Ren'Py Abandoned Double Trouble [v0.01a - Demo] [TROUBLEDEV]

[Uthuriel]

Oh great... another one...

At least they aren't midgets this time...

 

[baka]

very short demo but I like the idea so far. a gadget that do what?
no idea, but we will find out. I hope they will try it on the sister next time!

 

[troubledev]

very short demo but I like the idea so far. a gadget that do what?
no idea, but we will find out. I hope they will try it on the sister next time!

Next release will have some grind + 3 to 5 scenes.

 

[EmoBot]

The game could use the rollback feature

 

[baka]

suggestion
the "icon" to move around, should have a highlight mode. so when u hover with mouse it will "highlight" (u know some buttons are like that, u see the button change) the click (icon-change) is not that important, but its a nice thing as well to have.

 

[ShinyRock_Productions]

Just played it, this is perfect, this game could become one of the TOP 10 best ever, ever.

 

[binglebangles]

Could be a gem, who knows

Spoiler: *Chuckle*

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[JacksDissapointment]

Oof. That last render.
Tell me you have a old GPU without telling me you have a old GPU

it's a still of hair that moves. dont judge a book by it's cover.

 

[JacksDissapointment]

good start. expect good things from this project.

 

[Chris2606]

Mmmh, with this short overview and the pictures, i smell at least swinging or sharing, by jealous brother or MC the bad 3 letters. Future tags would be good, to see, whats coming.

 

[gigan]

troubledev i know it is a demo but i found a little mistake.You forget in this sentence to use the moms name variable

 

[VulgarXrated]

How do you spice up the traditional skincest porn? There's two of you now!
Double the dicks , double the fun

 

[Cirdon]

troubledev Navigation sucks. When we got to the twins being told to get their stuff out of the basement, I actually thought the story ended right there for a few beats because there was nothing to indicate how the hell I was even going to get to the basement.

When I noticed the compass rose in the corner the options were just the connected rooms.

Spoiler: stream of consciousness as I play through...

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Not terrible, but plot holes abound character placement in frame sucks, always placing all the characters the same distance from the camera and they look out of proportion to the room.

 

[bendio]

Congrats!

 

[troubledev]

troubledev i know it is a demo but i found a little mistake.You forget in this sentence to use the moms name variable

Thanks! I will change this.

troubledev Navigation sucks. When we got to the twins being told to get their stuff out of the basement, I actually thought the story ended right there for a few beats because there was nothing to indicate how the hell I was even going to get to the basement.

When I noticed the compass rose in the corner the options were just the connected rooms.

Spoiler: stream of consciousness as I play through...

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Not terrible, but plot holes abound character placement in frame sucks, always placing all the characters the same distance from the camera and they look out of proportion to the room.

This is definitely not final from a story or writing perspective. This is a proof of concept. I'm going to address a lot of this in v0.02. The landlord was added right before finalizing the demo, and I missed a few <name> inserts.

The camera is supposed to be the device going full transformers into a little helicopter drone. The art for that would be hard so I put it off.

Also agree that navigation sucks. I'm not a programmer and this is my first time using renpy.

 

[strenif]

Which one? More specific feedback would help.

The last preview post. Overlaying the characters onto a background image in DAZ.
I can't tell if the background image is a real photo or a rendered one BUT if it is rendered you might consider posing the characters in the environment in DAZ, putting all the characters into a single group then hide that group. Render the scene with just the background. Then hide the enviroment and set that render as the new background. Then unhide the characters and render the scene. You'll have to render each scene twice but you won't have this disconnected feel where your toons look a lot like they are floating in space.

Here's some examples of that in action.

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It's not perfect since they won't cast any shadows but it'll be worth the effort.

 

[troubledev]

The last preview post. Overlaying the characters onto a background image in DAZ.
I can't tell if the background image is a real photo or a rendered one BUT if it is rendered you might consider posing the characters in the environment in DAZ, putting all the characters into a single group then hide that group. Render the scene with just the background. Then high the background and unhide the characters. You'll have to render each scene twice but you won't have this disconnected feel where your toons look a lot less like they are floating in space.

Here's some examples of that in action.

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It's not perfect since they won't cast any shadows but it'll be worth the effort.

I really dislike the DAZ renders look. I'd rather go for the toon backgrounds and have a bit of the floating in space. Rendering out the scene several times sucks, and imo it doesn't really look all that great anyway.

The backgrounds are 2D and a mix of novel ai + upscale + manual edits in photoshop. It's fast, and I'm a just alright 2D artist so making modifications instead of starting from scratch has really sped things up and upped the quality level.

Mmmh, with this short overview and the pictures, i smell at least swinging or sharing, by jealous brother or MC the bad 3 letters. Future tags would be good, to see, whats coming.

MCs = Jake & Blake no jealousy no watching etc. they are essentially a single character so yes to sharing no to any other element of NTR

The game could use the rollback feature

I don't know how to code well and I broke Renpy and disabling rollback fixed it, sorry.

 

[Johnny1507]

Team Fuck! Interesting.

You have my attention, dear developer.

If the story and the situations are good, others can be forgiven.

The rollback is necessary in these types of games.

I'll wait until the game is a bit more mature to play it.

 

[Saluja]

Nicely done, also share some samples?

 

[Saint Blackmoor]

When two best friends move back to their hometown from college, they find a mysterious device in their landlady's basement that will change things forever.

When two "friends" move home and their "landlady" finds something, she likes in their shorts. Pic 4

Looks worthy of inquiry, Good luck troubledev