Ren'Py Desert Stalker [v0.18.1] [Zetan]

[Lordroedor]

No telling if the dev has put that much thought into it. It honestly wouldn't surprise me if he has, though. He seems to have put thought into the story line so far.

There is the potential for Zaton to be a guiding influence on the Queen. On the other hand, his influence may attract the attention of the court, forcing the queen to turn on him. She has already voiced her suspicions about people manipulating her for their own purpose. It might not take much for her to turn that paranoia on Zaton.

You are probably right but good writers have good understanding of people. That's why they are good writers. Even if he doesn't have the information, he probably understands that sadism can be associated to youth. He makes Zaton say something similar: "She is exploring the limits of her power" or something like that. He may not know the exact data but he understands that teens are freaking dangerous because they still didn't have time to know their limits, their real desires remain unknown for themselves, they keep clumsily walking in the dark. And they tend to hurt people in the process. That's why highschools can be like hell on earth.

I don't think She is gonna turn on zaton. It could happen, but Zaton would have to be very clumsy. In reality, I think she is more immature than Shani (that secluded life). She has been forced to mature intellectually, but her emotions haven't developed equally. We are being told once and again how easy she is to manipulate. By her guards, by her priests and by Zaton. At the end of the last update Zaton has her in his fist. He just had to show care. Interest in her. And that's all. That girl is incredibly needy.

 

[evaw]

Not to mention, this one came first. So Hot Sand of Antarctica looks like Desert Stalker.

Anyway, they are very similar

 

[Master of Puppets]

There is the potential for Zaton to be a guiding influence on the Queen. On the other hand, his influence may attract the attention of the court, forcing the queen to turn on him. She has already voiced her suspicions about people manipulating her for their own purpose. It might not take much for her to turn that paranoia on Zaton.

You think that her disliking the bureaucrats using her and being suspicious of them makes her more likely to fall for them tricking her into turning on the one guy who actually cares about her and isn't trying to get anything from her (except her body)? That's a pretty hot take. I can certainly see them trying to do that, but I really can't see it working.

 

[Xythurr]

You are probably right but good writers have good understanding of people. That's why they are good writers. Even if he doesn't have the information, he probably understands that sadism can be associated to youth. He makes Zaton say something similar: "She is exploring the limits of her power" or something like that. He may not know the exact data but he understands that teens are freaking dangerous because they still didn't have time to know their limits, their real desires remain unknown for themselves, they keep clumsily walking in the dark. And they tend to hurt people in the process. That's why highschools can be like hell on earth.

I don't think She is gonna turn on zaton. It could happen, but Zaton would have to be very clumsy. In reality, I think she is more immature than Shani (that secluded life). She has been forced to mature intellectually, but her emotions haven't developed equally. We are being told once and again how easy she is to manipulate. By her guards, by her priests and by Zaton. At the end of the last update Zaton has her in his fist. He just had to show care. Interest in her. And that's all. That girl is incredibly needy.

So what I'm reading on that second part is she has serious daddy issues and since being a stripper is obviously out she'll have to settle for some sexual healing from Big Daddy Z's magic dong? I agree!

 

[Walter Victor]

The one thing I see that could make her turn on him is an attack on her self image. Her vanity & upbringing makes her extremely concerned with public perception. She has publically allowed Zaton to have sex with an on duty palace guard, no longer holds him to a standard of deferrance & submission, & spends time alone with him in her quarters. Should the elders start telling her that "others" are questioning these liberties as a sign of weakness...

Tell us how that plays out. Would that not be a 'game over' situation?

 

[slightchance]

There are so many ways this could play out.

1. She could deny him entry to the palace or the city even and only permit the women of the household to enter.
2. Have the elders removed and find people who are less concerned about what happens in her bedchambers.
3. Affirm the positions of those in power who are worried about being replaced or overlooked.
4. Make Zaton send his women to the elders as a sign of goodwill.
5. Send a naked Zaton into the arena where he needs to wrestle and nut into a woman while they try to suck him off instead.
6. Have Zaton flogged and run through the streets.

 

[Walter Victor]

Not necessarily. There is the mutant faction seeking both revenge & acceptance, raiders, the Decayed. Other forces are at play. A setback for the MC, even a retreat, wouldn't have to spell the end. There are a lot of ways it could go, some more likely than others. A good story often has twists & turns of fate, surprises, & victories snatched from the jaws of defeat.

