Others E-Thots: A NTR Game Set in a 100% PC Interface [Ch. 2 v2.4] [Archipote]

[Pillepalle]

Really liking the game, can feel there's some heart and mind put into it.
The chats are well written and gives the characters their own quirks and it's capturing the e-thots trope well and puts a fun spin on it. They're not feeling like total NPCs i couldn't care less about. Of course it's still porn logic, but there's a lot of games out there where the characters are just so totally boring, so kudos to the dev. My main gripe with the game is, that with all the great build up it's kinda omitting the best part of NTR/corruption stories, actually seeing the moment where the girls succumb to their desires and fall. Maybe i'm just misunderstanding the kink and people get off on not actually seeing it. But rather than just having 2 pics and the phonecall (which was a nice touch) when Morgane gets her pussy played with and blows the dude, wouldn't a Morgane PoV scene (or the guy's PoV) be much hotter? But again maybe i'm just missing the point maybe it's also just a matter of finding an artist, since apparently the dev is looking for one.
Also seeing a lot of negativity for the MC, but i'm actually not hating him, ofc somewhat of an ass especially early on, but not a complete wet wipe, curious how far the NTR is going in this game or if he gets happy ending with the girls. Also actually seeing some scenes with him and the girls would be nice, but again, bit too light on the render count for my taste.

Anyway best of luck, looking forward to more

 

[archipote]

Really liking the game, can feel there's some heart and mind put into it.
The chats are well written and gives the characters their own quirks and it's capturing the e-thots trope well and puts a fun spin on it. They're not feeling like total NPCs i couldn't care less about. Of course it's still porn logic, but there's a lot of games out there where the characters are just so totally boring, so kudos to the dev. My main gripe with the game is, that with all the great build up it's kinda omitting the best part of NTR/corruption stories, actually seeing the moment where the girls succumb to their desires and fall. Maybe i'm just misunderstanding the kink and people get off on not actually seeing it. But rather than just having 2 pics and the phonecall (which was a nice touch) when Morgane gets her pussy played with and blows the dude, wouldn't a Morgane PoV scene (or the guy's PoV) be much hotter? But again maybe i'm just missing the point maybe it's also just a matter of finding an artist, since apparently the dev is looking for one.
Also seeing a lot of negativity for the MC, but i'm actually not hating him, ofc somewhat of an ass especially early on, but not a complete wet wipe, curious how far the NTR is going in this game or if he gets happy ending with the girls. Also actually seeing some scenes with him and the girls would be nice, but again, bit too light on the render count for my taste.

Anyway best of luck, looking forward to more

Thanks a lot for your comment my friend, I'm glad you liked the game!

As for the “PoV”, that's 100% a personal choice and not a lack of "CGs". It's just that having an omniscient view would kind of ruin the concept of the messages interface in my opinion.

The idea of the game was to see a woman cheating on her boyfriend through his messages, like someone going through his girlfriend's phone and seeing messages with a co-worker, except that it's all the time! But I totally understand the frustration of not seeing everything that's going on with Morgane. Sadly I don't think, this isn't something that will change in the “messages” phase of the game, but it's potentially something that could be seen more often in the “job” phases (as was already a bit the case with the Job phase in chapter 2)

I hope you'll enjoy the rest of the game anyway, and just like with the phone call, I'll be trying to come up with new ideas every time to make the NTR a bit more surprising and varied!

 

[NickJay225]

Bro you know we need some of that elaine story development like for real I can't wait to see what stocks are you putting in for future updates.

 

[kikomascado]

It's probably just me being dumb, but after Chapter 1 there's no way of accessing that card-based job minigame? And the streams and TV programs?
I swear I've seen notifications about new content there, but I didn't find the app anywhere.
Also I remember a screen that shower the girls stats and jobs, but again don't remember where it was...

Just played the game to the end of the update yesterday and really liked it.
I wish Avar would show more enthusiasm when Morgane is being a slut (because I sure do love it), but I understand this isn't of his character and that way maybe the plot wouldn't advance.
And yeah, like the post above I wish Elaine also had more content. She and Avar fool around sometimes already, but we see nothing of that.

