Hentai_Kishi

Member
Game Developer
Jul 24, 2018
490
1,741
It's nice to see a Shadowrun-like world without the cyberpunk era(maybe it would be more Coffee Talk than Shadowrun). I didn't play Warlock and Boobs enough but the art seems similar, except in some scenes where the artstyle changes completely, it doesn't detract from the game or anything it's just that it seems a little off to change the style just for some scenes. The game seems reasonable well done.

One issue I see is the text cutting, I don't know if it's my particular resolution but the text cuts a little on the right side of the screen, it only happens when there are too many characters in a single line I risk a guess but I can't possibly know.
 
May 8, 2019
195
323
Looks really good and promising. It needs a walk speed adjuster though. I'm unsure if the dev should have added the group sex CG at the start of the game. I mean, right now I know she'll be an ultimate slut. It kinda ruins the mood for me. Did I lose interest? Nah, but don't think it's necessary. Would have liked to see it in the late phases of the game after a certain progression (if it ever does :HideThePain:).

Good luck to the dev!
 

Danjuro83

Newbie
Jul 29, 2017
98
254
Just played the game, art its amazing, story it's good (I love sharing themes), but the 'game over' is a pain in the ass. I would remove the 'game over' from the game, it make no sense in a "kinetic novel" also the only purpose of that is to piss off players.

I don't think I will play again until the 'game over' is removed cuz I get a random game over and that feels like I wasted my time playing the game.
 

Eldar

Porn Connoisseur
Donor
Aug 28, 2017
66
420
Sadly, a lot of the dialog is unreadable, because it flows off the screen. Should be an easy fix, but it's unfortunate the dev did not notice that before uploading the first version :unsure:.
 

Burai

Member
Oct 1, 2017
107
90
Pretty much I got the game over screen, is this normal? Due to the text cutting, I don't know which npc i have to talk to for brownie points usage.

EDIT: Just reloaded a save, I dont know if theres anything else other than Lily in her underwear. is there BP scenes yet?


First Impressions:
Actually pretty good, the premise is not exactly original but it is a porn game afterall. The art is spectacular, I know the tags aren't everyone's cup of tea since you can probably see the ending from far away here, but I still encourage any degenerate to pick this game up. This is 0.1 so I can't give it a real review until later, also I don't know how long the update cycle is going to be. If 0.2 is any good, I'll throw a couple bucks a month, even if it's the art style. Characters are fine, I do like the shadow-run feel with fantasy characters just chilling and minding their own business, so hopefully we get some interaction soon. I'll keep this game under my watchlist
 
Last edited:

Fazed

Well-Known Member
Nov 21, 2018
1,812
3,945
I gather this is supposed to be a....beautiful... story about overcoming hardship together? If so its a rather extreme way to do it. I guess it would be...sweet...when they eventually make it in the end but I am too...weak...to stomach this kind of story. And that is fine. You said what it's going to be and you didn't mince words. So while I won't play it, the art is well done and I am sure you will find an audience just with that alone, the story if done well would keep others coming back. So good luck with it.
 
  • Like
Reactions: Ursus4321

Deleted member 770309

Well-Known Member
Jul 23, 2018
1,406
2,236
It says so on the patreon page,

"Welcome to anyone first coming across my page and Disorder! If you haven't already, please check out the "About" section of my page, it'll explain what to expect in Disorder in general. Details of what to expect -

Disorder is centered off of swinging/hotwife. I wouldn't necessarily say NTR or even cuckold, but swinging/hotwife yes."
Looks cuck to me lol
 
  • Like
Reactions: hyfka

Everilld

Active Member
Jul 25, 2017
753
592
The tags say swinging not sharing/ntr... so are there any other women then lily?
 
4.90 star(s) 22 Votes