This is a really good game, with an interesting story and really cute girls. I particularly love the Ilvog sisters and Mira, though all of the girls have something special about them as well. The main character seems a little slow sometimes, like when meeting Elly she says that he should have stared at her horns like a 'gotcha', if he was quicker he would have said that they aren't really unusual to him, his sister has horns. He potentially has access to Bazrel's strength, power, knowledge and skill, but he hasn't really realised any of that, it would be nice if he had something of his own he could use like at least being smart. Speaking of Elly, I really hope that he is able to make her an ally, she's gorgeous. That pure white skin that she and Undyne have is really beautiful.
One other thing that I wish would be for when the hints show to do another story first, that if that requirement was met that the hint would not mention it, so it would be clear whether that's something we actually still have to do or not.