Thanks a lot for your comment my friend, I'm glad you liked the game!Really liking the game, can feel there's some heart and mind put into it.
The chats are well written and gives the characters their own quirks and it's capturing the e-thots trope well and puts a fun spin on it. They're not feeling like total NPCs i couldn't care less about. Of course it's still porn logic, but there's a lot of games out there where the characters are just so totally boring, so kudos to the dev. My main gripe with the game is, that with all the great build up it's kinda omitting the best part of NTR/corruption stories, actually seeing the moment where the girls succumb to their desires and fall. Maybe i'm just misunderstanding the kink and people get off on not actually seeing it. But rather than just having 2 pics and the phonecall (which was a nice touch) when Morgane gets her pussy played with and blows the dude, wouldn't a Morgane PoV scene (or the guy's PoV) be much hotter? But again maybe i'm just missing the point maybe it's also just a matter of finding an artist, since apparently the dev is looking for one.
Also seeing a lot of negativity for the MC, but i'm actually not hating him, ofc somewhat of an ass especially early on, but not a complete wet wipe, curious how far the NTR is going in this game or if he gets happy ending with the girls. Also actually seeing some scenes with him and the girls would be nice, but again, bit too light on the render count for my taste.
Anyway best of luck, looking forward to more
But she's not cheating, only Avar can touch her pussy!Jesus what a good game. I like the NTR genre but this is the first time i've been so immersed in the story. I really got nervous when i read her messages with others.
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Nop you're right, after chapter 1 we can't access to the cards anymore (there's none left anyway, the chapter ends when you've seen all cards, and you've seen all discussions by the time you've seen all card so there's not much you can miss).It's probably just me being dumb, but after Chapter 1 there's no way of accessing that card-based job minigame? And the streams and TV programs?
I swear I've seen notifications about new content there, but I didn't find the app anywhere.
Also I remember a screen that shower the girls stats and jobs, but again don't remember where it was...
Hehe thank you my friend, I'm glad you felt immersed. It's one of the best feedback to read!Jesus what a good game. I like the NTR genre but this is the first time i've been so immersed in the story. I really got nervous when i read her messages with others.
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I'm quite enjoying the slowburn on this one actually, so turning one of them into a turbo gigaslut right away sounds incredibly unappealing.Which is nice and a good use of them but I would have much preferred if at least Anna had descended fairly quickly into a mega-depraved gigaslut so we got some actual meaty content.
I totally understand, the first part is quite slow and the second can be too depending on how you like to consume your porn games. However, neither Elaine nor Anna exist with the intention of getting NTR'd or becoming cosmic sluts, not even Morgane. They just exist to tell a narrative, and in that sense Elaine could very well end the game having touched no cock other than Avar's, just as she could end it having committed the worst atrocities imaginable!I mean this game is high quality in some respects but I just don't get how the ntr for Elaine and Anna is so throttled? Like obviously morgane is the most important NTR and I liked the progress there, even if it is also sort of throttled to be honest it could have taken place over roughly 1/3 less days and word count, but the other two primarily just confuse/enable morgane's worst tendencies.
Which is nice and a good use of them but I would have much preferred if at least Anna had descended fairly quickly into a mega-depraved gigaslut so we got some actual meaty content.
I can actually translate that for you right now! Conversation went as followed:Good game. I'm deaf, I can't hear the phone conversation. Can you make subtitles? (translate)
It's when you've seen all cards or when you've chosen all answers? Because there's some scenes I got on my first playthrough that I don't remember getting on this one.Nop you're right, after chapter 1 we can't access to the cards anymore (there's none left anyway, the chapter ends when you've seen all cards, and you've seen all discussions by the time you've seen all card so there's not much you can miss).
You're welcome! It's not anything that different, but it's what I managed to come up with.And thanks for the suggestions and the nice words! Someone had already suggested something similar regarding photo syncs, and I'm taking note of the idea!
It's not the slow burn that's the problem it's the things that happen that the MC and us the players can't see that's the problem.We'll all know the answer when the game is finished, but I can understand why some people don't have the patience for a slower-burn experience, hence the existence of your feedback, which is obviously just as important and taken into account as any other
Thanks a lot for the review, I really enjoyed reading it! Right now I don't really have a second game screen planned, but I'm trying to think of ideas to make the discussion part more varied. I'll keep you posted!I think where this game really nails the premise is the fact that Morgane has zero idea that Avar is aware of her antics, legitimately believing she is getting away with what she's doing. So many NTR games attempt this, but so few actually get it right, or there are zero consequences until the very end. In this game, consequences are unfolding alongside the activity, with Avar and Elaine's deal.
I can confidently say that getting Morgane's 'phone' call actually made something stir in my chest, which no other AVN has managed to pull off. Is it the very familiar interface we're using pulling us in? Is it the characters having actual personalities, or motivations?
One thing for certain, I'm actually looking forward to the potential story branching down the road, to have a say in how Avar will react once Morgane goes all the way (it's a porn game, she's going to eventually).
My hats off to Archipote. Once my medical bills level off, you can count on me to subscribe.
A few nitpicks.
More interaction between Avar and Anna. He knows via Morgane's conversations what sort of bullshittery she's up to. It could be interesting to see how Avar might use that. Hell, depending on how twisted Avar and her really are, maybe he could use that to corrupt her in his favor, or turn sweet on her and get her more on his side and perhaps another informant on Morgane's cheating, since they clearly talk in person about it and not over Despot.
Defo more intensity between Avar and Elaine. The kind that doesn't revolve around Morgane, but their own history and determination to be together. They both have strong personalities and will clash on a lot of things, it could be a very fun dynamic to explore.
I think it's okay to build a secondary play area for the players, something that doesn't involve the PC interface. A phone would be interesting, or ditching the interface and showing via more traditional AVN format, the real world interactions between Avar and the others, rather than sticking exclusively to Despot (Discord).
The outcomes of the cards in Chapter 1 are different, which is why you got other scenes this time. Every time you unlocked a scene, hoot or discussion via the cards by taking one option, the other option gave access to a different scene, hoot or dizsussion!It's when you've seen all cards or when you've chosen all answers? Because there's some scenes I got on my first playthrough that I don't remember getting on this one.
Also, what about that app that had Twitch, TV etc.?
You're welcome! It's not anything that different, but it's what I managed to come up with.
Couldn't think of anything that didn't end in just some more pictures and videos. Maybe some online game minigames?
I know, but I think it should be possible to get all scenes before progressing. Having to start over to see all content is a bummer.Thanks a lot for the review, I really enjoyed reading it! Right now I don't really have a second game screen planned, but I'm trying to think of ideas to make the discussion part more varied. I'll keep you posted!
The outcomes of the cards in Chapter 1 are different, which is why you got other scenes this time. Every time you unlocked a scene, hoot or discussion via the cards by taking one option, the other option gave access to a different scene, hoot or dizsussion!