As for varying the gameplay, maybe logging in Morgane Google-like account, so her camera photos (of things she didn't tell anyone) and browsing history gets synchronized (so seeing searches and porn videos watched, maybe some amateur porn account?), some Tinder-like app (since she clearly gets off to masturbating online with strangers), or setting a hidden cam/accessing her webcam (though it would be hard to have someone besides Daddy on her room).
I ain't the most criative person out there, just throwing ideas out there. Hahaha
But also I wish there were more videos instead of just photos (like when she blew Lucas on bathroom).

 

[redliight]

Jesus what a good game. I like the NTR genre but this is the first time i've been so immersed in the story. I really got nervous when i read her messages with others.

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[kikomascado]

Jesus what a good game. I like the NTR genre but this is the first time i've been so immersed in the story. I really got nervous when i read her messages with others.

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But she's not cheating, only Avar can touch her pussy!

 

[archipote]

It's probably just me being dumb, but after Chapter 1 there's no way of accessing that card-based job minigame? And the streams and TV programs?
I swear I've seen notifications about new content there, but I didn't find the app anywhere.
Also I remember a screen that shower the girls stats and jobs, but again don't remember where it was...

Nop you're right, after chapter 1 we can't access to the cards anymore (there's none left anyway, the chapter ends when you've seen all cards, and you've seen all discussions by the time you've seen all card so there's not much you can miss).

And thanks for the suggestions and the nice words! Someone had already suggested something similar regarding photo syncs, and I'm taking note of the idea!

Jesus what a good game. I like the NTR genre but this is the first time i've been so immersed in the story. I really got nervous when i read her messages with others.

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Hehe thank you my friend, I'm glad you felt immersed. It's one of the best feedback to read!

 

[Zulfiqar]

I mean this game is high quality in some respects but I just don't get how the ntr for Elaine and Anna is so throttled? Like obviously morgane is the most important NTR and I liked the progress there, even if it is also sort of throttled to be honest it could have taken place over roughly 1/3 less days and word count, but the other two primarily just confuse/enable morgane's worst tendencies.

Which is nice and a good use of them but I would have much preferred if at least Anna had descended fairly quickly into a mega-depraved gigaslut so we got some actual meaty content.

 

[Stupidkiller]

Which is nice and a good use of them but I would have much preferred if at least Anna had descended fairly quickly into a mega-depraved gigaslut so we got some actual meaty content.

I'm quite enjoying the slowburn on this one actually, so turning one of them into a turbo gigaslut right away sounds incredibly unappealing.

 

[archipote]

I mean this game is high quality in some respects but I just don't get how the ntr for Elaine and Anna is so throttled? Like obviously morgane is the most important NTR and I liked the progress there, even if it is also sort of throttled to be honest it could have taken place over roughly 1/3 less days and word count, but the other two primarily just confuse/enable morgane's worst tendencies.

Which is nice and a good use of them but I would have much preferred if at least Anna had descended fairly quickly into a mega-depraved gigaslut so we got some actual meaty content.

I totally understand, the first part is quite slow and the second can be too depending on how you like to consume your porn games. However, neither Elaine nor Anna exist with the intention of getting NTR'd or becoming cosmic sluts, not even Morgane. They just exist to tell a narrative, and in that sense Elaine could very well end the game having touched no cock other than Avar's, just as she could end it having committed the worst atrocities imaginable!

We'll all know the answer when the game is finished, but I can understand why some people don't have the patience for a slower-burn experience, hence the existence of your feedback, which is obviously just as important and taken into account as any other

 

[Jack Moriarty]

Good game. I'm deaf, I can't hear the phone conversation. Can you make subtitles? (translate)

 

[Oppai_King]

Good game. I'm deaf, I can't hear the phone conversation. Can you make subtitles? (translate)

I can actually translate that for you right now! Conversation went as followed:
Gawk gawk gu gu ahhh *pant pant* gwak guuk qkqk schqick pa *pant pant* gwuk qwuk
and so on and so forth!
But seriousness you didnt miss much just audio of

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[QuiteQuiet]

