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PedroDeLara

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The character seems well-made and pretty to me, but RAQUEL should have been struck or the plot of the story changed radically. Raquel is boring, boring. I'm still sad for the absence of KELLY episode 2 was better had potential and plays in the fridge, a shame.

KELLY, forever missed.


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absolem

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i seen comments lately where some people complained that the current tool size in recent videos are too big. Maybe a smaller one?
Turns out, it's not what the real payers want lol. I just hope that Dob can figure out how to smoothely apply jaw animation to BJ scenes with the new size, hehe...
 
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i seen comments lately where some people complained that the current tool size in recent videos are too big. Maybe a smaller one?
Turns out, it's not what the real payers want lol. I just hope that Dob can figure out how to smoothely apply jaw animation to BJ scenes with the new size, hehe...
yeah, i was shocked, but i really happy that people want bigger cock :LOL:
 
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anedwcan

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I just hope that Dob can figure out how to smoothely apply jaw animation to BJ scenes with the new size, hehe...
I kind of like the freakishness of the current BJs, so yes, this can only get better!

What I most hope for is:
1) a proper belly bulge from getting dicked by such a huge cock. By that I mean, the cock shouldn't magically disappear. Outside the girl it easily reaches from her crotch to between her breasts. So make the belly bulge reach that high! :love:

I mean, Dob's videos already exist in a magical universe where men have horse-sized cocks and girls have impossibly perfect breasts. Why can't the girls consist of pussy from the throat down - no pesky internal organs that would get in the way of a proper dicking!

2) cum inflation. With such huge cocks, and the ability to cum repeatedly in a short period, girls should experience having their bellies inflated from getting filled with buckets and buckets of cum, looking more pregnant with each man! :love:

3) actual pregnancy - the girl complaining about the men not pulling out or using condoms, and then swelling up getting hugely pregnant, their boobs growing and sagging, until they give birth to healthy (black) septuplets or something! :love:
 

anedwcan

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Thank you Cebs; always a treat to have a new episode.

However. Dobs truly needs to find a writer capable of conveying emotions and inner thoughts.

Where is Eva's embarrassment over having to strip naked in front of a stranger? Why isn't there dialogue where she tries to plead with the criminal? Why doesn't she try to argue just stripping to her underwear is enough? Camera angles showing how she tries in vain to shield her ample goods from his lecherous stare? Slow motion of her undoing her bra or lowering her panties... Him agreeing to "just" a blowjob, but then he insists on having sex when he sees her stunning body. Why doesn't she insist on him wearing a condom, and he having to promise to pull out in time, a promise he will conveniently forget all about once she's hot and ready? Eva loudly cursing when he's ready for a third go, and having her weakly protest when he takes her anally? Eva afterwards feeling a mixture of shame and lust, believing his false promise this won't happen again?

Because Doberman isn't really interested in the words, only the rendering, that's why. Either that, or English as a foreign language just is too much of a hurdle for him as a Russian. Either way, what we have here is a lot of squandered potential. If he found a decent writer to go with his high visual production values his videos could become legendary.
 

PedroDeLara

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Well, it exceeded expectations, I regretted the absence of KELLY after all the story was maturing the sequel was better than the first BUT, Dob, chose to put her on the reserve bench, EVA has the option of a good sequel at the end after all there will be in expectation the ingredient "extortion, blackmail" finally EVA will be able to respond with good SURUBAS or even DOUBLE penetration. They charge a lot of "details" and refinements in a short film of 11 to 12m the idea is to make a "sequel" and not solve "everything" in "just one episode" the truth is that the WORK of this guy "Doberman" is good, very really good and should be supported massively..

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Thanks @ cebs again for sharing the new character Eva with her first episode, but for me - at least - is an absolute no go the cuttet hands & dick in this scene... I have to handle this, when it comes to render (put a row of episodes together) this.
But neverless:
thanks agan, cebs !

best regards
 
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anedwcan

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but for me - at least - is an absolute no go the cuttet hands & dick in this scene...
It could be that Dob is deliberately going for the Japanese style where you don't even pretend the hands and dick belong to the male character.

