail end of things missed many opportunities. The car ride felt promising, as did some under-the-table options at the restaurant. I felt a little derailed that nothing quite happened there. I also thought having Ashley present, who had just been made aware that some amount of fornication has been occurring between Mother and Brother, could have really been an asset in terms of tension and 3rd party appeal - particularly coming off whatever guilty concerns she might have absorbed from the night before (more on that below). Also would have dove-tailed nicely into Brandy’s scenario at the top of the chapter progression. But putting that aside (I understand I cant have everything, lawl). Putting him back at home, along with an opportunity to cuck the Father in some way, wasn’t much advantaged.
When she entered his bedroom in that robe… my mind was spinning with all types of potential. Notably, he’s back where he’d been long before all this had ‘actionably’ begun. Surely, there’s some history that could have been played upon and holistically benefit Leslie as more than just a suposatory for his Demon Deal. Instead, she basically went right at a somewhat generic and almost lazy deepthroat instead. While I most definitely appreciate the scene where she’d been gifted with such skills by Lilith (another fine example of developing some storytelling more organically, advantaging all parts of what’s been built in for us thus far), this… appeared to set aside all sorts of parameters that might be interesting to consider and enjoy - had literally been woven in carefully, prior; to such a degree that I was now assuming they would be present and accounted for. In fact, it did appear they would be. But then. They weren’t. He’s there on the bed that he grew up in, a first time event for the viewer. And that all got ignored while she just simply… blast apart a pearl necklace (which was actually a nice touch to finish the scene with, however. A tip of the cap on that).
That was an especially disappointing finish for me here. Full disclosure.
Maybe it’s a case of too much good before it? Tough to meet the bar already set and surpass it? And on that note:
-Okay, Ashley…
Uhmmm… tremendous!! That was a barn burner, five alarm fire. Yet another diverse character that’s plenty purposeful to the architecture of it all and has been deftly and dutifully developed. I found this entire scenario to be a master class in development and execution. Brilliant, really. Ashley most definitely met the challenge and even supersede it. There’s been a lot of promise there and the team ought feel REAL solid about that delivery.
Fan the flames… that entire ordeal was hot as hell. For all the most obvious reasons. As well as some that aren’t.
Lastly, assuming I haven’t rant on long enough…
I’ve been giving Breadman a bit of ribbing here and there on prolonged time between releases. Shitcan that, I’m wrong. The artwork on this project has continued to advance, exponentially. Not only from an illustrated perspective but also in terms of creativity and devotion to the craft.
There’s a lot gone on by now. I can’t applaud enough how diverse these ‘arrangements’ have managed to be. Not only in terms of actions taking place but perhaps more notably the framing, inventing different ways to angle on it all or draw up the debauchery. It’s been plenty cinematic and especially impressive for cartoonish porn and that’s for certain. Again - inventive enough to encourage ongoing immersion. The importance of that cannot be understated and our boy Bread is not only wise to recognize that early on but deserves far more credit than words can qualify. YA OUGHT BE PROUD, MATE!
Gave us a fine amount of content here. Ain’t no doubt about it. And I might be able to advantage quite a bit of it… multiples of times. Yessir.
Enjoying your efforts to earn that… bread ; )
Toast yourself on a job well done and cap off the New Year proper. Happy Holidays.
Hey thank you for the praise, really it means a lot that you'd take the time to write such a thorough review, and fair points on the critiques - to clarify regarding Leslie's bit, what was it you were looking for more of in that scene? Like dialogue about it being his childhood bedroom?
- Feb 8, 2020
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hey again (sry for bad english) , 9/10 let me say this was a very fun game art ,story with some gameplay , its first time so i started from the beginning (except for 2 stores cyclope's dungeon and Pantry raid ,i vesited them before but never read the names), i hoped there is a booty call system mc call any girl in the making and (personal prefrence) that gabriel was a femboy .
While im not the dude who gave you this well drafted and thought out critique, i agree with what he said.
