VN Ren'Py Abandoned Dual Family [v1.22.1ce] [Gumdrop Games]

[Bloo]

Added mirrors for gofile and nya, fixed OP.

Don't bother playing if you want to masturbate, there's only one oral scene from a previous version and it's extremely short, the new content barely adds anything which makes it seems like the game is the same has the previous version honestly.

 

[AkitoH]

I understand wanting to take your time and slow down the pace, but the amount of new content is seriously lacking from the looks of it. Last month was the same thing. I won't judge since I don't know his schedule, but still. Not to mention I feel lied to by that hardcore Mom pic so forgive me if I'm a bit butthurt right now. At this rate I might not touch this game again until the 9th update or more.

 

[secrecy]

This game is a total deception. I am not against an ounce of "drama", but this is too much. 90% of time characters are speaking or thinking about their problems and life expectations. Extremely short updates and almost zero erotic/sexual content.

The premise was very good, but development is a failure. Still hoping creator realizes this is a wrong way.

 

[Aiden]

I understand wanting to take your time and slow down the pace, but the amount of new content is seriously lacking from the looks of it. Last month was the same thing. I won't judge since I don't know his schedule, but still. Not to mention I feel lied to by that hardcore Mom pic so forgive me if I'm a bit butthurt right now. At this rate I might not touch this game again until the 9th update or more.

What is that image tho ? is it in this update ? couldnt get it with the father or son ^^

 

[AkitoH]

What is that image tho ? is it in this update ? couldnt get it with the father or son ^^

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That's the image. I don't know how many branching ideas is in it, but I'm 100% sure it's not the son's route. The son doesn't have hairy legs and I haven't seen it on the Father's route either. So I feel seriously cheated right now. Thought I was gonna activate makeup sex but nah.

 

[krmit]

Seems i got unlucky with this build and have bugs with father playthrough

youre not missing much

 

[sionis10]

Spoiler: Mom

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How can we get that scene

 

[pornpanda]

How can we get that scene

this is fake ! 100% fake ( I mean mybe for its for the next version. but, 10000% sure not for this one )

 

[Sam]

How can we get that scene

Looks like it was a patreon only 'bonus', it's not in the game.

 

[lockerxx]

sigh.... maybe for next upgrade.yes the mom picture is a bonus not in the game yep :/

 

[Bloo]

How can we get that scene

It's not in the game, it's just some random render he sent to his Patrons.

I understand why you guys are upset about the length but I'm personally quite happy with the update. The dev himself has stated that the updates will be short so it shouldn't be a surprise.
Besides that the writing quality is far above the status quo. Compare it to games like "Big Brother" and "Dating My Daughter" which hover just above Google Translate level of quality.

Doesn't change the fact that there's no content after a month. Plenty other Patreons releasing better, faster and in larger quantities.

 

[Imperator753]

I understand why you guys are upset about the length but I'm personally quite happy with the update. The dev himself has stated that the updates will be short so it shouldn't be a surprise.
Besides that the writing quality is far above the status quo. Compare it to games like "Big Brother" and "Dating My Daughter" which hover just above Google Translate level of quality.

I haven't played this version, but I have played the previous one and honestly, the writing is not that good. Even though BB is translated, at least it has content that allows one to ignore poor text quality. While I admit it could be better, DMD writing is far superior than this, don't know why you think it's google translate.

 

[Endless]

Can someone please post the walkthrough

 

[TMWSTW]

I haven't played this version, but I have played the previous one and honestly, the writing is not that good. Even though BB is translated, at least it has content that allows one to ignore poor text quality. While I admit it could be better, DMD writing is far superior than this, don't know why you think it's google translate.

Look, it's certainly not award winning writing but it's good (for a porn game). Compare it to a lot of the other titles on this forum and there's a pretty big difference. Maybe it's just me but bad writing can turn me off of a game even if the art/images are amazing. Whereas I can greatly enjoy a pure text game that doesn't have any art/images.
In regards to DMD I don't mean it's literally as bad as a Google Translated game but that it's not that many steps above one. It has a very unnatural feeling to its dialogue (next to zero flow) accompanied by the fact that all of the dialogue feels like excerpts from porno intros.

Doesn't change the fact that there's no content after a month. Plenty other Patreons releasing better, faster and in larger quantities.