Probably something about the "ghost" hands and purple dildo dick triggering the person watching into thinking it's his own wiener he's seeing...

It could of course be a mistake as well, but since it's so obvious I'm not so sure it is.
 

absolem

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However. Dobs truly needs to find a writer capable of conveying emotions and inner thoughts.
Well... While i agree with you, that it would be great if the plot was more detailed and developed, I think you want too much for content that come in a cycle of 3 videos every 2 months.
Even if Dob won't animate the whole sequence, he need at least make different pictures to illustrate it. How long will it take him to make something like that? If it means that i have to wait for the new release for 1.5 or 2 months, instead of ~3 weeks, i rather like him to stick to the current plot style.

It could be that Dob is deliberately going for the Japanese style where you don't even pretend the hands and dick belong to the male character.
That's just looks off, lets hope he's never gonna do that again.
 
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anedwcan

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Even if Dob won't animate the whole sequence, he need at least make different pictures to illustrate it. How long will it take him to make something like that? If it means that i have to wait for the new release for 1.5 or 2 months, instead of ~3 weeks, i rather like him to stick to the current plot style.
First off, you're just making up assumptions here. Unfortunately, those then lead you to conclude "change nothing, this is the best we can get." Lazy and unambitious, I say.

First off, you can write words while the computer is doing the rendering. Second, why assume Dob can write for shit, even if he gets years to do it?

Both of these issues are best resolved the way I have suggested: by bringing in an actual writer. With talent. Or, alternatively, just letting people suggest stories from the internet, and he can then animate those.

Dob actually used to this. And back then, he did do dialogue over static backgrounds as well.

The end result is that Amanda 4 remains his best video. Sure, the graphics were not as sophisticated, but the overall package was much more hot. The story was Stormbringer's Wife and the Black Gardeners 2. The static backgrounds allowed for more dialogue without demanding more video.

Nowadays, all he seems to care about is rendering quality. But just like with mainstream live-action porn, 99% of it is dreck because nobody gives a rat's arse about the words.
 
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absolem

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First off, you can write words while the computer is doing the rendering. Second, why assume Dob can write for shit, even if he gets years to do it?
Rendering is a final stage of creating an animation, so you need to make a story, illustration and animations before you start rendering video.
Second, why you assume, that i assume, that he can't wright? I belive that he can wright a more developed story, if he took some time to it, but quality wise it still goin to be average at best. That's not what i meant at all, I'm talking about how long it will take him to make a video. Creating a more detailed plot and make an additional illustrations will took additional time to make a video. And coming up with a short but well-developed plot every couple of weeks, is quite difficult if you are not a professional writer.
Both of these issues are best resolved the way I have suggested: by bringing in an actual writer. With talent. Or, alternatively, just letting people suggest stories from the internet, and he can then animate those.
'Bout your solution - second variant with the stories from the internet might occasionly happen like that one Amanda episode, but it looks like, that he mostly want to make his own stuff. And of course he never going to lurk on forums like this, in search of creative material for his content - If you don't pay money to creator for his work, he will don't give a damn.
And idea about bringing an author - if he's not hired anyone, than he might simply don't want it, or don't want to spend money on it. And btw, you need to find not just a writer, but a writer with experience and discipline. A wrighter who will constatly deliver new plots. Animations with huge plots are very rare (and huge, long animation not always equal a long plot), so lets look at RPGM and Ren'Py games. A lot of this projects have a descent or even good wrighters, but lot's of them lacks discipline - constantly fuck up all deadlines, runin out of ideas, abandoning projects halfway, etc.
So if you really need a good and reliable wrighter, you need to spend a good amount of money to pay him. And hiring such author will not guarantee, that you start gaining much more money from your works, so in the end it might turns out, that you will make less money for yourself, after wrighter gets his cut. So now it's you making assumption that hiring an author will be easy and cost almost nothing, but let's not forget - making animation full time is a work, and content creators like all of us, has to pay their bills so that there is still some money left to support their alcohol/drug addiction, or, well, for something else, like buying food.
 

