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Ren'Py Dickgirl Dorm Revamp [v0.2] [Icarus Media]
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Man these reviews!
Lessor guy might just scrap the whole thing or get downhearted but nope, I take on board the feedback about character looks and the more edgy political stuff and will adapt that for the next version (although my patrons voted to keep the stereotypes so that's not changing) Which by the way I start back on after next month so I begin working back on this in June.
I'll try revamping the models but honestly it will be in Honey Select 2. Simple as. Navigation I put in as it was now because I planned to impliment an arrow key system either clicking arrows on the screen or using the keyboard, combined with the possibility of fast travel via a map too.
But feedback aside. I'm taking this as a challenge and I want in about a years time for you all to come back and at least have 3 stars on those, and I'm damn sure gonna do stuff to earn it. Bring it on!
Lessor guy might just scrap the whole thing or get downhearted but nope, I take on board the feedback about character looks and the more edgy political stuff and will adapt that for the next version (although my patrons voted to keep the stereotypes so that's not changing) Which by the way I start back on after next month so I begin working back on this in June.
I'll try revamping the models but honestly it will be in Honey Select 2. Simple as. Navigation I put in as it was now because I planned to impliment an arrow key system either clicking arrows on the screen or using the keyboard, combined with the possibility of fast travel via a map too.
But feedback aside. I'm taking this as a challenge and I want in about a years time for you all to come back and at least have 3 stars on those, and I'm damn sure gonna do stuff to earn it. Bring it on!
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If stereotypes is an issue, then all that's needed is a toggle switch. Replace the more extreme dialogue or politics with a less extreme variation. That way it doesn't need anything too bad like model changes or gameplay changes.
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your enthusiasm is remarkable. I'll be glad to give you the rating you deserve. As for the political stuff don't sweat it, I just ignore the things I don't like and focus on the positive.
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Thank you, but in the interests of fairness I'd wait a few versions in so there is something of substance to review. You enjoy the rest of your day/night now.
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Can't wait to play this one, i will download it right away
I have discovered the world of Futanari by watching your videos. (loved Isadora, best Futa character ever !)
you're a boss
I have discovered the world of Futanari by watching your videos. (loved Isadora, best Futa character ever !)
you're a boss
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Have you played her game in my sig? I've got another update coming out in about a month for it too.
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I just played Isadora the wife explorer, it was a blast ! looking forward to the next update.
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Glad you enjoyed it. I wanted to do something a bit different and have it from the opposite perspective.
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You'll be able to in the revamp. If you can tolerate the visuals.
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I'm going through the thread now and writing all feedback onto my notepad, will post findings below.
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Alright so I went back through the thread and the reviews, really painful when it's your creation but it has to be done; and collated the feedback and here are my notes summed up:
* Navigation system needs changing.
* Story is too edgy and humerous, whilst humour is good, the previous game did have a bit of seriousness.
* Characters need more depth than just empty stereotypes.
* Intro with Sati and Jun seems to be rushed and doesn't have depth.
* Amina, Yolanda and Cally are ugly, change the model looks
* Need a way to know if characters are in the room to interact with.
* Make the intro not bombard people with knowledge but let them find out gradually.
* Create a fast travel map.
I'll bookmark this post and start on this then.
* Navigation system needs changing.
* Story is too edgy and humerous, whilst humour is good, the previous game did have a bit of seriousness.
* Characters need more depth than just empty stereotypes.
* Intro with Sati and Jun seems to be rushed and doesn't have depth.
* Amina, Yolanda and Cally are ugly, change the model looks
* Need a way to know if characters are in the room to interact with.
* Make the intro not bombard people with knowledge but let them find out gradually.
* Create a fast travel map.
I'll bookmark this post and start on this then.
In my assessment, the only thing objectively wrong with the game from that list is the navigation. I agree with some of the others, they might be considered matters of taste. There’s a reason that three of the points you listed are about navigation.
