Quite fantastic overall. Could be better but definitely good.
Characters 10/10 -probably one of the best points about this game, characters have a strong sense of identity and they all feel pretty distinct from each other. Really really love Angelina especially. Personally really liked Dolly, Candice, Amira, Brandy, Leslie, and Sabrina a lot.
Character Designs 9.5/10 - some of these designs are really amazing. I think Dolly's design or maybe execution of her visuals could be better and some of the belly inflations I think would look hotter if they were more subtle because it'd look more like it's being realistically engorged than looking sorta out of place in how extreme it is. I also think some of the flatter chested characters could be hot if the scene/content choices made with them kinda made more sense with them like for Gabriella I feel like it'd make sense for her to be someone who has a really nice looking (not necessarily big/huge) butt and also a really appealing kinda puffy innie vagina and or to pull off that kinda small chested like "nubile" look on a less overly flat chested character
Content/Scene Ideas 9/10 - overall excellent ideas/scenes feel inspired and erotic
Premise/Atmosphere 8.5/10 - good, effective/erotic, not really special but doesn't need to be and the important point is it's good
Dialogue 6.5/10 - I do wish this game was Renpy because while the characters do sound distinct and not like puppets of a guy talking thru them, there are moments where the dialogue could be better. It's never really bad but sometimes it could be better. On a random note, the names of items/games/stores and all that are quite excellent and actually add to the eroticism of the game in a small sorta "bells and whistles" way
Pacing 4/10 - This is something I feel mixed about because there's a good amount of content. The game never really feels like a "playground of content" though which I feel like is kinda the point of RPGM and it does feel mostly linear (another reason why I kinda prefer it to be renpy). The problem is though with RPGM it's kinda by its nature a slower format and many of the scenes for a while feel kinda like a good half of a small scene at times like when it just gets good the scene is over and now there's kinda a good bit while of things you need to do until the next scene which feels kinda speed-bumpy in a way that's kinda an experience buzzkill. Later it does seem like some of the scenes feel bigger which is nice (like multi-phased scenes) but I almost feel like they're a little shoehorned like the dev is trying to meet a content quota by the subscribers to have 3 parts per scene and just sometimes filling it in rather than maybe sometimes having it 3 parts all together or like 1 part like I would've really liked to have seen Sabrina have a goblin or imp gangbang or maybe tentacle scene where maybe she summons an imp/goblin who has sex with her and that's part 1 and she's then interrupted or something decides to use a spell she thinks will send them away but instead summons a tentacle monster or an imp/goblin group. Obviously something better than this rough idea but I think the dev already kinda knows this and sorta does this but it still feels a little like meeting a quota of content at sometimes later on or like this disjointed sudden kinda clear maybe got some requests to do more fuller or multi-part scenes which I welcome and I'm glad for just think they could be better. I do think by making a really satisfying inspired content scene whether that's multi-part altogether or multi-part that's parsed with relatively short inbetween scenes to kinda escalate the scenario can really make up for or sorta justify any kind of stretches of gameplay or countering this buzzkill effect.
Story/Scene Progression 10/10 - the sorta layout of how scenes happen is excellent. You don't at all have this problem of like the first half of the game introducing a cast of characters and they're all in non-nude content and there's no sexual anything or very little then in the second half suddenly sex with everyone all at once unlocking in a sort of cheap way. It feels very much exciting and not so predictable as to what the next scene will be but overall the game does have a general escalation arc of less hardcore in the beginning and more fetish or involved sex scenes later on.
P.S. I also do think like the game overall suffers a bit from like sometimes I wanna progress more with a character but the game kinda then introduces all these other characters. Maybe this is minor or a taste thing but I really want to see more of Brandy and feel like she's just been on the bench for a long time now. I also want to see what happens with Amira and Angelina of course. I realize maybe a lot of this has to do with a big cast and the game still being in development though so I don't really hold it against the game. Another thing is a few times in the game I felt like it was kinda blue-bally or a let down where it felt like the game was getting somewhere good but then nothing happened like the imp thing with Sabrina or little details like I feel like the first scene with Angelina would've been a lot better if the protagonist produced an especially large load because I feel like it fits with the context/character/setting. Also Candice's voice sounds weird/doesn't really fit. She sounds like one of those animated minions rather than like a mean turned submissive bitchy feminine something type. Also the quest manager seems pretty unreliable for me anyway or glitched or something and kinda have no idea when something is up to current update.