xxxDreamZzz

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Rendering is a final stage of creating an animation, so you need to make a story, illustration and animations before you start rendering video.
Second, why you assume, that i assume, that he can't wright? I belive that he can wright a more developed story, if he took some time to it, but quality wise it still goin to be average at best. That's not what i meant at all, I'm talking about how long it will take him to make a video. Creating a more detailed plot and make an additional illustrations will took additional time to make a video. And coming up with a short but well-developed plot every couple of weeks, is quite difficult if you are not a professional writer.

'Bout your solution - second variant with the stories from the internet might occasionly happen like that one Amanda episode, but it looks like, that he mostly want to make his own stuff. And of course he never going to lurk on forums like this, in search of creative material for his content - If you don't pay money to creator for his work, he will don't give a damn.
And idea about bringing an author - if he's not hired anyone, than he might simply don't want it, or don't want to spend money on it. And btw, you need to find not just a writer, but a writer with experience and discipline. A wrighter who will constatly deliver new plots. Animations with huge plots are very rare (and huge, long animation not always equal a long plot), so lets look at RPGM and Ren'Py games. A lot of this projects have a descent or even good wrighters, but lot's of them lacks discipline - constantly fuck up all deadlines, runin out of ideas, abandoning projects halfway, etc.
So if you really need a good and reliable wrighter, you need to spend a good amount of money to pay him. And hiring such author will not guarantee, that you start gaining much more money from your works, so in the end it might turns out, that you will make less money for yourself, after wrighter gets his cut. So now it's you making assumption that hiring an author will be easy and cost almost nothing, but let's not forget - making animation full time is a work, and content creators like all of us, has to pay their bills so that there is still some money left to support their alcohol/drug addiction, or, well, for something else, like buying food.
So you're suggesting DobS or any other animator becomes a slave to a writer? For some reason, I don't think they enjoy most or any of the hoops they have to jump through to create a loop, let alone an entire production the way it's currently done. However, they get turned on along with all of us by the results... after the pain, sweat and tears of completing a "simple" loop.

Writing a "plot" or storyline is not rocket science, and obviously any solo creator is working off his/her own fetishes.

Big picture, broken down into parts/chapters/acts like in a play, then into details/shots (pictures) with dialog. Then fill in the gaps (pun intended) with motion and animated scenes.

A writer or trusted friend is helpful to bounce ideas off of, but hiring one to be your slave master, or worse... letting everyone (fans) pile in on a story with their ideas/wishes/personal fetishes, turns a creator into a sad-faced prostitute faster than you can say politician.
 

absolem

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So you're suggesting DobS or any other animator becomes a slave to a writer?
No, I did not mean that if he hires a writer, then he will be completely dependent on him later. I was actually talking about two things:
1) Finding good and reliable wrighter is not easy, some "trusted friend" won't help you in a long term when you have a constant deadlines with your work. I say it again, look at the RPGM or Ren Py games at this site. All of them have devs with wrighting skills far better than Dob's, some of them have actual wannabe wrighters, but only a few out of thousands of them can consistently deliver content without breaking deadlines and abandoning projects. You can see how many promissing games have been abandoned for unknown reasons (spoiler: the true reasons are lacks of discipline, clear goals and ideas, and lack of motivation), dev teams consisting more than one people - Hreinn Games, have fucked up every deadline they set, while others like Gabe with Queen Opala RPG's milk their patreons making small updates with only minor tweaks and little additions.
Funny thing is, that the only 3D animation artist with actually good wrighting skills that i've seen is SFM-DH(Dreamhawk). And ironicaly, he only did little 0:15~3 minutes long shorts, with little to no plot. But if you look at the stories he attaches to the posts with these short videos, the dude really looks like Shakespeare compared to the rest.