Sure, but it would seem that you are adding a very large branch to the story, with all the problems that implies. Doable, but not without significant effort placed on developing this route.

 

[wildride69]

Sure, but it would seem that you are adding a very large branch to the story, with all the problems that implies. Doable, but not without significant effort placed on developing this route.

What? You think it may be a bad idea to add a route that will probably take 2 years to complete with no further advancement of the story until it's done.

Shock I tell you I am Shocked!

 

[PaxHadrian17]

Sure, but it would seem that you are adding a very large branch to the story, with all the problems that implies. Doable, but not without significant effort placed on developing this route.

I'll add - it also does not account for the amount of time the dev would have to take away from developing other parts of the story.

I suspect that if the dev ever held a vote on Patreon/SS asking his $ supporters where they would like him to emphasize his efforts - slowing down development of all the 'in the works' parts of DS from the latest dev log would not be a favored choice.

This would negatively impact development of most to all of the rest of the current story arcs just to add in a new, complicated branch that impacts the future main story and multiple other story arcs downstream.

As a $ supporter myself - I would take a hard pass on that, and I've seen no hue and cry for more complicated branching than we already have.

The vast majority of comments I see are asking/hoping for planned content more quickly not more slowly.

Cheers!!

 

[Walter Victor]

What? You think it may be a bad idea to add a route that will probably take 2 years to complete with no further advancement of the story until it's done.

Shock I tell you I am Shocked!

People keep coming up with scenarios that, if implemented, would take decades to complete. *sigh*

Thankfully, none of them are going to happen.

 

[GetOutOfMyLab]

you all should see the #story-ideas channel on discord...

 

[PHIL101-YYouPPHard]

Not necessarily. There is the mutant faction seeking both revenge & acceptance, raiders, the Decayed. Other forces are at play. A setback for the MC, even a retreat, wouldn't have to spell the end. There are a lot of ways it could go, some more likely than others. A good story often has twists & turns of fate, surprises, & victories snatched from the jaws of defeat.

Sure, but it would seem that you are adding a very large branch to the story, with all the problems that implies. Doable, but not without significant effort placed on developing this route.

Wouldn't be surprised if there's a planned route with the Queen/Palace where you get on their shit list; this could easily loop into that. And even better if it's toward the conclusion of the VN; it doesn't need to be a big, huge sub-plot undertaking imo. It could be more of a sub-ending.

 

[Penumbral Evanescence]

#story-ideas channel on discord

I bet lots of juicy stories are planned for Omar

 

[X Deimos]

omg!!! one of the best games here

 

[Deleted member 8218799]

omg!!! one of the best games here

Agreed. The renders, story and characters are great.

I can't wait to dom that bitch of a queen.

 

[ImlerithRate]

Question for those who play with swinging enabled...How much content am I miss and is it worth it?

 

[MAGO-DAG]

Question for those who play with swinging enabled...How much content am I miss and is it worth it?

Swinging is not so much as far as I know, it all depends on you, but the content is quite hot and there is a lot even without swing or with swing.

Even if you play with swinging enabled, you will still be given a choice and will understand what you missed or not.

 

[ImlerithRate]

Swinging is not so much as far as I know, it all depends on you, but the content is quite hot and there is a lot even without swing or with swing.

I've already finish the whole game without it. Now I'm thinking of replaying it again when the next update comes out, so I thought I'd ask and maybe give it a try.

 

[Deleted member 8218799]

Question for those who play with swinging enabled...How much content am I miss and is it worth it?

Worth depends on you, I'm afraid. But there are quite a few scenes. Did you get the Shani & Queen bitch bath scene? It's hot.

 

[Lordroedor]

The one thing I see that could make her turn on him is an attack on her self image. Her vanity & upbringing makes her extremely concerned with public perception. She has publically allowed Zaton to have sex with an on duty palace guard, no longer holds him to a standard of deferrance & submission, & spends time alone with him in her quarters. Should the elders start telling her that "others" are questioning these liberties as a sign of weakness...

You may be right but I don't think her own self image is so good at all. The girl is insecure. The way to manipulate someone into submission requires you to hurt their self image. Then, you offer a hand, your care, confidence, advice, or love, and the other person tend to fall under your control. That's what narcisists do, by the way. Be ware of those who make you doubt of yourself and then heal you right after. They are manipulating you.

This is what Shany and Zaton are playing with the queen. They had sex in front of her, excluding her indirectly, then she comes and they offer her their attention. That was pretty brilliant from Shani, I was impressed.