VN Ren'Py Dog Days of Summer [v0.5.1] [BlackWeb Games]

[bacienvu88]

There are a couple of routes I want to try before the update is released.
- mom and Viv's date at home

This one is pretty interesting I think. But I'll wait for you to play it before I tell my thoughts.

- dominating Eva with lessons learned from Ms Harper

Harper's lesson is right at the end of current update. So can't apply that yet.

Erisa's yacht to have a bit of fun with the girls.

Smack that ex around a bit? Or confuse everyone in that whisper game?

I needed to get a break. To get Tara off my mind. (Get out of my head, Tara. I'll be back. I promise. ) Maybe I'll have a bunch of things to discuss.

Good luck getting Tara out of your head. (hint: only possible if Tara allows it )

 

[lockerxx]

any news?

 

[bacienvu88]

any news?

New Amsterdam Times headlines:

• Local F1 Driver Rebecca Morris smashes through another glass ceiling to become first ever woman to reach third place in the global roster. "This is only the beginning" says her manager Mrs. Boone.
• New report says that number of boys born in the city is rapidly approaching zero, meanwhile number of girls born continues to soar. "who needs boys anyway?" states researcher responsible for the study.
• City officials worried about increased circulation of drugs in the city. "wanna fuck?" commented a local drug user when asked why they use drugs.
• Big interview with rising business mogul Malina. "My business is totally legit" says Malina herself.

Sorry, couldn't help myself ...

 

[Cygnus X-1]

any news?

Update is here. Check the

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page.
For MLS.

 

[Cygnus X-1]

New Amsterdam Times headlines:

• Local F1 Driver Rebecca Morris smashes through another glass ceiling to become first ever woman to reach third place in the global roster. "This is only the beginning" says her manager Mrs. Boone.
• New report says that number of boys born in the city is rapidly approaching zero, meanwhile number of girls born continues to soar. "who needs boys anyway?" states researcher responsible for the study.
• City officials worried about increased circulation of drugs in the city. "wanna fuck?" commented a local drug user when asked why they use drugs.
• Big interview with rising business mogul Malina. "My business is totally legit" says Malina herself.

Sorry, couldn't help myself ...

You should write the news for BWG.

 

[Cygnus X-1]

Anyway, how does this subscribestar thing work? Do they accept credit cards or paypal only?

 

[Oppai Auteur]

Anyway, how does this subscribestar thing work? Do they accept credit cards or paypal only?

Not sure what payment methods they actually use, but you cant use paypal for subscribestar

 

[bacienvu88]

You should write the news for BWG.

I just thought of another one:

Woman running for mayor vows to introduce new bill banning public hand holding. "Public hand holding is running rampant in the city, I vow to liberate the city from this sinful and decadent behavior" she blasts while having her pussy licked by a prostitute.

 

[BlackWebGames]

Anyway, how does this subscribestar thing work? Do they accept credit cards or paypal only?

They do accept credit card but if you would like to use paypal then you can become a member on

You must be registered to see the links

 

[BlackWebGames]

New Amsterdam Times headlines:

• Local F1 Driver Rebecca Morris smashes through another glass ceiling to become first ever woman to reach third place in the global roster. "This is only the beginning" says her manager Mrs. Boone.
• New report says that number of boys born in the city is rapidly approaching zero, meanwhile number of girls born continues to soar. "who needs boys anyway?" states researcher responsible for the study.
• City officials worried about increased circulation of drugs in the city. "wanna fuck?" commented a local drug user when asked why they use drugs.
• Big interview with rising business mogul Malina. "My business is totally legit" says Malina herself.

Sorry, couldn't help myself ...

I'll admit these are both funny and accurate.

 

[Cygnus X-1]

I just thought of another one:

Woman running for mayor vows to introduce new bill banning public hand holding. "Public hand holding is running rampant in the city, I vow to liberate the city from this sinful and decadent behavior" she blasts while having her pussy licked by a prostitute.

Incoming news:
Mayor levies tax on workers and businesses in the sex industry. "They use municipal services like everybody else, thus they shall pay taxes like everybody else. No freeloaders in my city!", said mayor Olivia Cromwell while squeezing her assistants breast. "Had to had them replaced five times this year alone. These things are costly, you know. What can I say, being mayor is a stressful job!", commented the mayor.

 

[Stringy Bob]

Hi, enjoying the game but I've noticed a quite a few spelling errors, the bathroom scene in the nightclub seems worst, however.

In the scene in the nightclub bathroom with Vivian, Desiree and Kathrine, mostly in order:

"peaked out" "should be "peeked out"
"certianly" "certainly"
"sugestive" "suggestive"
"poored" should be "poured",
"aperance" "appearance",
"pericing" "piercing",
"saringe" "syringe"
"pind down" "pin down"
"druge" "drug"
"rases" "raises"
"cheep" "cheap" (budgies go cheep)
"litteraly" "literaly"
"furry" "fury"
"crowed" "crowd"
"gentelmen" "gentlemen"
"Crazey ass" "Crazy-ass"
"refering "referring"
"reluctently" "reluctantly"
"stuborn" "stubborn"
"handeled" "handled"
"certianly" "certainly"
"famious" "famous"
"certian" "certain"
"reluctently" "reluctantly"
"greatful" "grateful"
and in the context of something you stick a syringe into "vain" should be "vein".

not spelling errors but "one of the man's cocks" would probably read better as "the man's cock" and "fuck this chick is crazy." as "Fuck! This chick is crazy!"

