Fantastic render quality, modern figures.
Really polished UI, good sound effects. The main menu reminded me of Deus Ex, bonus points.
Writing is ok, I've seen much worse but I didn't get the impression that characters had really come to life with a distinct personality. In fairness there's not much of a story here, just three vignettes. The investigation was interesting, I liked the presentation - but the dialogue from the suited NPC seemed very informal and unprofessional for a crime scene. It's hard to make a character relatable and colloquial when they look like a faceless doll.
Mechanics - I have no idea what was going on in the erotic scene, except trial and error. That was no fun at all, at first sight. The conversation on the couch was more interesting, but you need to give the player more information about the tactics that will be used as a consequence of someone's actions, as well as the target's personality. For example, the word 'Touch' at the start of a conversation does not generally imply shoving one's hand down someone else's pants! Especially since the alternative is 'Kiss'. I was expecting something like a light touch on the forearm or the shoulder.