2) Finding good and reliable wrighter costs a good amount of money, so creator is going to need to share his income with that wrighter. But in the end, this does not guarantee that the help of another author, will able to increase his earnings due to this, or at least cover his expenses for the wrighter.

And i don't want to say that people can't critisize authors or express their wishes, I just think that you guys set your wonderfull expectations to high, and that the more complicated you want the content to look, the longer it will take to complete. So if you want that, do you realise that new videos will be released less frequently? If you really think it's not a big deal - just add a good wrighter, then you are mistaken.
 
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LOGhetto

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Thank you Cebs; always a treat to have a new episode.

However. Dobs truly needs to find a writer capable of conveying emotions and inner thoughts.

Where is Eva's embarrassment over having to strip naked in front of a stranger? Why isn't there dialogue where she tries to plead with the criminal? Why doesn't she try to argue just stripping to her underwear is enough? Camera angles showing how she tries in vain to shield her ample goods from his lecherous stare? Slow motion of her undoing her bra or lowering her panties... Him agreeing to "just" a blowjob, but then he insists on having sex when he sees her stunning body. Why doesn't she insist on him wearing a condom, and he having to promise to pull out in time, a promise he will conveniently forget all about once she's hot and ready? Eva loudly cursing when he's ready for a third go, and having her weakly protest when he takes her anally? Eva afterwards feeling a mixture of shame and lust, believing his false promise this won't happen again?

Because Doberman isn't really interested in the words, only the rendering, that's why. Either that, or English as a foreign language just is too much of a hurdle for him as a Russian. Either way, what we have here is a lot of squandered potential. If he found a decent writer to go with his high visual production values his videos could become legendary.
My guess is that Patreon does prohibit Doberman from making the scenario too rapey. The fact that it was blackmail was probably pushing the envelope as it is.
 

xxxDreamZzz

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No, I did not mean that if he hires a writer, then he will be completely dependent on him later. I was actually talking about two things:
1) Finding good and reliable wrighter is not easy, some "trusted friend" won't help you in a long term when you have a constant deadlines with your work. I say it again, look at the RPGM or Ren Py games at this site. All of them have devs with wrighting skills far better than Dob's, some of them have actual wannabe wrighters, but only a few out of thousands of them can consistently deliver content without breaking deadlines and abandoning projects. You can see how many promissing games have been abandoned for unknown reasons (spoiler: the true reasons are lacks of discipline, clear goals and ideas, and lack of motivation), dev teams consisting more than one people - Hreinn Games, have fucked up every deadline they set, while others like Gabe with Queen Opala RPG's milk their patreons making small updates with only minor tweaks and little additions.
Funny thing is, that the only 3D animation artist with actually good wrighting skills that i've seen is SFM-DH(Dreamhawk). And ironicaly, he only did little 0:15~3 minutes long shorts, with little to no plot. But if you look at the stories he attaches to the posts with these short videos, the dude really looks like Shakespeare compared to the rest.

2) Finding good and reliable wrighter costs a good amount of money, so creator is going to need to share his income with that wrighter. But in the end, this does not guarantee that the help of another author, will able to increase his earnings due to this, or at least cover his expenses for the wrighter.

And i don't want to say that people can't critisize authors or express their wishes, I just think that you guys set your wonderfull expectations to high, and that the more complicated you want the content to look, the longer it will take to complete. So if you want that, do you realise that new videos will be released less frequently? If you really think it's not a big deal - just add a good wrighter, then you are mistaken.
Your entire post boils down to having a production manager or director, with a script.
Writers are over-rated, and often in major productions, the first person(s) that gets over-ruled, banned from the set, or replaced entirely. A major pain in the ass along with producers, who think just because they're financing a film, they can dictate how it's made.
 
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