HTML Disruption [v0.29 Public] [gaaby]

[Feyschek]

I think that's a great idea. Allowing the player to navigate the world you're building will make it feel like a genuine game. Thank you for listening to the feedback. Best of luck to you!

A bad idea, both in terms of pain for the creator and in terms of the idea of the author of the game.

I have written many times and told many people, before asking to do something, think about how much time it will take to release ideas from the point of view of code and free time for the game developer.

Although giving the player a choice at the beginning is good, what’s the point of your choice if you can cancel it and start over? The very adequate idea is to check the points of submission and dominance at one moment and give the player a choice of which route he wants to go from his previous choice.

 

[gaaby]

I think that's a great idea. Allowing the player to navigate the world you're building will make it feel like a genuine game. Thank you for listening to the feedback. Best of luck to you!

Yap that's what I thought aswell since my goal is to make it a game, not a visual novel, so I need to add those elements of choice otherwise it's not really a game is it.

Thank you!

 

[ItzSpc]

I agree aswell, that is totally true, but I feel like for an porn centred game that won't really work very well in my opinion, I think a more extreme take on submission/domination makes it more intense, I want people to play and imagine themselves in the shoes of the player in something that probably will never happen to them, in the real world I totally agree with that sentence, in a game I don't think it's the best idea

It can work actually, if you look at BDSM Apocalypse, and go down the submissive route, the girls all dominate you, but your character is a hero who kicks ass as well. It's a tricky thing to write and since this is your first game, I think it's best you stick with the vision you have already.

 

[gaaby]

It can work actually, if you look at BDSM Apocalypse, and go down the submissive route, the girls all dominate you, but your character is a hero who kicks ass as well. It's a tricky thing to write and since this is your first game, I think it's best you stick with the vision you have already.

Yeah but that game has a completely different world since it's a dystopian game, I don't want my MC to be a coward necessarily, I want him to be malleable and have no backbone, that if someone has dirt on him, he will be scared and think twice before fighting back, someone whos easy to manipulate and naive, that's the vision I have. But yeah perhaps my writing is not the best as you said, it's my first game so I'm literally trying to learn and improve as im going

 

[Snoopy_H]

good intro

 

[Corruption_]

idk if it's just me, but game doesn't open on Firefox?

 

[Rafster]

Welcome to the niche of dom/sub games!! One of the core mechanics of my game is precisely an attitude stats, with dom and sub as the extremes. Events, and scenes open as the player get to one of the extremes. It's good to see more devs tackling the BDSM genre.

Yeah but that game has a completely different world since it's a dystopian game, I don't want my MC to be a coward necessarily, I want him to be malleable and have no backbone, that if someone has dirt on him, he will be scared and think twice before fighting back, someone whos easy to manipulate and naive, that's the vision I have. But yeah perhaps my writing is not the best as you said, it's my first game so I'm literally trying to learn and improve as im going

Heh, my vision is a bit different, in my game the sub MC is a shy guy, but with a dream of submitting to a strong man (normally one of the LIs), NPCs try to push him but he always steps forward and fights head on, to achieve his dream, and then to defend his master.

I'm still working on my vision for the dom MC, he's still determined as the sub, but to get the LI. Not a total asshole, but in one of my storylines he degenerates into something horrible, and in my current one, he will be a dick to anyone who oppose him. I'm working on a total dom route now (instead of a lone route that varies depending on the attitude of the MC, as my previous storylines were), it's a blast.

That's the beauty of this niche, many devs may have a different idea. Best of luck with your game, whatever vision you have, hold on to it. That makes your game special.

 

[gaaby]

idk if it's just me, but game doesn't open on Firefox?

I believe it's you mate, it opened up for me :/

 

[gaaby]

Welcome to the niche of dom/sub games!! One of the core mechanics of my game is precisely an attitude stats, with dom and sub as the extremes. Events, and scenes open as the player get to one of the extremes. It's good to see more devs tackling the BDSM genre.



Heh, my vision is a bit different, in my game the sub MC is a shy guy, but with a dream of submitting to a strong man (normally one of the LIs), NPCs try to push him but he always steps forward and fights head on, to achieve his dream, and then to defend his master.

I'm still working on my vision for the dom MC, he's still determined as the sub, but to get the LI. Not a total asshole, but in one of my storylines he degenerates into something horrible, and in my current one, he will be a dick to anyone who oppose him. I'm working on a total dom route now (instead of a lone route that varies depending on the attitude of the MC, as my previous storylines were), it's a blast.

That's the beauty of this niche, many devs may have a different idea. Best of luck with your game, whatever vision you have, hold on to it. That makes your game special.

Yep I totally agree! I believe the extremes make it more special than staying in the middle, I think the more unrealistic and uncommon way of a human is more interesting!

I see! I believe also that the bigger the choice of options in terms of routes and the way the MC can behave the best for the player as the experiences vary, as of now since my game is at the beginning it is very linear but I want to add more personality to the MC in the future.

