So many things could have done better and made more sense.
This game by design is fucked beyond repair.
If dev decides to do a 180 one some of the writing decisions it is salvageable.
My suggestion is just remove the whole fucking "i aM yOuR SuBcoNsCioUs HURR DURR!!" thing. You dont even need to remove Serena. Just make her a demon or succubus or some shit, that can read your mind and give you minor superpowers. I guarantee you that would be less cringe than this.
Having said that. Oh boy where do i start with this game.
First time i played one of the earlier versions, it made me so mad, I was instantly gonna rate this 1/5 and throw it into trash.
I was like hey lets not be that harsh.
Lets wait couple more updates. let it marinate.
"Let him cook", if you will. But holy fuck it got worse.
I was hoping this new update would fix some of the most basic grammar errors. Mainly "your""you are""yourrearer!!!!!". And i had a dream, where some of the dumbest fucking plot points were re-written. But its was a long shot.
who the fuck wrote this shit.
I remember trying it out just for the pregnancy content and gritting my teeth, just powering through painfully cringe writing. Then i remembered, why did i stop playing it in the first place. Even if you overlook all the stupid shit, the writing , the pacing,the characters, the character models, boring ass plot line. even if you forgive all of that. game feels so unfinished.
Now before you say "Duh, it is v0.00something ofcourse its unfinished"
What im trying to say by unfinished,
if the game had chapters. And lets say chapter one was from start - till MC got hit by Lera's car. Even the supposed finished "chapter one" feels half baked. It looks still under construction.
Thats why i stopped playing before;
-Hoping they would re-visit and polish early game.
-3-4 updates later, I try it out again.
-I see nothing fucking changed. Even the immersion breaking backpack glich from earliest version still there.
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For all of its worth, there was an attempt. This almost looked like a great game from its cover. Taking care of your pregnant ladies and such..
Being a good responsible father etc..
But nah.
To even reach to that point you are constantly wrestling with shit plot.
Well thats life i guess.
I wish it was worth the effort,time and money.
With some polish here and there this game can make 3/5 tops.
Not more, not less.
When that happens i will change my rating.
Will it happen? I don't know.
Maybe next year.