* I think most 3D models are ugly, and the ones in this game are certainly not among the best. It wouldn’t stop me from enjoying the game, though.
* The edgy stereotypes are certainly not for everyone, and I won’t ever take your story seriously if you use them. I don’t necessarily want to take porn games seriously, though. Making them more silly and removed-from-reality may well enhance the experience, allowing more focus on the fetishes/sexy ideas concepts. Thinking of your other game, I wouldn’t enjoy the game at all if I took it seriously, since the mother seems like an actually horrible rapist. If it didn’t operate on porn logic, if the subject was taken at all seriously, I would have probably quit playing it.
* Intros can be constructed in many different valid ways. As long as the intro hooks people, anything is fine, and it is often easier to keep short intros engaging, even if some things are missing.
To be clear, every point raised is valid criticism you should seriously consider for the game. Other than reducing the excessive amount of clicks needed for movement, implementing changes is very something where you should weight the costs and benefits of before committing.
* I think most 3D models are ugly, and the ones in this game are certainly not among the best. It wouldn’t stop me from enjoying the game, though.
* The edgy stereotypes are certainly not for everyone, and I won’t ever take your story seriously if you use them. I don’t necessarily want to take porn games seriously, though. Making them more silly and removed-from-reality may well enhance the experience, allowing more focus on the fetishes/sexy ideas concepts. Thinking of your other game, I wouldn’t enjoy the game at all if I took it seriously, since the mother seems like an actually horrible rapist. If it didn’t operate on porn logic, if the subject was taken at all seriously, I would have probably quit playing it.
* Intros can be constructed in many different valid ways. As long as the intro hooks people, anything is fine, and it is often easier to keep short intros engaging, even if some things are missing.
To be clear, every point raised is valid criticism you should seriously consider for the game. Other than reducing the excessive amount of clicks needed for movement, implementing changes is very something where you should weight the costs and benefits of before committing.
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That's why I went through the thread and reviews and documented the bullet points here, so I can work on those.
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As I usually say, adding a toggle would be the best decision. It may be more work, but it suits more people that way. Also, a way to skip intros usually makes the long intro argument moot.
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Since you're taking feedback, Icarus, I have to echo the sentiments that the racial stereotypes went way too hard in the original. It made it difficult to get into any of the characters because they were just such caricatures. I hope you make them more grounded characters this time around.
Also, I'm a bit worried from the intro that this remake will be too NTS focused. The scenario is so perfectly set up for real NTR, and I really hope there is a good amount of content where MC is unaware/unwilling to share/doesn't get a say and gets cucked against their will.
Also, I just wanted to say I really enjoy a lot of your work, and thank you for being one of few creators committed to making content for this particular niche. I'm only including this feedback because I have really high hopes for this remake (I thought the first one had so much potential that when I noticed there were a ton of unused renders in the game files, I actually took the time to write those scenes myself and code them into the game for my own purposes.)
Also, I'm a bit worried from the intro that this remake will be too NTS focused. The scenario is so perfectly set up for real NTR, and I really hope there is a good amount of content where MC is unaware/unwilling to share/doesn't get a say and gets cucked against their will.
Also, I just wanted to say I really enjoy a lot of your work, and thank you for being one of few creators committed to making content for this particular niche. I'm only including this feedback because I have really high hopes for this remake (I thought the first one had so much potential that when I noticed there were a ton of unused renders in the game files, I actually took the time to write those scenes myself and code them into the game for my own purposes.)
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Damn I'll be honest, I wish I had thought of that, it allows people either to get into the game with no fuss AND lets the ones who want the background and story to have their fill too.
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So in regards feedback that these 3 were ugly, here is a bit of rejigging. Amina has had the most work, Cally had a slight change of hair and the freckles less obvious, oh and if it's the big nose you were thinking was odd remember, she likes to drink so she either falls on her face a lot or gets into fights. Yolanda I shortened the width of the nose and the size of the lips, and added a different ponytail to cover up her 'giant forehead'.