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Ren'Py Dissonance [v0.13] [L_Elyot]

4.10 star(s) 32 Votes
Jul 23, 2021
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Jumping into this because frankly a LiL inspired game and the style in general vibe with me well.

It is different 'enough' but there are also a LOT of parallels that can get picked up considering you only described them as inspiration, so while I'd like to separate my experience from it, it's kind of difficult and i understand that these parallels are likely present in other games... These ones are very on the nose? I won't comment much about assets because I assume these are defaults or limitations every creator has to suffer with and you've done quite a good job in this regard creating unique scenes and characters designs.

Outside of that I sadly have to agree with some opinions:

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Overall while my opinions are probably all over the place and nonsensical. I currently am enjoying this game on it's own merits even if those seem similar or not to other titles. I am happy enough to follow it's creation as it currently stands and wish you the best in however you choose to handle it.
 

L_Elyot

Dissonance Dev
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I am happy enough to follow it's creation as it currently stands and wish you the best in however you choose to handle it.
Glad to hear it and thanks for the feedback! I'm definitely still going through plenty of growing pains as a creator, so there will definitely be some ups and downs in this game's life cycle. Thankfully, I do seem to be getting better over time, so hopefully I'll be able to deliver on my perfect vision for this game sooner rather than later.
 

Randonormie

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Nov 6, 2017
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Listen here buddy. I came here for a good time
Not to be engrossed by an interesting story and well paced dialogue with an MC that has pretty good sense of humor
.. Cut it out
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The prologue day was really nice, like chilling on a soft cloud
N the burger bit was just barely wholesome enough, not over the top
Now give me my porn
 

licuki

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Jun 5, 2017
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Hello, first of all I'd like to say that even tho I downloaded this to jack my dingdong I'm surprised by how good the dialog and story is, by far the best I've had in recent years, so thanks for that, also I'm really hoping for some actual porn for... you know... the jacking off part. With that said I want to say that the UI is much better however something that I think will help is an X to what you call "Close Menus" in both Events and Characters so that you don't have to go Menu>Close Menus to go back, hopefully you agree as I find it quite tedious, with that said, wonderful writing, loved the sex scenes, hopefully you can go a bit more maledom on it for that is my monkey brain's preference.

Thank you.
 

licuki

Newbie
Jun 5, 2017
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Also why does the Nadeko 3 options that were just added (trying hard not to spoil) not give different stats? I truly feel like it should.
 

Bingoogus

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Sep 5, 2021
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I dunno if it hasn't been said or if i've just forgotten, but why can't Minami speak? Is she physically mute or is it psychological?
 
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kibaris

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Mar 17, 2019
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I dunno if it hasn't been said or if i've just forgotten, but why can't Minami speak? Is she physically mute or is it psychological?
I didn't get to the end of the content yet but she said that she's "not too fond of speaking" so she can speak, I suppose we'll learn more about that later ^^
 
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Virulenz

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While there are almost no typos, you often tend to forget small words. Mostly stuff like you, me, i, myself, do, to, or, of, way...as said, the small ones ^^

Kyoko showing 2/4 events was mean, took me an ingame week to realize its a wrong number and not a missing trigger :p

Aside from these, you have improved. The charas feel more alive now then they were 3+ versions ago.
 
Dec 16, 2021
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This has the potential to become the greatest renpy VN ever.

Visually this looks as stunning as it can get with that engine and the story looks pretty good.

The best about this game is the characters, I like the way every character is developed individually more than in any other game I've seen, specially Lessons in Love which this game is obviously inspired from.

I hope you finish this game because it has the most potential from the newer games I've seen (y)

My biggest annoyance is how long it took to actually get to do "anything" with anyone, but we are getting at a point in which Sensei is slowly starting to crack a few nuts so hopefully we get a lot more soon.

This has been a huge cock tease so far and I am raging to properly f*** some girls already.
 
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kibaris

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I don't understand why people hate suzu so much, I find their relationship funny ^^ ,and once toru finally starts acting more like a teacher and beeing more reliable, she become a little more nicer to him .
Personally, it's more Sayuri that I have a problem with.

We keep hearing that she wants to work things out with toru, but in the end and despite what she said , she try to avoids interacting with him more than improve things (like when Toru has to go to the infirmary and Sayuri doesn't want to go with him, so Nadeko goes in the end) or during the festival, when she uses Suzu as a false excuse to escape Toru's company. Later she's even blaming Suzu, telling her that it's because of her that she can't get closer to Toru when Sayuri's already doing a great job at sabotaging herself .
When she finally try something with that dorm plan, it comes to nothing and she satisfied that Toru wants to keep his distance with her by fear of what Ume might think and because she want to act at her own pace.

Of course it's a very difficult situation for her too, after all beeing forgotten by someone you love is horrible, especially when he seems to be more happy without you. But at the rate she's doing things for now and given the fact that Toru still doesn't remember anything after 3 months apart from a little conversation with a stranger. she will have to speed things up if she dont want to lose him for good , because if she wait until Toru get is memories back, she may die of old age before that happening at the rate he get them back for now :LOL: (and more seriously, if she's really pregnant and Ume doesnt seem to know from what Suzu said, that will complicate things a lot and quickly for her and Toru)


So it's more the way she handle things that bothering me rather than the whole character but the bond between Suzu and Sayuri and how Suzu always have her back ( and that's also why she's so aggressive toward Toru in the begining) is one of the things i liked the most in the game and they are for sure a great duo :)
 
4.10 star(s) 32 Votes