Paz

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i must say i really disliked this scene and wished for an option to just bring ain back to her room and hang his wife there instead so she can have a taste from her own medicine (including some snarky comments from the raider girl cause she is damn right that doing this to her own daughter is fucked up...) didnt have a problem with the wife till that scene but seriously after that scene i try to avoid her whenever it is possible.
even only the option to say that it was over the top and just free her and maybe let her stay in the cell a few days would be a better way (good that at last the spanking can be declined). this punishment just dont add up with previous choices how you can behave towards ain (be a nice loving father, ok mybe a bit too much loving ;) or an asshole that uses her only for his pleasure like in the dining room scene) maybe it is possible to insert just a few lines and another option to the scene wich dont even need new renders like an option when you enter the cell and see her to stop it and talk about the punishmet with his wife or just continue like it is (if stopping the scene could just skip to the part where he declines to spank/fuck her and she is released with a few new sentences and a little discussion that if the wife wants to punish their daughters she should discuss it with him beforehand) this way her place would not be questioned and it would even add some deep to the characters.
I'll be honest, the total absence of periods and sentences makes it a bit hard to read and I may have missed the point entirely, but I don't see how effectively removing willful decisions from a person (Zahra in this case), and having her ask Z about everything can be considered "adding character depth".
If anything else, it reduces her to a husk by making Z's partner of 20+ years having to ask about how to behave in their household (or assume they are not on the same wavelength already). In fact, I think we also imply so in some dialogues.

And Ain was not punished like that for breaking a vase or something. The misstep was slightly more grave (potentially for her in the end).
 

fortuna95

Lezz kiss for peace!
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Dev update 05.09.2021
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Hey everyone. Scene B is rendered and being written, and although it's much shorter than Scene A, it still has content I don't want to spoil, so here are some random pictures of the update to keep you guessing ;p (I know, very mean...)

Progress:
New world map: 95%
Home interactions: 0%
Harem scene: 40%
Scene A: 95%
Scene B: 80%

d1b rework (Ivy in Old Cairo): 100%
Fairy basement variation: 100%
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brymont92

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Jun 12, 2017
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Its there a way to get a notification when the game its updated? Such a good game. Clever writing. MC was already fucking half of the LI prior the start of the game. Thats so good story wise. We get more story and less LI its falling in love with the MC out of the blue.
 

Kulman

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Sep 28, 2017
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I see your point. Still, I find it funny and hot that, because you cannot fuck her, you get horny from giving her a massage, and then go to your wife (and slave) to “solve” that.
It is also nice to "work your way" to something with her. Though so many games end up blueballing people for so long, it was refreshing to immediately grope the tits of your other daughter. Best of both worlds.
 

Kellermann

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Oct 20, 2020
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True but harder to get more you want to have it ;)
Not sure I could want Shani any more than I already do! :giggle:
Why did I have to pick as my waifu the one girl you can't have sex with in the game? I'm cursed. :cry:

It is also nice to "work your way" to something with her. Though so many games end up blueballing people for so long, it was refreshing to immediately grope the tits of your other daughter. Best of both worlds.
Yes, that was a pretty nice consolation prize I must say.
 

Osider

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Sep 23, 2019
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Not sure I could want Shani any more than I already do! :giggle:
Why did I have to pick as my waifu the one girl you can't have sex with in the game? I'm cursed. :cry:

Yes, that was a pretty nice consolation prize I must say.
Soo true, i have the same curse it seem, always the not possible or the one who is available in late game who take my preference.
 
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