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Lol you still haven't given me criticism? List them so I can address them??
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Poor writing, lack of consistency in story, lack of a save system outside of the bedroom, no option to skip minigames, art is too realistic for an anime franchise.
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Listen I agree there's stuff worth criticizing in this game, but outside of wanting to skip minigames to a developer there's no real criticism. You got the author's attention, so it should be easy to explain the specifics.
A personal criticism I've had with the game:
Bugs:
A bug I reported a while back was still in the game last I played (though to be fair, I didn't play the latest version yet so it's a bit unfair to use this)
Consistency:
-I really did like some of the routes and stories that started, but it feels like many of them were sidelined. (As an example, our daughter basically became sidelined character for idk how many years.)
-Parts of the game feel like they're meant to showcase more, or are a beta. As an example: the segment with the empty rooms feel like I'm meant to put a harem in those rooms. If they're just empty forever... why are they there?
Story:
It's ok to have some drama, mystery, and suspense, but I feel like Vados's betrayal could've been handled much better. It's not cuck, but in the context of the protagonist being a horndog she loves and even trains and helps hook up with others, it doesn't make sense.
Presence:
Last criticism is limited presence on these forums. Masq used to come by all the time, then I think around the time there was that "ntr" incident he tried calming everyone down, even retconning it, but the forum went to war with him here and now he only stops by from time to time.
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- Poor writing: This is entirely subjective. I personally think the game is brilliantly written but then again I wrote it so creator bias. If you actually told me what specific part was bad writing I'll happily answer and see if I agree or disagree with you.
- Lack of consistency in story: This is a game I've been working on since 2017. Do you know how long that is? I was in University when I started this game, ALOT of things happened that affected the game's development. I had to cut corners in order to release updates every month. For example, let's say I planned to do a lewd update with tons of sex scenes. My artist was super slow and very expensive at the time so I would just make another story update until the artist was able to finish the artwork, that's why certain story parts feel inconsistent. At that time I wanted people to have consistent releases.
- Lack of save system outside of the bedroom: I assume you mean for android? The game was not made for Android versions. There are a lot of combat scenes that I took out because android players couldn't enjoy it fully. The android ports are a secondary option to the PC version.
- No option to skip minigames: In the latest update I've completely removed every single minigame so what are you talking about here?
-Art is too realistic for anime franchise: How is this critism? The art has been that way since 2017? This is like going into Summer Time Saga's thread and saying the art is too cartoony. If you don't like it, that's absolutely fine, like I said there are many other dragon ball games that aren't made by me. You're more than happy to go play them. I'm not even being sarcastic here, i mean this truthfully. I really enjoy making Divine Adventure but it's not everyone's cup of tea so I'd rather you played something you enjoyed
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You're right, I used to come here all the time. The NTR situation was bad, I hired a writer to to help me take the load off and he added NTR. He left after the whole NTR incident.
I'm genuinely just making this game for fun and the fans now, I don't make enough from it to quit my job and I don't expect it to make lots of money. I'm truly making this game because I love it, not for anything else
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Most ren'py games have quick options at the bottom of the screen constantly. Save, Load, skip, quick-save, quick-load, preferences.
This is what I mean. About the lack of save system outside of the bedroom.
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Broooooo, not the AI art overhaul. 
Local lurker here, just wanna give my unexperienced cents, But i personally thought the writing was nifty! But- I do feel bad about making 18 cheat on Krillin :< (Whis Sex scene when!? Lmao jk-)
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I won't deny that use of AI helps those who can't afford artists, especially the nice ones that you likely used when you were initially bringing this game together, so I will in no way fault you for using it. I am curious though, why did you switch over fully to new sprites? You had perfectly good ones that I imagine you payed good money for, so why suddenly decide against using them?
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Honestly? I just think the new sprites look much better. I gave the patrons the option to keep the original and the majority chose to keep the new ones. Think of it like this, the way the characters look now, is exactly how I imagined them looking when I initially made the game.
It poses a very interesting question to be honest, I could get a human artist to draw Vados exactly like the A.I version and people wouldn't know the difference. Which makes you think.
Human art: Real and Authentic but isn't very lewd
AI Art: Very very lewd and sexual
The only benefit of using purely a human artist would be morals.
Also for the record, I'm STILL using human artists, I get them to draw a base character, base colour then have A.I improve it.
I don't know why there are so many complaints with AI art, if the art is good
If i remember correctly there was a part in the story when Vados said that the MC's power was getting to the realm of the angels and we were even a match for some but when her sister came the encounter was very one sided against her we should have been able to at least put up a decent fight against her if we did reach that level of power especially since some time did pass so we should have even been more powerful
Thankgod you're still alive man it's been so long, first a.i art is not bad when artist are nowhere to be found that's good alternative.