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(Imagine if Dob actually animated a cock bulge that matched its outside size... *sigh*)
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the stories of dobermans are great, who would have thought that rachel would be so difficult in the world of journalism, trafficking her body to re-serve a little information...
This is feedback on Rachel ep 2 specifically, so I didn't post it as a review:
First off, the visuals are great. Not perfect (there could be less repetition in the movements, more facial expressions and so on) but Rachel is very attractive, and at least in certain shots, the black man towers over her with an absurdly large cock. So that's great.
But I so wish Doberman would commit fully to at least one fetish per girl.
In the end, the videos doesn't quite do it for me, coming across as milquetoast and never leading somewhere truly deliciously perverse. There are several fetishes at play here, but none of them actually go anywhere.
But first, the "vanilla" option. This could be a story about a perfectly carefree young woman, free of will and with no commitments to anybody. In this case, a single woman hooking up with men she barely knows isn't actually that "forbidden", even considering the interracial angle. Several decades ago, this could make housewives or senators clutch their pearls, but come on. Rachel is free to do whatever she likes.
My problem with this uncontroversial path is... that live-action porn with real human actors do this much better. Why waste animated smut on stuff that doesn't stretch or bend the limitations of IRL porn?
So, let's examine some of the fetishes the video brings up:
Forbidden Dark Meat. Rachel could be a racist, refusing to accept the reality her body is turned on by black men. Or she could be a prude. Or simply shy. Anything that creates conflict. Sadly, Rachel is none of these things, and will strip naked in front of a stranger with little or no hesitation.
Embarrassed Naked Female. There could be a much greater focus on Rachel's body, where each item of clothing she drops is considered a victory, and that her man needs to make an effort in persuading her for each step towards her dicking she takes. In every interview she ends up in a situation where she needs to disrobe, or leave the interview. Despite her burning shame, she can't lose the scoop, and so she reluctantly takes her clothes off... one piece at a time, with the black man's stare burning her exposed flesh, even as she can see his huge cock tenting...
Monster Dick. If the video played up the way his dick is almost as long as her torso, it could focus on the work both of them needs to put in to make it fit. Show us how at first it only goes a third in, before bottoming out. Ideally he would then explain there is a technique to open up her womb (such as vigorous fucking, giving her monster orgasms, or simply coating her cervix in hot fertile cum). So after a while he can slip another third of his massive cock in, and we can see her belly bulge around his cock. Then they keep fucking, until he finally can go balls deep. She's panting and grunting, and is clearly struggling, but finally we see the cock bulge travel up between her breasts. When he finally cums for real, there could even be cumflation. In other words, her breasts could swell up. Or perhaps she could even become 9 months pregnant with all his cum.
Pregnancy Scare. She would start each video making clear she's not on the pill, and doesn't want to become pregnant. She might be allergic to all kinds of contraceptives, and expects her men to either use a condom or practice pulling out in time. Perhaps she has a boyfriend and they're trying for a baby. Perhaps she's living in the US of a future where contraception is banned. Or Dob simply leaves it unexplained why she can't simply pop a day after pill. In this case, it would be delicious if the black men are assertive and dominant. They undress her without waiting for her first move. They dick her because they realize her body needs it. They don't wear condoms because only weak men wear condoms, or because their dicks are too big for condoms. They tell her they will pull out in time, but don't care much and easily get away with lame excuses. "I forgot" or "it felt too good". Rachel in this scenario can't just ignore this. She HAS to become annoyed. She could even attempt to avoid those black men that cum inside her, but of course they could always sweet-talk her into more sex, or simply manhandle her until her body gives in... To be effective, Rachel WILL later be shown pregnant, if only at the start of a later video where it is explained she's given birth, and now it's next year, and she has resolved to do better and not be knocked up again when she resumes her reporter career...
Welp, that's just a couple of relatively common fetishes. Most of them really can't be enacted in live porn. But animations and comix can do it!
Sadly, Dob tries to cater to several fetishes without ever committing to any of them.