I think where this game really nails the premise is the fact that Morgane has zero idea that Avar is aware of her antics, legitimately believing she is getting away with what she's doing. So many NTR games attempt this, but so few actually get it right, or there are zero consequences until the very end. In this game, consequences are unfolding alongside the activity, with Avar and Elaine's deal.
I can confidently say that getting Morgane's 'phone' call actually made something stir in my chest, which no other AVN has managed to pull off. Is it the very familiar interface we're using pulling us in? Is it the characters having actual personalities, or motivations?
One thing for certain, I'm actually looking forward to the potential story branching down the road, to have a say in how Avar will react once Morgane goes all the way (it's a porn game, she's going to eventually).
My hats off to Archipote. Once my medical bills level off, you can count on me to subscribe.

A few nitpicks.
More interaction between Avar and Anna. He knows via Morgane's conversations what sort of bullshittery she's up to. It could be interesting to see how Avar might use that. Hell, depending on how twisted Avar and her really are, maybe he could use that to corrupt her in his favor, or turn sweet on her and get her more on his side and perhaps another informant on Morgane's cheating, since they clearly talk in person about it and not over Despot.
Defo more intensity between Avar and Elaine. The kind that doesn't revolve around Morgane, but their own history and determination to be together. They both have strong personalities and will clash on a lot of things, it could be a very fun dynamic to explore.
I think it's okay to build a secondary play area for the players, something that doesn't involve the PC interface. A phone would be interesting, or ditching the interface and showing via more traditional AVN format, the real world interactions between Avar and the others, rather than sticking exclusively to Despot (Discord).

 

[kikomascado]

Nop you're right, after chapter 1 we can't access to the cards anymore (there's none left anyway, the chapter ends when you've seen all cards, and you've seen all discussions by the time you've seen all card so there's not much you can miss).

It's when you've seen all cards or when you've chosen all answers? Because there's some scenes I got on my first playthrough that I don't remember getting on this one.
Also, what about that app that had Twitch, TV etc.?

And thanks for the suggestions and the nice words! Someone had already suggested something similar regarding photo syncs, and I'm taking note of the idea!

You're welcome! It's not anything that different, but it's what I managed to come up with.
Couldn't think of anything that didn't end in just some more pictures and videos. Maybe some online game minigames?

 

[Badboll]

We'll all know the answer when the game is finished, but I can understand why some people don't have the patience for a slower-burn experience, hence the existence of your feedback, which is obviously just as important and taken into account as any other

It's not the slow burn that's the problem it's the things that happen that the MC and us the players can't see that's the problem.
You've been given ideas on how to combat that a little if you still don't want to show pov scenes from the girls.
1 form me with Anna making Morgane send her pictures/videos of what she does they already had an argument about Morgane doing stupid shit but Anna seems to like seeing Morgane do things and Morgane likes seeing Anna do things.
2 from someone else that Elaine will record/take pictures when she's with her to send to the MC.
I think both those scenarios need to happen for it not too feel frustrating. Sure the girls getting her to admit what she does in messages is good too. No matter what you decide to do, it's still a good game as it is and you should stick to doing what you want and only use the "advice" you get if you like it.
Everything doesn't have to be shown to the player, just when it makes sense I guess. If Anna or Elaine isn't present then someone has to coax Morgane to tell them what she did. Somehow some way she has to tell someone.
As I said, it's still a good game, you just need to iron out the transition between chapter 1 and 2 and make it make more sense, the other dude the 2way mirror guy just being gone. Also it felt like I had to replay chapter 1 and pick just lust or just love to get different results. Not sure if matters for chapter 2 though, it seems to start on a clean slate, which is the wrong way to do things. Might be an idea while I liked the card system to redo chapter 1 at a later date to make it more in line with chapter 2.

 

[Wilwock]

Spoiler: latest update spoiler i think

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[archipote]

I think where this game really nails the premise is the fact that Morgane has zero idea that Avar is aware of her antics, legitimately believing she is getting away with what she's doing. So many NTR games attempt this, but so few actually get it right, or there are zero consequences until the very end. In this game, consequences are unfolding alongside the activity, with Avar and Elaine's deal.
I can confidently say that getting Morgane's 'phone' call actually made something stir in my chest, which no other AVN has managed to pull off. Is it the very familiar interface we're using pulling us in? Is it the characters having actual personalities, or motivations?
One thing for certain, I'm actually looking forward to the potential story branching down the road, to have a say in how Avar will react once Morgane goes all the way (it's a porn game, she's going to eventually).
My hats off to Archipote. Once my medical bills level off, you can count on me to subscribe.

