HTML DNAReorg Students [v0.0.3.a] [Vega TG]

[vegatg]

is there a trans/futa dom route for the mc?

mc is kind of trans character. futa is not currently not in game but in future while female you will able to change genital.

 

[Amansour]

where i can find DNA reorg?

 

[vegatg]

where i can find DNA reorg?

After you outside of the map. There is city map. In there you can find in the right top coner

 

[bentalos]

should add gay tag

 

[vegatg]

should add gay tag

But still there is no any gay scenes in this game. I have planned to add optional things but in future.

 

[Darkbreed]

Game has potential.

 

[vegatg]

where i can find DNA reorg?

For most of players having confusion regarding map I have added secondary way to visit places just below the map. Still available only in online version. I will update downloadable version as soon as possible.

 

[CrusadeX]

Even with what little content there is right now it looks very promising! good luck!
hope there will be a lot of content around pregnancy.

 

[Dropdude]

For most of players having confusion regarding map I have added secondary way to visit places just below the map. Still available only in online version. I will update downloadable version as soon as possible.

Tags should be whats currently in the game, not whats planned to be in the game. Id remove the pregnancy tag for now. The text based tag is mainly for games that are text only, this game includes video and pictures so that may mislead people.

 

[Cesco]

So far, I really think you need to make some adjustments to the "time" stuff. It shouldn't take 4 hours just to step outside my building and into the world map. I leave the house at 9am and it magically turns into 1pm. Or going to the restaurant at 1pm- I step out and it turns to 5pm

 

[vegatg]

Tags should be whats currently in the game, not whats planned to be in the game. Id remove the pregnancy tag for now. The text based tag is mainly for games that are text only, this game includes video and pictures so that may mislead people.

I have made the suggestion you have mentioned.

 

[vegatg]

So far, I really think you need to make some adjustments to the "time" stuff. It shouldn't take 4 hours just to step outside my building and into the world map. I leave the house at 9am and it magically turns into 1pm. Or going to the restaurant at 1pm- I step out and it turns to 5pm

Yes you are right. I will address that on next release.

 

[chthu]

Even with the limited content available now, it looks incredibly promising! Wishing you the best of luck and hoping to see plenty of content.

 

[Panonon]

I'm not leaving a review because I don't think devs should review other devs games. Too much room for backlash.

But here are my thoughts...


Because there are so many unfinished games, I'm actually ok with and interested in games that utilize AI as a tool.

However AI has a tendancy to over-narrate and feel very generic and boring. I think it's too early to rely on AI.

Given that nearly every line in this game was written by AI...

In that moment, I felt a deep sense of gratitude for the transformation that had brought me to this point. I knew that there would be challenges ahead, but I also knew that the rewards would be worth it. And as I lay there, basking in the afterglow of my first orgasm as a woman with man, I couldn't help but feel a sense of wonder and excitement for the journey that lay ahead. I fall down on couch as my orgasm and stay there for relax a bit.

He nodded and he stood there, completely naked, his body a testament to years of hard work and discipline. His muscles rippled under his skin, a sight that made my heart race with anticipation. As he turned to face me, I couldn't help but notice the impressive bulge in his pants it is same or bit larger than mine. It was clear that he was well-endowed, and I couldn't wait to see it in all its glory. As he began to undress, my excitement grew. I could feel my own arousal building, to the sight of him. When he finally revealed his massive cock, I gasped in surprise. It was even bigger than I had imagined and bigger than mine, and I knew that it was going to be an unforgettable experience. I couldn't wait to feel him inside me. I knew that it would be intense, perhaps even a little painful, but I was ready for it. I wanted him, and I wanted him now.

AI lacks creativity. So if you tell it to write a scene for you, its going to do that. A boring scene.
There is no body language. It tells us what the other person is thinking through "looks" etc. It over-uses phrases like "his body a testament, her reaction a testament, the room a testament..."

It always ends with talking about the journey that lay ahead.

I DO think AI will have a place to help with creative writing. It can be used to help with some ideas "Character is at point A but they need to reach point B. However there are these hurdles that prevent them from reaching point B. Please give me some ideas". Or "Here is my story outline, it's a jumbled mess. Can you please organize it and seperate by chapters without changing anything?"

But letting it completely write for you I think misses the mark completely. There's no imagination, you're just letting the AI take control. Every sex scene sounds exactly the same as the last.


Also, AI writes like it's attempting to describe scenes with poetry. It doesn't understand direction actiony stuff like a fight scene or filthy porn. It over-narrates worse than Anne Rice when she describes a brick on a wall above a fireplace for 3 pages during one of her gay vampire sex scenes. In addition to overwriting, it doesn't understand the concept of body language. It describes things such as "He gave her a look that told her he was angry" instead of something as simple as "He scowled at her / he tapped his foot impatiently".


The numerous bugs and lack of content aside, I really think the dev should take some time to refine the writing. If he wants to use AI that's fine. But I think he should review the scenes and spend time editing them.