Infidelity. Actually Rachel is acting so she DOESN'T cheat. But that's vanilla. That's lame. That's avoiding conflict. (Even though I agree he's setting up a future cuckold scenario)
WHY OH WHY didn't Rachel try his shorts on WITHOUT CLOTHES UNDERNEATH. What a huge opportunity missed! Porn actresses can't undress quick enough, when CLOTHED SEX or the actual UNDRESSING of the female can be so much more erotic! Why didn't he catch her trying on his (comically overlarge) uniform, and demanded to get it back, thus forcing her to undress in front of him (because she really wanted the interview)?
Rachel REALLY needs to learn that its not the base of the dick a man wants wanked. The video repeats a loop where she grabs his cock maybe 10 inches from the tip. Whut?!
He only keeps his hand on top of her breast. And then he doesn't move. Why didn't he (without asking) start undressing her, while telling her to keep focusing on his dick...
The first cum scene only features two wads of cum. Why didn't Doberman drench her in cum?
Don't have Rachel say "your dick is in my unprotected womb" without making a thing either of the penetration or the pregnancy scare.
At the end, Rachel reveals that she is fully aware she's whoring out her body for information. She's doing it completely of her own free will. She even turns down the cameraman precisely because she doesn't want to be unfaithful. Talk about losing out on fetish content...
All in all, Doberman is frustratingly close to top notch content, but unfortunately he doesn't appear capable or interested in committing.
This is why I'm rating Rachel episode 2 three out of five stars. The technical content is four out of five, but the constant skirting around pure weapons-grade smut, means I'm docking one star: after everything is said and done, what he's actually giving us - as opposed to what individual segments and pieces of dialogue hint at - remains depressingly vanilla.
Thanks for reading. YMMV.
First off, the visuals are great. Not perfect (there could be less repetition in the movements, more facial expressions and so on) but Rachel is very attractive, and at least in certain shots, the black man towers over her with an absurdly large cock. So that's great.
But I so wish Doberman would commit fully to at least one fetish per girl.
In the end, the videos doesn't quite do it for me, coming across as milquetoast and never leading somewhere truly deliciously perverse. There are several fetishes at play here, but none of them actually go anywhere.
But first, the "vanilla" option. This could be a story about a perfectly carefree young woman, free of will and with no commitments to anybody. In this case, a single woman hooking up with men she barely knows isn't actually that "forbidden", even considering the interracial angle. Several decades ago, this could make housewives or senators clutch their pearls, but come on. Rachel is free to do whatever she likes.
My problem with this uncontroversial path is... that live-action porn with real human actors do this much better. Why waste animated smut on stuff that doesn't stretch or bend the limitations of IRL porn?
So, let's examine some of the fetishes the video brings up:
Forbidden Dark Meat. Rachel could be a racist, refusing to accept the reality her body is turned on by black men. Or she could be a prude. Or simply shy. Anything that creates conflict. Sadly, Rachel is none of these things, and will strip naked in front of a stranger with little or no hesitation.
Embarrassed Naked Female. There could be a much greater focus on Rachel's body, where each item of clothing she drops is considered a victory, and that her man needs to make an effort in persuading her for each step towards her dicking she takes. In every interview she ends up in a situation where she needs to disrobe, or leave the interview. Despite her burning shame, she can't lose the scoop, and so she reluctantly takes her clothes off... one piece at a time, with the black man's stare burning her exposed flesh, even as she can see his huge cock tenting...
Monster Dick. If the video played up the way his dick is almost as long as her torso, it could focus on the work both of them needs to put in to make it fit. Show us how at first it only goes a third in, before bottoming out. Ideally he would then explain there is a technique to open up her womb (such as vigorous fucking, giving her monster orgasms, or simply coating her cervix in hot fertile cum). So after a while he can slip another third of his massive cock in, and we can see her belly bulge around his cock. Then they keep fucking, until he finally can go balls deep. She's panting and grunting, and is clearly struggling, but finally we see the cock bulge travel up between her breasts. When he finally cums for real, there could even be cumflation. In other words, her breasts could swell up. Or perhaps she could even become 9 months pregnant with all his cum.