A few nitpicks.
More interaction between Avar and Anna. He knows via Morgane's conversations what sort of bullshittery she's up to. It could be interesting to see how Avar might use that. Hell, depending on how twisted Avar and her really are, maybe he could use that to corrupt her in his favor, or turn sweet on her and get her more on his side and perhaps another informant on Morgane's cheating, since they clearly talk in person about it and not over Despot.
Defo more intensity between Avar and Elaine. The kind that doesn't revolve around Morgane, but their own history and determination to be together. They both have strong personalities and will clash on a lot of things, it could be a very fun dynamic to explore.
I think it's okay to build a secondary play area for the players, something that doesn't involve the PC interface. A phone would be interesting, or ditching the interface and showing via more traditional AVN format, the real world interactions between Avar and the others, rather than sticking exclusively to Despot (Discord).

Thanks a lot for the review, I really enjoyed reading it! Right now I don't really have a second game screen planned, but I'm trying to think of ideas to make the discussion part more varied. I'll keep you posted!

It's when you've seen all cards or when you've chosen all answers? Because there's some scenes I got on my first playthrough that I don't remember getting on this one.
Also, what about that app that had Twitch, TV etc.?


You're welcome! It's not anything that different, but it's what I managed to come up with.
Couldn't think of anything that didn't end in just some more pictures and videos. Maybe some online game minigames?

The outcomes of the cards in Chapter 1 are different, which is why you got other scenes this time. Every time you unlocked a scene, hoot or discussion via the cards by taking one option, the other option gave access to a different scene, hoot or dizsussion!

 

[kikomascado]

Thanks a lot for the review, I really enjoyed reading it! Right now I don't really have a second game screen planned, but I'm trying to think of ideas to make the discussion part more varied. I'll keep you posted!



The outcomes of the cards in Chapter 1 are different, which is why you got other scenes this time. Every time you unlocked a scene, hoot or discussion via the cards by taking one option, the other option gave access to a different scene, hoot or dizsussion!

I know, but I think it should be possible to get all scenes before progressing. Having to start over to see all content is a bummer.
Maybe after seeing all cards you have the option to leave Chapter 1, but if you want you can keep trying to ger all scenes? Or having the option to choose between the two different jobs at chapter 2?
And also keep the Stream/TV App, so that we can replay past scenes and also add more events to it, like Morgane's jobs with the other agency.

Now something more technical:
Having to go through all camera slots during the Chapter 2 jobs and after using the Hornyficator adds nothing in my opinion, so it should at least be marked which ones are currently in use, better yet if it shows which girl is in it before clicking.
The timeskip during the Despot talks I found to be too slow and pretty cumbersome. I always think it's over and close the app (which shows a warning about finishing the dialogue but closes it anyway), but even when I don't, it returns to desktop after the fade. It should just have a fade in and out automatically on the app after the last message, making it quicker.

But this is just what I think could be QoL features, it in no way means that I didn't like the game. I really fid! And I'm looking forward for more of it, specially Morgane's shenanigans!

 

[smiley12]

is there a way i can start from the latest update i finished the game but had to reinstall windows so all of my saves got deleted

 

[Pentagonoscuro]

The turn that Morgane has taken is literally perfect, now she has become the stereotypical slut who netorases her boyfriend, I can't wait to see how the situation with Morgane evolves further,
Another thing but it's personal I would love to see that Morgane actually started selling photos of feet for real eheh, maybe then the "discord" bio would also change accordingly, maybe with "I don't sell photos of feet, maybe" or "I don't sell photos of feet, write to me to find out" or even directly "I'm selling photos of my feet" I'm saying all this because I like feet yes... it's just an idea, maybe other people might appreciate it too..
in any case congratulations again dev, best immersive ntr game played so far.