Others Dirty Chatting [v0.13] [Mimir Games]

[MimirGames]

A hint system if you're stuck would be a huge help

Thanks for the feedback, down the line I want to implement something where you can straight up shoot a text in the tutorial conversation to get some hints regarding the current step of the story.

Don't agree with you at all dude, I think it will be interesting to see Clementine's progression from person on the sidelines to actively participating in having fun and embracing herself. Jade serves as Clementine's foil and anchor in the story - someone to compare Clementine to, character who will react to and influence Clem's progress in a different manner than player adding element of chaos, dynamics and grounding. It would be a lot more boring if it was 1 on 1. A lot of games do that and it feels stale and without nuance.
You just need to give it a little bit more time. This is literally a prologue. Painting an overall character landscape. It will be a lot worse if it is rushed.
For me, writing-wise, first two episodes feel great - in the end of it I've got a clear idea of who is who and what can I expect from them. I actually remembered specifics about the characters and it's a great sign.
The only thing that really irks me in terms of writing is the abundance of "!" after every message. Protagonist seems just a little bit too excited pretty much about EVERYTHING.

Thank you kindly for the very detailed feedback, it helps a lot. For now it's a bit all over the place as I just want to showcase a bit of everything but at the end of the day writing quality is one of my top priorities. English is not my native language either so it's also good to know if something sounds weird, your points are duly noted !

this is what a "phone" porn game should be. stuff like slut phone or blah blah blah phone are all just slideshows of instant extreme (usually cuckold) porn that is no different from the other 1000 ntr slideshow visual novels pumped out daily. its nice to have something that actually makes use of the setting/format.

i would suggest on the not instagram app when a character has a comment under a photo, like the roommate commenting under the main girl, you should be able to get to their profile by clicking on the comment. even if there isnt much/any content on it it would be a nice touch. that could even be an alternative way of finding their not onlyfans rather than the current ai image enhancement thing or whatever that is supposed to be in the gallery.

Cheers for the feedback ! I've heard that a few times and it's of course very much planned, the goal is for the apps to feel as immersive as possible with a bunch of hyperlinks, every character having her own social media pages, etc.

 

[Random123G]

What is AI Powered OCR?

EDIT: I discovered what it does.

 

[Tir]

Something similar would be the manyfans app, doesn't make sense that the two that's in your front page is user doesn't exist. perhaps paid first only.