Characters 10/10 -probably one of the best points about this game, characters have a strong sense of identity and they all feel pretty distinct from each other. Really really love Angelina especially. Personally really liked Dolly, Candice, Amira, Brandy, Leslie, and Sabrina a lot.
Character Designs 9.5/10 - some of these designs are really amazing. I think Dolly's design or maybe execution of her visuals could be better and some of the belly inflations I think would look hotter if they were more subtle because it'd look more like it's being realistically engorged than looking sorta out of place in how extreme it is. I also think some of the flatter chested characters could be hot if the scene/content choices made with them kinda made more sense with them like for Gabriella I feel like it'd make sense for her to be someone who has a really nice looking (not necessarily big/huge) butt and also a really appealing kinda puffy innie vagina and or to pull off that kinda small chested like "nubile" look on a less overly flat chested character
Content/Scene Ideas 9/10 - overall excellent ideas/scenes feel inspired and erotic
Premise/Atmosphere 8.5/10 - good, effective/erotic, not really special but doesn't need to be and the important point is it's good
Dialogue 6.5/10 - I do wish this game was Renpy because while the characters do sound distinct and not like puppets of a guy talking thru them, there are moments where the dialogue could be better. It's never really bad but sometimes it could be better. On a random note, the names of items/games/stores and all that are quite excellent and actually add to the eroticism of the game in a small sorta "bells and whistles" way
Pacing 4/10 - This is something I feel mixed about because there's a good amount of content. The game never really feels like a "playground of content" though which I feel like is kinda the point of RPGM and it does feel mostly linear (another reason why I kinda prefer it to be renpy). The problem is though with RPGM it's kinda by its nature a slower format and many of the scenes for a while feel kinda like a good half of a small scene at times like when it just gets good the scene is over and now there's kinda a good bit while of things you need to do until the next scene which feels kinda speed-bumpy in a way that's kinda an experience buzzkill. Later it does seem like some of the scenes feel bigger which is nice (like multi-phased scenes) but I almost feel like they're a little shoehorned like the dev is trying to meet a content quota by the subscribers to have 3 parts per scene and just sometimes filling it in rather than maybe sometimes having it 3 parts all together or like 1 part like I would've really liked to have seen Sabrina have a goblin or imp gangbang or maybe tentacle scene where maybe she summons an imp/goblin who has sex with her and that's part 1 and she's then interrupted or something decides to use a spell she thinks will send them away but instead summons a tentacle monster or an imp/goblin group. Obviously something better than this rough idea but I think the dev already kinda knows this and sorta does this but it still feels a little like meeting a quota of content at sometimes later on or like this disjointed sudden kinda clear maybe got some requests to do more fuller or multi-part scenes which I welcome and I'm glad for just think they could be better. I do think by making a really satisfying inspired content scene whether that's multi-part altogether or multi-part that's parsed with relatively short inbetween scenes to kinda escalate the scenario can really make up for or sorta justify any kind of stretches of gameplay or countering this buzzkill effect.
Story/Scene Progression 10/10 - the sorta layout of how scenes happen is excellent. You don't at all have this problem of like the first half of the game introducing a cast of characters and they're all in non-nude content and there's no sexual anything or very little then in the second half suddenly sex with everyone all at once unlocking in a sort of cheap way. It feels very much exciting and not so predictable as to what the next scene will be but overall the game does have a general escalation arc of less hardcore in the beginning and more fetish or involved sex scenes later on.
P.S. I also do think like the game overall suffers a bit from like sometimes I wanna progress more with a character but the game kinda then introduces all these other characters. Maybe this is minor or a taste thing but I really want to see more of Brandy and feel like she's just been on the bench for a long time now. I also want to see what happens with Amira and Angelina of course. I realize maybe a lot of this has to do with a big cast and the game still being in development though so I don't really hold it against the game. Another thing is a few times in the game I felt like it was kinda blue-bally or a let down where it felt like the game was getting somewhere good but then nothing happened like the imp thing with Sabrina or little details like I feel like the first scene with Angelina would've been a lot better if the protagonist produced an especially large load because I feel like it fits with the context/character/setting. Also Candice's voice sounds weird/doesn't really fit. She sounds like one of those animated minions rather than like a mean turned submissive bitchy feminine something type. Also the quest manager seems pretty unreliable for me anyway or glitched or something and kinda have no idea when something is up to current update.
