So does the game has some sort of gameplay? From the description I got the feeling there is actual dungeon management like in Boss Monster or Legend of Keepers.
My thoughts so far, humor only with a mix of casual violence, but I only got to the tavern so far.
The girls are really quite cute, besides Pah, I do not like her a bit. Neither her design nor her possessive behavior.
Rip Lord Grand Magus Demetrus from Burgenheim the third, you were a great frog.
Good luck and have fun with the development, sadly it didn't quite catch my interest. If you have a bigger background mystery planned, maybe you want to hint it earlier in the intro to hook the player with it, gathering information about a random, adventurer group is not that interesting, especially after you see how casual the dungeon crew dealt with a party.