Pregnancy Scare. She would start each video making clear she's not on the pill, and doesn't want to become pregnant. She might be allergic to all kinds of contraceptives, and expects her men to either use a condom or practice pulling out in time. Perhaps she has a boyfriend and they're trying for a baby. Perhaps she's living in the US of a future where contraception is banned. Or Dob simply leaves it unexplained why she can't simply pop a day after pill. In this case, it would be delicious if the black men are assertive and dominant. They undress her without waiting for her first move. They dick her because they realize her body needs it. They don't wear condoms because only weak men wear condoms, or because their dicks are too big for condoms. They tell her they will pull out in time, but don't care much and easily get away with lame excuses. "I forgot" or "it felt too good". Rachel in this scenario can't just ignore this. She HAS to become annoyed. She could even attempt to avoid those black men that cum inside her, but of course they could always sweet-talk her into more sex, or simply manhandle her until her body gives in... To be effective, Rachel WILL later be shown pregnant, if only at the start of a later video where it is explained she's given birth, and now it's next year, and she has resolved to do better and not be knocked up again when she resumes her reporter career...
Welp, that's just a couple of relatively common fetishes. Most of them really can't be enacted in live porn. But animations and comix can do it!
Sadly, Dob tries to cater to several fetishes without ever committing to any of them.
Infidelity. Actually Rachel is acting so she DOESN'T cheat. But that's vanilla. That's lame. That's avoiding conflict. (Even though I agree he's setting up a future cuckold scenario)
WHY OH WHY didn't Rachel try his shorts on WITHOUT CLOTHES UNDERNEATH. What a huge opportunity missed! Porn actresses can't undress quick enough, when CLOTHED SEX or the actual UNDRESSING of the female can be so much more erotic! Why didn't he catch her trying on his (comically overlarge) uniform, and demanded to get it back, thus forcing her to undress in front of him (because she really wanted the interview)?
Rachel REALLY needs to learn that its not the base of the dick a man wants wanked. The video repeats a loop where she grabs his cock maybe 10 inches from the tip. Whut?!
He only keeps his hand on top of her breast. And then he doesn't move. Why didn't he (without asking) start undressing her, while telling her to keep focusing on his dick...
The first cum scene only features two wads of cum. Why didn't Doberman drench her in cum?
Don't have Rachel say "your dick is in my unprotected womb" without making a thing either of the penetration or the pregnancy scare.
At the end, Rachel reveals that she is fully aware she's whoring out her body for information. She's doing it completely of her own free will. She even turns down the cameraman precisely because she doesn't want to be unfaithful. Talk about losing out on fetish content...
All in all, Doberman is frustratingly close to top notch content, but unfortunately he doesn't appear capable or interested in committing.
This is why I'm rating Rachel episode 2 three out of five stars. The technical content is four out of five, but the constant skirting around pure weapons-grade smut, means I'm docking one star: after everything is said and done, what he's actually giving us - as opposed to what individual segments and pieces of dialogue hint at - remains depressingly vanilla.
Thanks for reading. YMMV.
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Why do you keep spamming the thread up with your constant moaning?
It's boring and it's so obvious to every other person in the entire world, except you, that either the guy isn't on here, or he's just not listening to you.
Why don't you join Doberman's discord(if there is one) and express your displeasure there?
Or better still, make yourself a patron and post your crticisms directly on his page. It's one dollar, plus applicable taxes.
If you're so cheap, that you won't spend even one dollar on your boy Dober, send me your paypal and I'll send you the buck.
It's boring and it's so obvious to every other person in the entire world, except you, that either the guy isn't on here, or he's just not listening to you.
Why don't you join Doberman's discord(if there is one) and express your displeasure there?
Or better still, make yourself a patron and post your crticisms directly on his page. It's one dollar, plus applicable taxes.
If you're so cheap, that you won't spend even one dollar on your boy Dober, send me your paypal and I'll send you the buck.
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