That's true. I'm not trying to convince anyone to support it I'm just sharing my personal opinion on it. Everyone has their own gauge of what is and isn't deserving of money/support.

Anyways, to reiterate; all I'm trying to say is that I, personally, am not disappointed or surprised by the update. I don't want to be anyone's dom and control what they do or don't support. penedeyewink:

 

[D3ssel]

I want to dig this game. I really do.

But, yet again, another release that failed to impress me. And the reason is the very same I've seen again and again lately in Patreon: The so called "slowly building up a relationship". It's a very, very tall order. Much bigger than most people think, actually.

Allow me to explain: Slowly building a relationship per se is quite easy, and truth be told, the author here is doing a very good job (the dad path is particularly good, imho). Just take it slow. Add some sweet scenes. Don't force anything. And you will be well on your way for a slow, "believable", relationship. Anyone with a bit of writing skills can do it, imo.

But doing so while avoiding letting the game becoming boring, stale even, is the hard part. And it's even harder to do when you are talking about an erotic game that should have, guess what? Erotic scenes!

As it is, this game fails (to me, at least) to deliver on that front. It works and looks too much like a plain dating VN right now, and not like a proper erotic game. It fails to fulfill. To keep our interest in it. There's nothing truly exciting in it's story (heck, the sexyest scene was from a prior release!). I felt like I was reading a boring romance book my sister lent me, and, more than once, found myself almost fast forwarding through the dialogues, barely reading what was written in it.

Now, do bear in mind that not only I'm a huge fan of RPGs and books, but I also do love reading erotic stories, so when I say I'm skipping text, something is really off there.

If anyone wants to make slow, believable relationships, go for it! But, please, keep the whole story interesting, exciting and, above all, avoid it becoming a stale, slow text grind. There are two ways you can pull that off, imho: Either A) you are a superb writer who can make great stories and plots, or B) you add more situations and characters to the story, where you can add the excitement/erotic part without rushing relationships with the main characters, like "Dating my Daughter" is doing.

A very tall order, as I said previously.

As it is, this game shows huge promise, but it's just plain boring right now, imo.

 

[Dustellar]

This game will be great... once finished, damn! I'm tired of saying this xD let's hope for a hardcore scene in the next update, at least one!

 

[Glaoui]

As the above people are saying.
The FD path is a slow path like in DMD but is lacking of a sunny female personality like can be the daughter in DMD. Instead we have a boring, where is the skip button, story. I actually used the skip button during most of the FD story.

The MS is way more promising for sexy content, but it is a 30 mns half game with the 3 parts. As usual not that lot of content delivered: do not let the list of scenes/events fools you.

A game with a lot of promises but really boring at the moment for half of it. And short, really short.
To clarify, I was a patron until that delivery.

 

[SStyliss3D]

Maybe some walkthrough??

 

[secrecy]

Can someone please post the walkthrough

A walkthrough is unnecesary because there are no paths, no decissions affecting story...nothing.

People say it´s a 5 minutes update. I disagree: if you remove all the empty screens, all the scenes with a (...) as a dialogue/story, remove all the repeated thoughts and dialogues of characters -reflections about a fucked marriage/what am I doing with my life, 90% of the "game"-, updates are about 2-3 mins maximum.

A few examples: What´s the point of the daughter/father conversation at the restaurant? To show us their legs under the table? That´s all. Same with cinema. Absolutely nothing.
Choosing dress? It is something always could include some suggestive content. Zero. Worst enough, there are no options, nor in dialogue, not even choosing dress.
Why to put some "options" at the mall? Story don´t advance until you pass through all the scenes, so options are unncecesary. Same when you walk around the house searching for members of your family.

The dinner scene? Ridiculous. Characters repeating again same dialogues as previous scenes.

I suppose there are 2 motives why this game is sooo underdeveloped, both are terrible: 1- Creator had a great idea about how to tell a story, but doesn´t know how to develope it and hadn´t got a script before starting the game, or 2- He is trying to milk his patreons each month releasing almost 0 content each month. In any case, I anticipate he will lose majority of support in the next days unless a drastic boost in the game happen.

 

[User_2668]

Wow. I thought you guys were exaggerating a bit. But then i played.

What a super lame update. Probably the lamest update i have ever seen.

I know he plans to take thing slowing but that doesn't mean adding only 5 min worth playable content on every update with no HR scene. Not even a erotic one.