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His animations seem to be getting better and better quality wise. Thank you for sharing!
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Thanks for the drop cebs..
Why couldn't he pick a hotter blonde pornstar like Haley Reed? That being said Doberman's Emma Hix looks a bit better than real Emma Hix.
Regarding the ep:
I know Dob is trying, but he really lacks the ability to write in any special sauce into his scripts. It's always the same token one or two lines of reluctance, and then all hesitation and all clothes are gone. Dob really should consider lifting scripts from better porn, since his own writing is lukewarm and unimaginative at best.
It could be soo much hotter...
For instance:
- stop lowering the barriers to infidelity! In this case, this "Pat" is an asshole. Another girl's husband is a pathetic schlub. One girl is even completely single and free.
It is much hotter if the girl does not have good reasons to be unfaithful, so stop giving her any!
- make the black men more cocky (no pun intended) and assertive
- stop waiting for permission - actively overwhelm the girl with your manliness. (NOT suggesting rape. Google "Kiara Lord Franco Roccaforte" and watch an excellent example of how the man can manhandle the girl without being an asshole or a creep)
- make a much bigger deal out of the girl's naked body
Jaded pornstars get naked without hesitation, and far too many can't wait to get naked. It's much hotter if the girl plays coy or otherwise resists being disrobed. Google "Irina Bruni Fashion Shoots and Money Shots" for an excellent example of hardcore porn that still avoids feeling jaded or routine.
- make a much bigger deal out of the giant cocks and make a deal out of the "pregnancy scare" at all
While Dob's technical quality is steadily improving, his scripts are so murderously mediocre... They're still at the level of the minimum effort needed to connect the three sex scenes.
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The series where Mia is on vacation is probably his most ambitious writing, and even there Mia has zero doubts, zero regrets. That series would have been ten times hotter if Mia actively attempted to resist temptation, and if she didn't have the obvious excuse of having a cartoonishly schlubby and clueless husband.
Journalist Rachel also fails to fulfill any potential. First off, there's no conflict here. Why can't she fuck whomever she likes? Add a boss that's blackmailing her with evidence of her sluttiness! Even though she really should say no to these black men, she somehow always ends up taking gallons of cum up her unprotected snatch! And now she is forced to humiliatingly fuck her black boss as well...
Amanda's hottest episode was already in ep 2, when she still didn't accept herself as a black cock slut. But that story was lifted wholesale from Stormbringer's very cool story "The Wife and the Black Gardeners 2" where the wife and the husband alternates between shock, indignation, and sluttiness, so... (Amanda 6 gets a special mention, simply because the camera angles where Amanda dancing at the club.)
I know Dob is trying, but he really lacks the ability to write in any special sauce into his scripts. It's always the same token one or two lines of reluctance, and then all hesitation and all clothes are gone. Dob really should consider lifting scripts from better porn, since his own writing is lukewarm and unimaginative at best.
It could be soo much hotter...
For instance:
- stop lowering the barriers to infidelity! In this case, this "Pat" is an asshole. Another girl's husband is a pathetic schlub. One girl is even completely single and free.
It is much hotter if the girl does not have good reasons to be unfaithful, so stop giving her any!
- make the black men more cocky (no pun intended) and assertive
- stop waiting for permission - actively overwhelm the girl with your manliness. (NOT suggesting rape. Google "Kiara Lord Franco Roccaforte" and watch an excellent example of how the man can manhandle the girl without being an asshole or a creep)
- make a much bigger deal out of the girl's naked body
Jaded pornstars get naked without hesitation, and far too many can't wait to get naked. It's much hotter if the girl plays coy or otherwise resists being disrobed. Google "Irina Bruni Fashion Shoots and Money Shots" for an excellent example of hardcore porn that still avoids feeling jaded or routine.
- make a much bigger deal out of the giant cocks and make a deal out of the "pregnancy scare" at all
While Dob's technical quality is steadily improving, his scripts are so murderously mediocre... They're still at the level of the minimum effort needed to connect the three sex scenes.
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The series where Mia is on vacation is probably his most ambitious writing, and even there Mia has zero doubts, zero regrets. That series would have been ten times hotter if Mia actively attempted to resist temptation, and if she didn't have the obvious excuse of having a cartoonishly schlubby and clueless husband.
Journalist Rachel also fails to fulfill any potential. First off, there's no conflict here. Why can't she fuck whomever she likes? Add a boss that's blackmailing her with evidence of her sluttiness! Even though she really should say no to these black men, she somehow always ends up taking gallons of cum up her unprotected snatch! And now she is forced to humiliatingly fuck her black boss as well...
Amanda's hottest episode was already in ep 2, when she still didn't accept herself as a black cock slut. But that story was lifted wholesale from Stormbringer's very cool story "The Wife and the Black Gardeners 2" where the wife and the husband alternates between shock, indignation, and sluttiness, so... (Amanda 6 gets a special mention, simply because the camera angles where Amanda dancing at the club.)
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The gigantic Johnson stuff is OD now. Its not even fappable anymore.
The gigantic Johnson stuff is OD now. Its not even fappable anymore.
He should do a user story or literotica or a re-imagining of something from the old illustrated interracial. With the old genitalia he used to use.
his earlier stuff was better like with amanda, earlier she felt bad for cheating then it becuase a full on dont care, then the others was no real story behind them, no regrets, nothing. Now its to the point the BBC are so big its ridiculoud. if he wants to keep making the genitals that bigger why not just ahve the girls sleep with horses. What he needs to do is step back, rethink some things, Go back to the old size of genitals. Make story of the women become seduced, reluctent and feel bad after cheating.
i think he is starting to fall into the patern most other artists fall into. I just hope he relizes soon that what he is doing is not working out for the best
Thanks for the support - it really is frustrating, especially since Dob clearly makes great videos. He just needs a proper writer...
Just to be clear I don't mind the appendage size.
Just to be clear I don't mind the appendage size.
There's a great idea!
The cock sizes are completely ridiculous.
Seeing a girl's head get turned into this...
Is not sexy at all, imo.
Seeing a girl's head get turned into this...
Is not sexy at all, imo.