xapican
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- May 11, 2020
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Did you play the game ? up to the last update ? , yes you can point out bad writing, it is ok to express your opinion, although I didn't understand what was his complain, about romantic crap.I like the post apocalyptic choose your own adventure even if I can hardly stand visual novels. I can understand the complaint it's like Chekhov's gun. You present the smoke right in the beginning even going so far as to ask if its something you want to avoid entirely, setting up the expectation going in but never deliver. I'm getting Doom/Animal Crossing vibes where it's violence out the gate and 40 hrs in you're wondering how it led you to pulling weeds and catching butterflies. It's the false advertisement of including "spanking" as a tag when the dude only slaps her ass once and never again. I don't think it's worth shaming a person who's expectations promised from the outset are never delivered. We're allowed to call out bad writing flow, right?
It sounds for me that he wished, the option to rape Shani, In the game there are plenty of scenes where the sex is everything but romantic and vanilla, just not with that character, hell you can even force fuck the queen, and that is not enough ? you can take Ain, Shanis siter down into the dungeon and have your play with her, as a sub, still not enough ?? you can go to the market place with her and humilate her public , still not enough ? you can break a rescued girl and make her your sex slave, with all the Dom sub play, still not enough ? oh than go to the market and find the girl who tried to kidnap Ain, hate fuck her and give her to the hungry crowd, still not enough ?? I can go on there are many intermezzos which are everything but romantic crap.
It is nobel from your side to defend the point of view of this user, although those who played the game for a time now, don't really understand what he is talking about.