This update is great, but OH MY GOD the typos and grammar. >_<
I unpacked and fixed as much of it as I could find - I think it should just be a matter of unpacking the zipfile straight into your \game folder, you'll know if it worked if Aunt Jenna's comment about the lodge being too much for her and her husband in the first section in the car is specifically "My husband bought it years ago, but it's a waste for just the two of us." (this is the first line I changed).
I've not changed anything other than dialog, and for the most part all I did is correct grammar, punctuation, and spelling. There's a few lines that I changed to make them flow a little better, but I've not changed any context or content - All of the cheesy lines are exactly the same way as I found them, just cleaned up.
If you've got any questions or issues, you can usually find me in the game's official Discord channel, or just ping me directly in Discord @lapdragon#7550. I'll check this thread every once in a while, but I can't make any promises to have prompt answers here.