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PedroDeLara

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are you refering to Mia's episode 5? and Diana's 7? (the one where the husband fell as sleep on the couch?)
All of MIA is well developed the story and evolution of the character number 5 is on account of her having sex with two and it will get better when Barney witnesses the sex. DIANA from the homeless, in the hospital and now this latest number 9 for her boyfriend's sex positions also needs to witness more sex. KELLY in this preview can also stand out and how his story develops.
 
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hoshinau

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Hope we could get it sooner. I've paused unloading the daily portion since the preview was out and these weeks were rough as f.
 

777Mike777

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I found this is this not the work of the same guy i could not find this video here
 

PedroDeLara

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Two words, CONGRATULATIONS.
first comment on the quality of the video, graphic quality, movement, detailing and variation of poses without a doubt film by film I consider it a short film Dob has the CONGRATULATIONS and you should also read the comments of this forum with another pseudoname.

From the character KELLY this second of the continuity they are lovers and probably LEX should call a friend to share his BITCH double penetration is coming soon and her HUSBAND will soon be suspicious and like to share the CAKE.

Cebs thank you for sharing and this short wonder, without saving Dob, two words, CONGRATULATIONS!!!

In time KELLY and DIANA technically tied CORA also the big DARLING of the guys and MINE too. HARD decision who to choose.
 
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anedwcan

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I really wish Dob hired a good smut writer.

His videos are top notch technically, and his girls are very attractive.

But the content just isn't very kinky. The girls never struggle with inner conflict, and everybody just likes to have sex, and there aren't any real consequences. Sure Dob tries to insert dialogue like "I've come to end it" but he simply can't pull it off.

In one scene the girl says "don't cum in me", the next everything about that is just forgotten. There are never any regret or drama. The girls never seem to react much at all, never mind feeling embarrassment, regret, or irritation. All of them shed their clothes at a moment's notice; none of them are the least bit hesitant or shy or reluctant.

Also, the series can't really pull off the escalation that is the hallmark of a good stroke story.

If Kelly in episode #1 has sex with her black neighbor, then why is the exact same thing happening in episode #2. Why can't she knock on his door in her sexy dress only to find he's not at home, but two of his street homies are, and they won't take no for an answer, and before Kelly knows it, they've aroused her to the point where dancing naked with two complete thug strangers seems like a good idea. And then she's intensely ashamed when she returns home.

Why is Rachel #2 mostly a repeat of Rachel #1, just with another athlete? Why is Rachel openly interested in combining her job and her sex life, basically removing all the drama even before it has the chance to build? If she considered herself a "proper girl" that only made a "misstep" in episode #1, and then felt really embarrassed when she was found out wearing the second guy's outfit (with NOTHING UNDERNEATH!) but still was talked into stripping naked for the interview, the story would effortlessly have become much more hot.

A good writer could inject some much needed quality in the writing, because everything else about the videos is already good to excellent. Dob is a good video artist but he's so damn milquetoast when it comes to writing scenarios and dialogue!
 
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PedroDeLara

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I really wish Dob hired a good smut writer.

His videos are top notch technically, and his girls are very attractive.

But the content just isn't very kinky. The girls never struggle with inner conflict, and everybody just likes to have sex, and there aren't any real consequences. Sure Dob tries to insert dialogue like "I've come to end it" but he simply can't pull it off.

In one scene the girl says "don't cum in me", the next everything about that is just forgotten. There are never any regret or drama. The girls never seem to react much at all, never mind feeling embarrassment, regret, or irritation. All of them shed their clothes at a moment's notice; none of them are the least bit hesitant or shy or reluctant.

Also, the series can't really pull off the escalation that is the hallmark of a good stroke story.

If Kelly in episode #1 has sex with her black neighbor, then why is the exact same thing happening in episode #2. Why can't she knock on his door in her sexy dress only to find he's not at home, but two of his street homies are, and they won't take no for an answer, and before Kelly knows it, they've aroused her to the point where dancing naked with two complete thug strangers seems like a good idea. And then she's intensely ashamed when she returns home.

