Hi!
Here is a review from me for DoD so far: I have to say my current rating given is one I do not give often. It is very rare for me to give a thumbs down for a game I really like due to technical issues!
I like the story and character stories quite much, the MC is done well (not a loser maniac or a body even the Neandethals would run away from), the girls are nice to beautiful (I have a special soft spot for Kimiko, Julie, Lana, Claire and Kiara), so why my rather negative result?
You drop the gameplay ball during the sandbox and hard at that! And it is not about the usual complains in the thread, like e.g map and movement, either.
I am a hobby writer myself, so I know what you aim for with that 100% loyal hard borderline on main story progress. In a game with several LI´s and possible paths I think that is not the best choice, but it is one I can live with.
What ruins it for me is that in the beginning of the sandbox you gain and lose points through events only. No chance to raise and lower stats otherwise. For instance if you want to just pursue Kimiko and make her your only love, you can follow her quest/storyline, but sooner or later you will hit events with loyal and corruptions scores you have to meet and simply cannot. And you have only one chance to get them right.
You have to stumble around the sandbox, starting random events with the various girls (even those you have zero interest in) to find out which girls can give you loyal and/or corruption points. For example, in one playthrough shortly before rage-quitting this mess, I got a Julie event which gave me the corruption points needed to watch porn, so I could raise the CPs without events. And even that has an Achilles-heel! All the events you can do only once have very oszillating prerequisites when it comes to LP/** and you can still be softlocked, because you never know what you need beforehand.
Another thing on this, it is really easy to gain a couple corruption points just by being nice to someone or looking at breasts literally hanging into your face. Just looking at a nice pair of breasts does not make you disloyal, just as a girl looking at a dick does not make her disloyal, we are all human. And even if you go for the over puritan stance in the game on stats, you should also give the option to regain the 100% loyal by something else than just events. It can easily happen that you gain the loyal points only by interacting with characters you have zero interest in.
It would lift DoD up by a kilometer if you could have an activity or repeatable event for both loyal and corruption points from the start of the sandbox. So you can raise and lower stats with some regularity on your own. Currently the sandbox is simply the illusion of choice, since you have to interact with some characters no matter what to progress the storyline. And these characters can be ones your own MC normally would not interact with.
I really like DoD, but these gameplay related flaws lower my enjoyment of it quite a bit.