- Sep 30, 2020
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Oh absolutely.Yeah, bro, that's what I've been noticing and even commenting on here from time to time, the writing is so bad that in the very first scene with one of the women (Jasmina) the MC "saves" her and soon afterwards the woman blushes at him and talks about being "best friends", it's fine that she wants to be friends with him, because she thought his act was heroic, but for fuck's sake, couldn't their development have been better, if only a little? And what about Miji who was described as reserved without wanting to get so involved with men, only for that to be thrown away and for her to be in lingerie for the MC more than once.
Even whit the In-universe explanation that these women are magically horny as rabbits on steroids, they ALSO seem to have high standards, which the MC funnily enough PERFECTLY embodies (even tho he is a clueless autist) so the suspension of disbelief is pretty broken already.
Basically everything quite literally bends over backwards to please the clueless autistic blessed MC, and it is my personal opinion but im quite bored of the bland MC, you know the one, the kind of guy that even tho this is a porn game, where you can show basically ANYTHING, the dude is as safe and comfortable for the little children as possible.
Then again i repeat, i am presuming that the average player here doesnt care about ANY of this and just wants to jack off, if that is the case more power to you, to me it feels like borderline braindead Isekai fanfic.