Also, Kathrine is an unusual spelling, Katherine is more common, but then again she's an unusual person.

Havent noticed as many spelling errors in the other scenes.

ED noticed a couple more & correction to a correction

 

[Cygnus X-1]

Hi, I've noticed a quite a few spelling errors, the bathroom scene in the nightclub seems worst, however.

In the scene in the nightclub bathroom with Vivian, Desiree and Kathrine:

"poored" should be "poured",
"aperance" "appearance",
"pericing" "piercing",
"saringe" "syringe"
"pind down" "pin down"
"druge" "drug"
"rases" "raises"
"cheep" "cheap" (budgies go cheep)
"litteraly" "literaly"
"furry" "fury"
"crowed" "crowd"
"gentelmen" "gentlemen"
"Crazey ass" "Crazy-ass"
"refering "referring"
"reluctently" "reluctantly"
"stuborn" "stubborn"
"handeled" "handled"
"certianly" "certainly"
"famious" "famous"
"certian" "certain"
"reluctently" "reluctantly"
"greatful" "grateful"
and in the context of something you stick a syringe into "vain" should be "vein".

Also, Kathrine is an unusual spelling, Katherine is more common, but then again she's an unusual person.

Havent noticed as many spelling errors in the other scenes.

Yeah, I noticed the typos.
As I wrote in MLS thread. Try to play a japanese vn with real-time machine translation and you'll be wondering what game are you playing.

 

[dolfe67]

Hi, I've noticed a quite a few spelling errors, the bathroom scene in the nightclub seems worst, however.

In the scene in the nightclub bathroom with Vivian, Desiree and Kathrine, mostly in order:

"peaked out" "should be "peeked in"
"certianly" "certainly"
"sugestive" "suggestive"
"poored" should be "poured",
"aperance" "appearance",
"pericing" "piercing",
"saringe" "syringe"
"pind down" "pin down"
"druge" "drug"
"rases" "raises"
"cheep" "cheap" (budgies go cheep)
"litteraly" "literaly"
"furry" "fury"
"crowed" "crowd"
"gentelmen" "gentlemen"
"Crazey ass" "Crazy-ass"
"refering "referring"
"reluctently" "reluctantly"
"stuborn" "stubborn"
"handeled" "handled"
"certianly" "certainly"
"famious" "famous"
"certian" "certain"
"reluctently" "reluctantly"
"greatful" "grateful"
and in the context of something you stick a syringe into "vain" should be "vein".

not spelling errors but "one of the man's cocks" would probably read better as "the man's cock" and "fuck this chick is crazy." as "Fuck! This chick is crazy!"

Also, Kathrine is an unusual spelling, Katherine is more common, but then again she's an unusual person.

Havent noticed as many spelling errors in the other scenes.

ED noticed a couple more

Yeah sadly it's filled with typos like that. I can understand grammar errors (though there are even sites for that nowadays), but most of the spelling errors are easily avoidable with a spell checker and is a bit infuriating

 

[bacienvu88]

Yeah sadly it's filled with typos like that. I can understand grammar errors (though there are even sites for that nowadays), but most of the spelling errors are easily avoidable with a spell checker and is a bit infuriating

I don't mind too much about spelling errors. Very few places where I don't know what should be there. Especially since the writing is so good otherwise. I've played games with perfect spelling and grammar where the writing is all over the place and makes it nearly incomprehensible.

 

[Alley_Cat]

Just got a facepalm over in the MLS thread because someone was asking about the chance of a male MC. Which got me thinking, is there even a chance of Viv hooking up with what's his face, if you choose him over Des?

 

[Cygnus X-1]

Just got a facepalm over in the MLS thread because someone was asking about the chance of a male MC. Which got me thinking, is there even a chance of Viv hooking up with what's his face, if you choose him over Des?

Noooooooooooooo!!!!!

 

[bacienvu88]

Just got a facepalm over in the MLS thread because someone was asking about the chance of a male MC. Which got me thinking, is there even a chance of Viv hooking up with what's his face, if you choose him over Des?

He is backpacking across Europe as I understood it. So good luck tracking him down. The only guy in the game I can even remotely see Viv hook up with is Oscar the teacher.

 

[Cygnus X-1]

He is backpacking across Europe as I understood it. So good luck tracking him down. The only guy in the game I can even remotely see Viv hook up with is Oscar the teacher.

Who is he? The guy on the back of that book Michelle was reading?

 

[bacienvu88]

Who is he? The guy on the back of that book Michelle was reading?

I was talking DDoS males, not MLS. Oscar is one of Viv's teachers.

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