VN Ren'Py Driven by Desire [v0.2.5 Public] [KloppStyle]

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I'm digging this game, it has the most wholesome protag you can imagine and not in a bad way. Also the girls are incredibly hot and plot has a solid start. So many games get ruined by either a total jerk MC or a complete pussy.
 
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It's me or there is some problem with Zoe writting? Mc and her were supposed to be childhood friend and very close , and they act like it after their reunion, and nothing bad with that, but the begining of the story is hard to explain then because :

For someone that supposedly miss so much her friend after a few years without seeing him, she didnt even bother to talk to him during her whole vacation, even though she live close to his house, like she couldnt even spare a a few minutes just to say hello and greet an old friend?
And if mc didnt run into her accidentaly, she would have left without even saying a word to him since she returned to the city the day after that, something that is hard to explain, unless she had forgot about him , which doesnt seem to be the case.

It seem realy out of character, because she seem like a nice girl and seem to genuily miss him,which is why i mention it.

Also we have a little error with her age, Tony said that she's two year older than them ( mc and Tony are 21 and Adam 22, so she should be 23-24, but the bio say 22)
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There is definitely some things I can nitpick... like the MC being 21 and narrating how he wants to go 'play' with his friends after doing his chores... I mean, that's something you say as a pre-adolescent. As far as Zoe goes, I kind of agree with you but I would also maybe offer up the idea that:
a. They weren't as close as the MC thought. That he severely underestimated their relationship
b. People change over time, when she left it appears she was in her early teens, but returned home as a young adult. Just saying her feelings for him might have also changed and not until she saw him again, did those fond feelings for him return.

All that said, it does seem kind of sus that for her to have left such a big impression on him, only to return home and from our point of view, she really is very ambivalent or nonchalant about reconnecting with her childhood friend. I do wonder what kind of setup this means for her as a LI since it seems from the outside looking in Patricia is more invested in starting something with the MC, even if it's just casual sex.

I'm sure a part of it is Zoe knowing she is going back home to the city, and she had just a brief vacation back in the village so why even start something? I also picked up on her not wanting to answer the MC when he asked her if she had a boyfriend... and instead successfully changed the subject by skinny-dipping in the stream. Lastly, regarding Amalia... while it would have been great or interesting to see something with her and the MC, the way the story is being presented it's completely in line with her character to stay loyal/faithful to the dad, since he's the sole reason she left the city to come live in the village in the first place. It sucks but it is what it is, that's why we have a nice sex scene with Patricia instead.

All that said, I am willing to stick it out a little longer to see how the rest of this story unfolds. I do like the art style, and the animation, even if the the writing and grammar could use a little more tightening up and polish.
 
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