VN Ren'Py Dog Days of Summer [v0.4.1] [BlackWeb Games]

[L7Bear]

Not sure if someone else already reported it, but there's a somewhat duplicated portion of code.
It looks like they were two different drafts, or meant to be different depending on prior choices, but instead it just plays one after the other.

chapter4.rpy
lines 1718 to 1743
lines 1757 to 1776


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[BlackWebGames]

Not sure if someone else already reported it, but there's a somewhat duplicated portion of code.
It looks like they were two different drafts, or meant to be different depending on prior choices, but instead it just plays one after the other.

chapter4.rpy
lines 1718 to 1743
lines 1757 to 1776

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Yeah I got it thank you. It will be fixed either in a hotfix or the next update.

 

[wt3uhchman]

Hey BlackWeb, will the Desiree shopping update have a lot of differences compared to the OG version?

 

[BlackWebGames]

Hey BlackWeb, will the Desiree shopping update have a lot of differences compared to the OG version?

it will follow a lot of the same beats. The big changes are going to be starting at the party and moving on from there.

 

[Mac006]

Just caught up to what is out so far, and I really am liking it so far. I was sad as heck when I hit the "no more content" bit, which shows how much I had gotten into it, so I am looking forward to more. Also, a few minor spelling mistakes near the end are my only real complaint, but those should be fixed over time.

 

[estrada777]

Updated Android port. Nothing too fancy but let me know if you have any issues.

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[Lady Alexa]

Hello,

I just played from half the chapter 2 until the end of the current version. Again a great release. I find some scenes much more plausible than the previous version.

I found many typos, and also 2 or 3 repeated scenes (one of them seems to be already reported above). The typos are gathered by chapters in the following list. I didn't play all the paths, so there are probably some more typos. Also sometimes I am not completely sure about a typo, I tried to show that in a comment.

I like the game very much, please continue your great work.

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[randomgamer986]

Hello,

I just played from half the chapter 2 until the end of the current version. Again a great release. I find some scenes much more plausible than the previous version.

I found many typos, and also 2 or 3 repeated scenes (one of them seems to be already reported above). The typos are gathered by chapters in the following list. I didn't play all the paths, so there are probably some more typos. Also sometimes I am not completely sure about a typo, I tried to show that in a comment.

I like the game very much, please continue your great work.

Spoiler: Long list of typos

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Damn! Bro went editor mode. Impressive.

 

[PickerLewd]

OK, I'll tell you my experience .

I played a bit last week and everything was normal, maybe I was a bit tired and sleepy. Last night, after the Christmas toast, I decided to continue playing under the influence of a little alcohol and found almost 30 typos .

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I also found two other minor errors, one scene where I think Rebecca is speaking but her name does not appear, and the second scene in the bar which has no sound.

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I think I have also read "orgasmi > orgasm" or some entries that say "too > to".

I'll come back when I've finished the content and let you know what I think.

I should point out that on the first day I probably skipped over typos without realising it, and that English is not my first language, so my error detection rate is low .

 

[Lady Alexa]

I played a bit last week and everything was normal, maybe I was a bit tired and sleepy. Last night, after the Christmas toast, I decided to continue playing under the influence of a little alcohol and found almost 30 typos .

I already posted a long list of typos here: https://f95zone.to/threads/dog-days-of-summer-v0-4-1-blackweb-games.43621/post-15673001

It includes for example the several typos of the word "orgasim" instead of "orgasm".
And I signaled many typos in the first chapter of the game some months ago. These typos are now corrected in the latest version. That might be the reason why you saw much less typos last week.

 

[randomgamer986]

BlackWebGames what code editor do you use for this renpy game?
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Neovim has a built-in spell checker.

 

[PickerLewd]

I think I finished the content.

It ends after Ms. Harper's blackmail scene, right?

The Ms. Harper thing seemed odd to me, because in my case I'd met her in the previous scene, when she asks you to come to her office (although she's named before) and all of a sudden she advances on you. But then again, I'm not a fan of slow burners either .

The game reminds me of GGGB, but obviously with better graphics, it seems to be on the right track, maybe it's worth supporting.

The bad thing is that I think the content is too little for the age of the game .

 

[randomgamer986]

I think I finished the content.

It ends after Ms. Harper's blackmail scene, right?

The Ms. Harper thing seemed odd to me, because in my case I'd met her in the previous scene, when she asks you to come to her office (although she's named before) and all of a sudden she advances on you. But then again, I'm not a fan of slow burners either .

The game reminds me of GGGB, but obviously with better graphics, it seems to be on the right track, maybe it's worth supporting.

The bad thing is that I think the content is too little for the age of the game .

the game has been remade. older versions have more content.

 

[PickerLewd]

I'm playing the old version and it looks pretty good to me , the only thing worse are the backgrounds.

It even has very few typos, which makes me wonder how far along the game was before it was reworked (whether it was in the middle of the story or where it was).

 

[GHOSTMD]

Yeah I got it thank you. It will be fixed either in a hotfix or the next update.

Hello there

just wanted to say this game quite positively surprised me
the setup to the lezdom / sub content hits rly good, so to speak

looking forward to see how the plots develop, specially with the dom/sub implycations
curious though are you planning to bring in more forceful events as well?

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The tension in Harpers office is rly nice set up

personally i would be totally down for that, even more so since the build up in your game
is nicely done

 

[BigAlzBub]

This is a rework, the original still has quite a bit more story than the current version, if you want to see the general trend, try downloading the old version and watch where that goes. There are some significant differences, but the larger plot beats seem for the most part intact.

 

[GHOSTMD]

ye i took a look a 1 mainplotline of the old version
to get a impresseion (live it out) thats why i was so positively surprised
not many good lezdom games out there that hit the mark (for me)

 

[BigAlzBub]

Blackwebgames (the author of this VN) also does a side project called Mother Lovers Society, it is worth a look, as long as you don't mind incest content, it is somewhat similar to Dog Days of Summer (ie almost exclusively Lesbian), and is even set in the same world.

 

[PickerLewd]

ye i took a look a 1 mainplotline of the old version
to get a impresseion (live it out) thats why i was so positively surprised
not many good lezdom games out there that hit the mark (for me)

But the blackmail scenes you mentioned are completely different.

In the original there was immediate sexual content in the bathroom after the office, and in the rework there is a scene inside Harper's office with the blonde chick waiting outside, which is softer and better done because you expect something tamer at the beginning.

 

[GHOSTMD]

didn t go for the blackmail in my test
i helped to write the paper so the situation unfolded completely different anyway.

personally wouldn t mind slow burns or going directly to the hardcore coercing / dom - sub
situation, depending ofc if it does make sense, given the choices you made.
It shouldn t be to much and too sudden though, we re starting out as kind of "shut in" PC after all.
Having tension and nice build up to the scene is rly nice. If there is a Blackmail event that leads to a short
harsh scene to get the "candy" instantly its plausible and sets the dynamic for future events
in that line.

as for right now, i am simply positively surprised by this game and i wanted to express that to the
developers.

I ll be honest though

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That being said its BlackWebGames game so its completely up to the dev how things will go.
I ll just wait and see