Great demo so far! There is a good amount of content compared to the others 0.2 versions out there, the renders are very nice and the story so far seems intriguing, playing as a private eye is such a cult (I named myself Henry Chinaski for that honour). The only critique so far is that choosing to write in slang, accent or whatever is called, while it certainly adds to the story made it difficult to me, not being a native speaker, to completely enjoy the dialogues, many times I were not able to distinguish typos from slang...
Anyway, I like it very much and can't wait to play it further.
PS: I don't know if your friend cop saying shiiiiit was meant as an hommage to Isiah Whitlock, but I laughed hard thinking so.