- Jun 17, 2020
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When is the new Android version going to come out I know it came out in the patreon only for the people who are subscribed to the patreon but still when is it going to be public for all of us
- Aug 1, 2018
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So far Smogark impressed. Do have some issues with overall though.
1. Stamina system, won't touch on since have seen Masq make comments about it. Still giant drag to deal with though.
2. Plot inconsistencies, and story is paced awkwardly which ends up making it feel subpar.
Had no idea how to interact with Videl, and just assumed would come up in quest. Never did, then Videl shows up randomly, and they discuss things Smogark did not do.
Clone story comes out of nowhere, and Smogark had no idea a clone even existed until very last second. Everyone acted as if they knew about clone, even MC. Yet Smogark had no idea there was one.
Think story need somewhat of overhaul eventually. Core idea is good, but is also all over the place, and pacing feels unnatural.
3. Quests need to be locked behind progression events with waifus, and things need to be told to player once unlocked or able to do.
This comes back into play with Videl again. Can entirely miss content because the game does not tell you there is content to be had. Had no idea could train Chi Chi until like an hour later after "recruiting" her, and doing a bunch of other stuff. Player agency important, but sometimes, player need hand held when they come to expect "sleep, then do quest" to see stuff.
4. Waifu art is a mess.
Artist not bad nor is their art, but major inconsistencies for the art is jarring at best, and downright unappealing at worst. Heles looks fantastic in normal mode, but then sex scenes are atrocious. She's also the only one that keeps an anime-esque face out of the custom artwork for the other waifus when said other waifus look more realistic.
5. MC's appearance, and by extension, every other character unrelated to waifus.
Using Ruga-Rell's take on Yamoshi not bad, but when seeing MC. Would expect if they're to look like Yamoshi, their skin tone should be darker in sex scenes. But issue with using Ruga-Rell's take on Yamoshi, it lacks the typical God of Destruction attire.
Using anime cutouts of characters for non-waifus is smart choice, but also incredibly lazy. Think only non-waifu character that doesn't have an anime cutout is Buu.
Would hope they're merely placeholders for having same art style across the board for all characters shown in the story eventually.
Could have arguably put 4, and 5 in same category, but felt they were too different to do so, and would do a disservice to the critique.
6. UI also a mess.
The UI is quite like the story. All over the place, and clunky to navigate.
7. Typos. Self explanatory. Would suggest getting volunteer to go through to proof read old, and new content.
Overall, if feasible. Would recommend pulling a Something Unlimited, but completely revamping how the game is eventually, while still updating the current version. Would imagine UI, stamina, and quest coding would be too much of a pain to completely go through in the current system to revamp.
Regardless of Smogark critique. Am still quite pleased with time spent playing through the story. Quite enjoyed most of it, and genuinely looking forward to seeing more.
Edit: Forgot to put final bit of point 5.
1. Stamina system, won't touch on since have seen Masq make comments about it. Still giant drag to deal with though.
2. Plot inconsistencies, and story is paced awkwardly which ends up making it feel subpar.
Had no idea how to interact with Videl, and just assumed would come up in quest. Never did, then Videl shows up randomly, and they discuss things Smogark did not do.
Clone story comes out of nowhere, and Smogark had no idea a clone even existed until very last second. Everyone acted as if they knew about clone, even MC. Yet Smogark had no idea there was one.
Think story need somewhat of overhaul eventually. Core idea is good, but is also all over the place, and pacing feels unnatural.
3. Quests need to be locked behind progression events with waifus, and things need to be told to player once unlocked or able to do.
This comes back into play with Videl again. Can entirely miss content because the game does not tell you there is content to be had. Had no idea could train Chi Chi until like an hour later after "recruiting" her, and doing a bunch of other stuff. Player agency important, but sometimes, player need hand held when they come to expect "sleep, then do quest" to see stuff.
4. Waifu art is a mess.
Artist not bad nor is their art, but major inconsistencies for the art is jarring at best, and downright unappealing at worst. Heles looks fantastic in normal mode, but then sex scenes are atrocious. She's also the only one that keeps an anime-esque face out of the custom artwork for the other waifus when said other waifus look more realistic.
5. MC's appearance, and by extension, every other character unrelated to waifus.
Using Ruga-Rell's take on Yamoshi not bad, but when seeing MC. Would expect if they're to look like Yamoshi, their skin tone should be darker in sex scenes. But issue with using Ruga-Rell's take on Yamoshi, it lacks the typical God of Destruction attire.
Using anime cutouts of characters for non-waifus is smart choice, but also incredibly lazy. Think only non-waifu character that doesn't have an anime cutout is Buu.
Would hope they're merely placeholders for having same art style across the board for all characters shown in the story eventually.
Could have arguably put 4, and 5 in same category, but felt they were too different to do so, and would do a disservice to the critique.
6. UI also a mess.
The UI is quite like the story. All over the place, and clunky to navigate.
7. Typos. Self explanatory. Would suggest getting volunteer to go through to proof read old, and new content.
Overall, if feasible. Would recommend pulling a Something Unlimited, but completely revamping how the game is eventually, while still updating the current version. Would imagine UI, stamina, and quest coding would be too much of a pain to completely go through in the current system to revamp.
Regardless of Smogark critique. Am still quite pleased with time spent playing through the story. Quite enjoyed most of it, and genuinely looking forward to seeing more.
Edit: Forgot to put final bit of point 5.
I like Smogark. Also I agree with mostly everything. Especially number 4. The body proportions in scenes are all over the place. Like the first Android 18 handjob scene was perfect for me. She was thick but not too thick. After that she just kept getting wider and thicker. Which if you're into that's fine. But I generally do like the main artists art. Heles was done by an old artist before they changed to a new. That's why she looks anime-ish compared to other girls.
- Aug 1, 2018
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Smogark quite enjoy the realistic take on waifu appearances. Is refreshing to see, and feel like gives them more personality. Did not know about Heles being done by someone else. Figured was all same artist, so was heavily confused when saw the differences, and scratched head. Today Smogark learned.
- Sep 10, 2017
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- Apr 27, 2021
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Lower the mortal level, don't raise it. For some obscure canonical reason that is not explained in-game, lower mortal level is better for the gods of destruction.
Only for patreons for now I suppose right?
How much time until it comes out here?
how do i progress in the story mode because im stuck in the story where you have to choose heles or your son so i chose heles and now i cant continue
Is end of update, the new one is out but only for patreons
- Jun 19, 2017
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When is the public version of the game coming out?
- Jun 1, 2020
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