Why is Rachel #2 mostly a repeat of Rachel #1, just with another athlete? Why is Rachel openly interested in combining her job and her sex life, basically removing all the drama even before it has the chance to build? If she considered herself a "proper girl" that only made a "misstep" in episode #1, and then felt really embarrassed when she was found out wearing the second guy's outfit (with NOTHING UNDERNEATH!) but still was talked into stripping naked for the interview, the story would effortlessly have become much more hot.

A good writer could inject some much needed quality in the writing, because everything else about the videos is already good to excellent. Dob is a good video artist but he's so damn milquetoast when it comes to writing scenarios and dialogue!

We agree about the visual quality, graphics and characters I myself am very meticulous about the texture and technical / visual detail of the video, even the background details, the videos he produces are and I consider a short film in this segment that he acts erotic / porn / hardcore the plot and dialogue are really in the background, but KELLY has a relevant logical sequence, DIANA has more videos and this last one (9) was also made with a lot of quality he is improving the story I believe and he has undoubtedly been improving the quality and listening / reading the most pertinent reviews that make him improve video by video. We will win ALL.
 

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I really wish Dob hired a good smut writer.

His videos are top notch technically, and his girls are very attractive.

But the content just isn't very kinky. The girls never struggle with inner conflict, and everybody just likes to have sex, and there aren't any real consequences. Sure Dob tries to insert dialogue like "I've come to end it" but he simply can't pull it off.

In one scene the girl says "don't cum in me", the next everything about that is just forgotten. There are never any regret or drama. The girls never seem to react much at all, never mind feeling embarrassment, regret, or irritation. All of them shed their clothes at a moment's notice; none of them are the least bit hesitant or shy or reluctant.

Also, the series can't really pull off the escalation that is the hallmark of a good stroke story.

If Kelly in episode #1 has sex with her black neighbor, then why is the exact same thing happening in episode #2. Why can't she knock on his door in her sexy dress only to find he's not at home, but two of his street homies are, and they won't take no for an answer, and before Kelly knows it, they've aroused her to the point where dancing naked with two complete thug strangers seems like a good idea. And then she's intensely ashamed when she returns home.

Why is Rachel #2 mostly a repeat of Rachel #1, just with another athlete? Why is Rachel openly interested in combining her job and her sex life, basically removing all the drama even before it has the chance to build? If she considered herself a "proper girl" that only made a "misstep" in episode #1, and then felt really embarrassed when she was found out wearing the second guy's outfit (with NOTHING UNDERNEATH!) but still was talked into stripping naked for the interview, the story would effortlessly have become much more hot.

A good writer could inject some much needed quality in the writing, because everything else about the videos is already good to excellent. Dob is a good video artist but he's so damn milquetoast when it comes to writing scenarios and dialogue!
The dialogue is definitely repetitive for sure, there's not as much spice as there could be.
 
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We agree about the visual quality, graphics and characters I myself am very meticulous about the texture and technical / visual detail of the video, even the background details, the videos he produces are and I consider a short film in this segment that he acts erotic / porn / hardcore the plot and dialogue are really in the background, but KELLY has a relevant logical sequence, DIANA has more videos and this last one (9) was also made with a lot of quality he is improving the story I believe and he has undoubtedly been improving the quality and listening / reading the most pertinent reviews that make him improve video by video. We will win ALL.
If you look at his last Poll you will see that Kelly and Rachel have the lowest Voting Ranks...so we don't know if there was a part 3 in next Year for both Girls.... we must wait for the second voting in November or December to have an answer...
And YES, his Storys could be much more kinky :)
 
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C.Volks

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If you look at his last Poll you will see that Kelly and Rachel have the lowest Voting Ranks...so we don't know if there was a part 3 in next Year for both Girls.... we must wait for the second voting in November or December to have an answer...
And YES, his Storys could be much more kinky :)

Can I ask why November or December. It should be this month right? To know what his supporters wants for the upcoming update or he already have the plan. Sorry, I am just new here. I don't know his schedules are.
 
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