Thank you! I hope you suceed even more in your game, I have played it before and enjoyed it, good luck to you aswell my friend

 

[Wayne]

good luck on your game just a word of advice your going to get alot of pepole who will crediasize take that as contrustive cristasiom not everybody going to see things from your eyes everybody has thare own core values ie some will dispise being forced into being feminatiobn other will hate being forsed into sisydom all so sidenotte you need to word things exsample on a post you said you want the player to imagen tham selfs in the players shoes thats hard to do since the player is allready in thare shores i would say someting like this i want the players to imagian being in the main carecter shoes would of been more better wording

 

[borninaflash]

FYI, your Patreon link on the start page of the game links to

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which doesn't seem to be the current URL you are using for patreon.

 

[borninaflash]

I would update this line to have the full word 'you' rather than 'u'.

- "What's up retard, why have u arrived so early? missed your favourite sister?"- she says with a smirk in her face.

Also grammatically it may be better for it to be - "What's up retard, why are you back so early? Missed your favourite sister?"

 

[gaaby]

FYI, your Patreon link on the start page of the game links to

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which doesn't seem to be the current URL you are using for patreon.

Yep you're totally right, forgot to change that when my URL got changed, thanks!

English isn't my native language and even tho I consider myself to have a pretty high level of english sometimes grammatically I ain't the best I'll admit to it, thanks for the corrections, I'll update it!

 

[borninaflash]

Yep you're totally right, forgot to change that when my URL got changed, thanks!

English isn't my native language and even tho I consider myself to have a pretty high level of english sometimes grammatically I ain't the best I'll admit to it, thanks for the corrections, I'll update it!

No worries, I am happy to reply with any spelling mistakes I see. English is pretty annoying sometimes lmao.

 

[gaaby]

No worries, I am happy to reply with any spelling mistakes I see. English is pretty annoying sometimes lmao.

Yeah specially when my main language is portuguese where most of our grammer is pretty self explainatory haha, but I'll take any correction you have, it's very much appreciated, thank you!

 

[Croaa]

Some feedback from my experience with playing the game:

• Waiting times (either during scenes or stuff like eating/watching TV) are annoying and unnecessary imo
• Watching TV can make the "time" variable go above 2 (night time), which then displays nothing behind the week day and prevents you from going to sleep
• You should probably be able to check your phone from anywhere, not only your bedroom
• While being able to go to class directly from your bedroom is useful for gameplay purposes, it would probably also make sense to be able to go to class from the school instead of bedroom only

Apart from that, I'm not into sissification so if that's going to be the main focus of the sub route then I probably won't play future versions of the game
I wish you good luck with your game

 

[gaaby]

Hello everyone! I'm here to inform that v0.2 is officially released for Ultimate Disruption and Completely Disrupted patreon members! Two weeks early access! I'll leave down below the changelog in case anyone is curious of what was changed and added in this new version and trust me, alot was changed and added! Thank you and see you in two weeks!


Alot has changed in v0.2! The routes were merged and there's no more submissive path or dominant path, as you make dominant or submissive choices you decide what type of content you get! Almost every random event has a submissive, dominant or neutral choice! Let's go to the specifics!

Please note that a savefile from 0.1 will not work, from v0.2 and forward saves will be able to go through.

Bugfixing:

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Hope you like this version, thank you!

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[gaaby]

Some feedback from my experience with playing the game:

• Waiting times (either during scenes or stuff like eating/watching TV) are annoying and unnecessary imo
• Watching TV can make the "time" variable go above 2 (night time), which then displays nothing behind the week day and prevents you from going to sleep
• You should probably be able to check your phone from anywhere, not only your bedroom
• While being able to go to class directly from your bedroom is useful for gameplay purposes, it would probably also make sense to be able to go to class from the school instead of bedroom only

Apart from that, I'm not into sissification so if that's going to be the main focus of the sub route then I probably won't play future versions of the game
I wish you good luck with your game

Thank you for your feedback, in the new release alot of what you said was changed!

 

[borninaflash]

Hello everyone! I'm here to inform that v0.2 is officially released for Ultimate Disruption and Completely Disrupted patreon members! Two weeks early access! I'll leave down below the changelog in case anyone is curious of what was changed and added in this new version and trust me, alot was changed and added! Thank you and see you in two weeks!


Alot has changed in v0.2! The routes were merged and there's no more submissive path or dominant path, as you make dominant or submissive choices you decide what type of content you get! Almost every random event has a submissive, dominant or neutral choice! Let's go to the specifics!

Please note that a savefile from 0.1 will not work, from v0.2 and forward saves will be able to go through.

Bugfixing:

Spoiler: Bugfixing

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New content:

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Hope you like this version, thank you!

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Just so you know as I know you said English is your second language, 'a lot' should be two words and not one (alot). It trips a lot of English speakers up as well, but I thought I would just let you know!

 

[gaaby]

Just so you know as I know you said English is your second language, 'a lot' should be two words and not one (alot). It trips a lot of English speakers up as well, but I thought I would just let you know!

Thanks!