From my perspective, some dialogue from Leslie's perspective about the bedroom would definitelyhave aided the scene. While she has at this point almost all but fully succumbed to her desires with having drank his cum earlier, it would make a little bit more sense (at least to me) that she is still a little apprehensive, even with the terrible night that transpired with her husband. Leslie giving MC a blowjob is a really big deal, and even though she drank his cum with a slight hint of the hellroot, i would think it should still come up that this is the room she raised him in. The way things did play out it almost seems like drinking his cum broke the wall down on how far she is willing to go completely without a second thought. If she had a couple lines before hand, maybe when she was right outside his bedroom door, or maybe some thoughts afterward as she was leaving and looked around the room.
The scenario that played out seemed like it was more fitting for at MC's apartment, not his childhood single bed IMO
Still 20/10 game, keep up the great work, would give money to you again on next release
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Define what you are looking for - not just the word (because, sadly, people can't agree on definitions, anymore).
In short: the MC is taking part of the seduction and corruption of Leslie and Ashley, who are his father's wife and daughter - The MC is also seducing and/or corrupting 30 other mortals as well as several non-mortals.
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If you leave Leslie out of it, under the strict definition of netori only Candy counts since she is in a formal relationship and starts cheating after seeing the MC's dick. There are other women MC is gonna seduce that are married but none of those have content yet. Everyone else is single.
As a side note, the reason that people disagree on what NTR is due to the definition not being a direct equivalent for cuckoldry. Netorare roughly translates to "having something precious stolen" with the "something" part meaning both a tangible and non-tangible connection to a person, the actual word doesn't translate in to English properly; this is why a parent fucking someone bulling their child is considered NTR according to the Japanese even though the parent and child aren't in a sexual relationship.
Thats why there is a distinction between netorare and netori, one is where you are meant to project on the the person having something stolen and the other where you are the theif. People conflate NTR with direct physical cuckoldry since it's the most common expression of it but it's not required according to the definition.
Source: know multiple languages and these type of translation issues come up often.
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Fun fact, this is why some asian language content has absoulte word salad names, think "Super Happy Family Funtime Adventure" or something of the like, the actual name in the native tongue doesn't sound that long but due to the exact word defintion not being a direct equilvent translators will pile on multiple words with simliar but slightly different meanings to get the message across.
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I just thought about it but we have a teacher for each subject But where is the traditional angry sports teacher well after I don't want to add to BreadMan More girls who don't already have one
where is this from?I just thought about it but we have a teacher for each subject But where is the traditional angry sports teacher well after I don't want to add to BreadMan More girls who don't already have one
- May 25, 2023
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I'd like a scenario that uses some of the "non focus" girls.
Maybe Jon develops a new power that allures the average woman but it goes from flirtatious to an animalistic want for him. They start coming on to him hard in inopportune moments (like flashing and groping him in public/school etc) and he's not feeling it because they're not "focus" girls plus they could get him found out.
But Babs, Babs has turned wily and domineering like her D&D character and traps him after making it seem like she's helping Jon get away from the amorous admirers.
She wants him, now he can do this the easy way, or he can do this the hard way. The choose is his.
Maybe Jon develops a new power that allures the average woman but it goes from flirtatious to an animalistic want for him. They start coming on to him hard in inopportune moments (like flashing and groping him in public/school etc) and he's not feeling it because they're not "focus" girls plus they could get him found out.
But Babs, Babs has turned wily and domineering like her D&D character and traps him after making it seem like she's helping Jon get away from the amorous admirers.
She wants him, now he can do this the easy way, or he can do this the hard way. The choose is his.
No new characters are being added to the game.I just thought about it but we have a teacher for each subject But where is the traditional angry sports teacher well after I don't want to add to BreadMan More girls who don't already have one
Babs is a focus girl. The Focus girls are the teachers, students and townsfolk that you've met and interacted with.
The rest are 'NFC' Non Fuckable Character. They won't get any content like that.
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Source of the picture its for a friendI just thought about it but we have a teacher for each subject But where is the traditional angry sports teacher well after I don't want to add to BreadMan More girls who don't already have one
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From what I dug through, it ain't from a game sadly but from an artist named "Zensyuui" or " 十勝千石 " or "s_tokachi" in X.
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Thank you for long and good explation. I checked who is Candy. A gold digger! Gold digger + netori is a very good combination for me. Are there any woman MC can steal whose not in a formal relationship but flirting or dating with someone or whose someone's crush?
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