Others E-Thots: A NTR Game Set in a 100% PC Interface [Ch. 2 v2.4] [Archipote]

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Another opinion noone cares about:
Found this game recently. First chapter was a blast, really funny characters and their interactions in notdiscord and work minigame. And then second chapter just... don't feel it, idk. Work became much less fun for the sake of few CG, MC feels much softer (and yes, making timeskip instead of showing actual progression is understandable due to format of the game but still cheap move writing-wise) and feels like he have less presense overall - two VN segments I got feels like he is fifth wheel here, idk. Dissapointed. I don't even finished chapter 2 (or reach the end of the update, don't know is it completed yet), just went a bit further after bet between Avar and Elaine but bored already. And about h-content - game isn't even feels like h-game, first chapter heavily carried by characters but in second, where characters interactions became more flat, lack of h-content feels like a big disadvantage. I mean, I have much less fun reading chats in notdiscord but have just a few CG instead, don't feel like this exchange worth it. Oh, and one more thing - first chapter was good comedy, but second maybe trying to be more serious and fall, because seriously speaking - I am feeling bad for Elaine, who is the most sane character here and she deserves better than all this.

I care about it! All feedback is very important, so thank you for taking the time to point out what you did and didn't like in detail.
Personally, if I had to give my opinion, I prefer the pace of chapter 2, but the mini-game really lacked his fun. This is something I hope to rectify with chapter 3, as I've already said (so as not to sound like I'm rambling for those who already read it hehe).

As for the more serious tone of chapter 2, that wasn't much the idea. I'm not saying this to try and justify myself, but simply to point out that I didn't decide "oh well, I'd like the game to become more serious as of now". For me, the game has always been serious to a certain degree, in the way that even though situations and characters can be absurd, they try to remain as credible as they can.
But comedy is still my way of conveying the story, and no changes have been decided or are planned for the rest of the game. My biggest hope his that the story and characters will make you laugh while being somewhat realistic (obviously, in a world where porn logic remains the king since it's first and foremost a porn game), as if you were living through your group of friends/family with Morgane, Anna, Elaine and Avar.

I'm not saying that's how you'll feel when you play the game, but that's the mentality I try to keep in mind with every update!

Anyway, I hope you'll give the game another go in a few updates, perhaps you'll enjoy the follow-up more my friend !

 

[Cunt Hunter69]

I read all of your feedbacks

How big is your hog?

 

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How big is your hog?

I didn't understand that but when in doubt I'll say average (high)